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Reviews for What A Girl Needs

By : SoutasSister
  • From inuficcrzy on October 22, 2005
    oh my god. sess has the book? (hahahahahah! whohooo!!!) rotfl!

    the look.................on his face............would be priceless.

    hilarious!

    and i hope kag returns soon. sess sounds p.o.'ed. will he harm her? and what about inu?

    please update again soon! this was awesome!
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  • From ANON - QueenTatooine on October 22, 2005
    I really have enjoyed reading what you have written so far. Your writing is well thought out and detailed.

    I heard one person recommend this story saying that it is the first well written and thought out story lines for the Inuyasha fanfiction that they have found in years. I have to agree with them, as time passes it becomes more and more difficult to find good Inuyasha fanfiction, you have done a wonderful thing with this.

    I am eager to learn what will happen next.

    ~QueenTatooine
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  • From ANON - DizzySweetDreams on October 22, 2005
    Love the story. I can see why you got that award *wink*.
    Inuyasha and Kagome are so dysfunctional right now, it's kind of humorous (in a twisted way). Sesshomaru is a bit ooc, but he's in love. I'll forgive him.
    Grammatically speaking, your story is perfect. Spelling errors and such can be a irritating after awhile.



    PS - a sex book? are you sure that's safe in the feudal era?
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  • From ANON - Alvida on October 22, 2005
    Just finished chapter 9.

    I love the parallel between Yuka and Houjou and Kagome and Inuyasha. It's especially good for getting Houjou out of the picture.

    I really enjoyed the sibling bonding time with Souta in an earlier chapter and then his awe at the barrier. I love what you've done with Souta. Jii-chan was good too.

    Saving the next chapter for later.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2005
    thanks for a great chapter, it is so fun to see inuyasha "thinking"

    I really like the Miruku/inu chats...very in character
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  • From ANON - inugirl2003 on October 21, 2005
    Yea! Wonderful as ever. I can' t wait for Inu to tell her and get the action going! I'll be checking up every day for a new posting :)
    BTW, my mom lives in the South and I really feel for ya'll down there. I lived in Gulf Shores for several years, and so curious how it all looks now. Good luck, we're all praying for ya!
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  • From ANON - Lynns on October 21, 2005
    This is a wonderful fan fic, and so realistic I might add. You have done an excellant job in writing it and I would love to know when you update again. My e-mail is inu_hugger@yahoo.ca
    Lynns
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  • From isilwath on October 21, 2005
    I very much like this story and I look forward to your next chapter. :) Be safe.
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  • From ANON - nina :D on October 21, 2005
    hmm testing....
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  • From ANON - DelKaidin on October 20, 2005
    WOW! I didn't think good stories with excellent plot, good characterization and well thought out character growth. You've done a lot to renew my faith in the fact that there are writers out there who can craft Inuyasha/Kagome stories. I'll be looking forward to your updates.

    Del.
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  • From ANON - Dominus on October 20, 2005
    Really great story so far..I am looking forward to later chapters and hope you can update soon!It would be terrible if you stopped writing this considering it's an awesome story!Hope to see the next chapter up soon.


    My Regards,
    Dominus
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  • From ANON - Kid ^_^ on October 20, 2005
    12:35 AM

    AAAAA!!! I love you!!! You put my in your mention of thanks list! That very well be the first time someone has mentioned me for reviewing and stuff. The first that I have seen, at least. Lovelove.

    Moving on. I was laughing so much at the parts with the "mating book." Ohhh...! So good. ^_^ Hilarious. Seriously. I had to muffle my giggles behind my hand. T'was quite torturous and horrible, laughing the way I was. I'm not sure if I said a few "oh my god!"'s in there, but in all likelihood, I probably did. I think they were in between several boutfuls of chuckles. Yes. They most definetly would have been. ^_^

    Anyway, still love the story, adore the author, and so on and so forth.

    Enjoy all the fun times.

    With lot's of lovelove,

    Kid ^_^

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  • From ANON - Alvida on October 19, 2005
    Your story is really well written and I'm really enjoying it. Right now I'm on chapter 4 and I do have a small quibble. I think when Kagome is explaining the contraceptive devices, unless I missed the part where Sango was reading Kagome's health ed book on the sly, to Sango that sperm and egg are a bit technical. I don't know what to suggest in lieu of egg but, like sperm, semen is visible to the naked eye.
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  • From ANON - battousai69 on October 19, 2005
    I love this story. The fact that Sess picked up the book and is mad he has to wait for an explanation is awesome. I look forward to the next chapter.

    Good luck with hurricane Wilma hopefully all will come out unscathed.
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  • From ANON - DEEP SERENITY on October 19, 2005
    EXCELLENT long chapter! Love all the interaction scenes love how you didn't make Kikyo a villian(she not , just tragic) loved everything seriously. Very good writing and story line. Keep going the way you are! LOL at Sess he's mad about the book! LOL great great great

    get well, and be safe
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