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Reviews for What A Girl Needs

By : SoutasSister
  • From ANON - lazzykane on October 05, 2005
    "congrats you deseve it !!!!"
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  • From ANON - Bethy-kun (Not signed in) on September 19, 2005
    Well, I must say that this lovely piece of adult fan fiction definitely deserves a review from me- I enjoyed reading all nine, current chapters, of this story, even sat on the edge of my chair through most of it, and I must admit that you have pure talent! Your descriptions- wonderful! The characters themselves- absolutely fantastic! Your writing is so fluid and gripping; was it you who said this was your first story? Well, if it was, then, wow! You have great potential to become a true author! I asolutely can't wait until you update with chapter ten, for I am looking so forward to reading it. Keep up the good work!

    Until your next update...

    Adios!

    Chow for now,
    Liz (Bethy-kun)
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on September 16, 2005
    excellent long chap! congrats on the grandbaby! and i love everything about your story, please continue as you see fit, it's your story to share.

    and I voted for you! anyway good job until next time
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  • From ANON - DragonsLore on September 16, 2005
    WOW! My sister told me about your story and how good it was and how I had to come and read it, she was right it is amazing! Please try to get your next chapter out sooner than expected, I'm completely hooked! I love your writing style, and the plot, and all of the little quirks. I was giggling so much during the last few chapters. And the length of the last few chapters was wonderful, I was so happy that they were so long. I wish you luck in writing. Congrats on your new grandson and I'm glad all of you are OK.
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  • From ANON - Takhisis on September 15, 2005
    congratulations os your story!!!!

    I read the first paragraphs a week ago, or so, and thought it looked good, so I bookmarked it. Yersteday I started to read the first chapter... and didn't stop until I got to the very end of chapter 9!!! It took me almost eight hours!!! at one piont I was so tired of sitting at the computer that I printed the whole story and took it to bed with me! :D

    I really like your plot :) In most fics I read, all the characters act like ten-year-olds, reacting unnaturally to most situations. I like the way you make kagome think... doesn't that happen too often? try to forget one man by going to bed with another... we should already know it DOESN'T work! :D still it happens...

    Plus I thin your writing is wonderful... fluent, easy to read... perfect!

    Now I can't wait for your next update, hope it will be soon!! I'm glad your daughter's pregnancy ended well even if it was a difficult, and I hope you will enjoy with your new grandson... but please don't abandon us! ;)

    Greetings from spain!! :)
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  • From ANON - kashudoreineko on September 14, 2005
    I need more. WAH! You have to write more!!!!!
    Story so good. neeed morre!
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  • From ANON - Sayanna The Rover on September 14, 2005
    YES!!!! YOu updated!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job, as usual...this one seemed much less ....rushed....than the last; definitely worth the wait. However 9_9 ::shippou eyes:: don't delay if you can, ne? You're right about loving the story when impatient....so...let me admit I'm very, VERY impatient for your next kami-sent update!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - fallenangel7583~NSI on September 13, 2005
    great chapter!!! very well done! i'm happy to see Sesshiles brought kouga back and man is that gonna be a slap in the face to everyone when they ALL realize he's been trying to help get inu and kagome together. man, he's quickly adding himself onto peoples shit lists over misunderstandings. LOL. i don't have a good feeling about Kagome being gone from the shrine. can't be good...not at all!! damn. great chapter! keep it up! i'm glad that all is well with your family from new orleans. such a trajedy. i'm glad you got to see it again, i've never gotten the chance. god bless!
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  • From ANON - whrileeq on September 13, 2005
    What a beautiful story you are telling here... I absolutely love your portrayal of the characters and their misconceptions with each other. I don't normally read Inu/Kag fiction because it is usually the same story rehashed over and over, lacking originality... yours is refreshingly different. That being said, the only thing that squicks me is the sess/rin pairing... on so very many levels... but then again, who am I to talk? I routine pair Sess with people like Miroku! :)

    All in all, bravo, great job, and update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - srg1 on September 13, 2005
    This story is great!! I can't to read what happens next!!!!! You're a fantastic writer, you portary the characters perfectly.
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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on September 12, 2005
    Another superb chapter! I'm eagerly awaiting more, and ducking because I'm SO late on updating myself. Glad to hear that all is good with the rest of your universe- and yes, you're handling the characterizations beautifully. No justifications needed!

    So..... keep up the wonderfulness and I'm champing at the bit for more!
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  • From Angelica on September 12, 2005
    "Angelicas everywhere agree that 'What A Girl Needs' is one of the season's best romances!"

    I noticed another Angelica rec'd you, and I couldn't resist. ^_^

    I just wanted to drop a line and say that I *LOVED* the new chapter. I'll fill you in on my going MIA and give you my standard overly involved feedback. And congrats on the awards!! I'm massively proud on your behalf. : does a dance :
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  • From ANON - kiotana on September 12, 2005
    this took me a whole day to read! its awesome but very long to read. i skipped a few parts even to get back to inuyasha or kagomes places. plz update soon!
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker on September 12, 2005
    Ch.9 was just what I was looking for. It had a great amount of detail and characterization. The amount of detail is just fine in my opinion so don't worry to much about it; it helps keep me in tune with the story. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - lazzykane on September 12, 2005
    I just about givin up on you... i have waited forever for you to update this story ...i can see why you have won awards i always chech on this story when i check on any site because i can't wait ..please update soon and e-mail me..
    from your devoted fan
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