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Reviews for What A Girl Needs

By : SoutasSister
  • From ANON - Rawben on April 20, 2005
    yey!! it was a great chapter! and yes, it was as good as the first... but i'm not a writer. i'm a business major. so... there weren't very many grammatical mistakes! ;)

    i'm totally curious about kouga tho. is he gonna try to get kagome? or is he pissed/sad that she doesn't want him? will inu rip off sess' other arm when he finds out what sess wants? :P
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  • From ANON - Lizzy on April 19, 2005
    yup, Inuyasha does curse... ALOT! and I mean, alot. lol. I kinda like it actually, it gives his character some more flavor.
    Good second chapter, I cannot wait for more.
    (I also, have read all the manga and know the series up to date - so to speak)

    Love, Lizzy
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  • From ANON - Anvil on April 19, 2005
    Score. Inu-chan needs to get laaiid.
    Along with everybody else in this story.

    Yes--- even Kaede.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on April 19, 2005
    wow, you are like, the best writer ever! write more, write more! i'm DYING to know what happens
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  • From ANON - kades5 on April 19, 2005
    Ouch! Poor Inuyasha. Poor Kagome! Hm, I like this story. How long will it be before Inuyasha's resolve snaps and we find our loveable Inu chasing off everyone else. (Poor Wolf, and Poor puny human males.) I could see him planning ways to get Kagome alone. Will Miroku tell him about the whole conversation Kagome and Sango had? LOL! Miroku dancing around the well! Gotta love it. Please, please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - INUYASHA IS HOT LOL on April 19, 2005
    yaa u got the next chapter up ya i so cant waite to see what happends next post ASAP!!!!!
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  • From ANON - INUYASHA IS HOT LOL on April 19, 2005
    this is really good and i cant waite to read more of this interesting story plot update soon so i can find out what happends to inuyasha/kagome and what you have in store for san/mirko
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  • From ANON - Zincpaw on April 19, 2005
    Wow, that chapter just set up the whole story, didn't it? I can just imagine how it will play out. What fun! Ummm. the names for Kouga's buddies are Hakaku (the one with the mohawk), and Ginta (the one with black and white hair). The school friends are Ayumi (Curly haired one), Yuka (no hairband, I think) and Eri (hairband). There you go, instant names. Please do continue with the naxt chapter soon, but with the same amount of care that went into this one. I feel sorry for InuYasha, If only he heard the first part of the conversation. The rest of the story should prove to be entertaining indeed. I need to go now, Good-bye. Zincpaw
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  • From ANON - Anvil on April 19, 2005
    Ohgee--- you made me cry a little. Good job.
    Please do continue with this extraordinary slab
    of fictional meat. With Ketchup please./
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  • From ANON - queen bean on April 19, 2005
    wow! i really love your story so far! and you can actually spell, which makes for smoother reading. Anyway, i can't wait for the next chapter... please post soon!
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  • From ANON - Darkchimera on April 18, 2005
    Umm.. ya sorry if I accidentally sent a blank review. I just wanted to say great start and I can't wait to see what happens next. So please update soon!

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  • From ANON - KenYasha on April 18, 2005
    Wow! I am impressed! Now that is a beginning to a story that I feel will keep me addicted for a long, long time. I haven't read something as good as that for a long time, and this is only the 1st chapter!
    Great writing, great plot - please continue! I really look forward to read more of it!

    ... poor Inuyasha must have gotten a heart attack when he finally woke up to hear what Kagome did say ... whew ...
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 18, 2005
    Articulate, original, and intriguing. Please do not keep us waiting long for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on April 18, 2005
    Wow, that was an awful lot for a first chapter. It was really good. I hope you can continue this. And I am sooo relieved its an inu/kag :D
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker on April 18, 2005
    The story is looking good so far and it has a good plot. I am confident that the story will be just fine as long as you take your time on the story and don't rush it. If you have time, I would appreciate it if you would update the story eventually.

    Thanks Peacemaker
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