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By : SoutasSister

From ANON - Sophia Layton on April 15, 2011
Is the story over, or have you just not updated in awhile?

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From Reymond on October 24, 2007
If you are no more interested in writing the story, could you PLEASE put some sentences to explain how you had seen the end of it in your head. I would be very glad, HAPPY about it !!!!!

Thank you for your wonderful story !

A french mommy and reader,
Bonjour de la France

Merely Truth
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From LousMe on April 15, 2007
Wow! I loved this chapter! As the saying goes: good things comes to those that wait. Although it is most definately worth waiting for, please don't keep us waiting for too long - I await the next chapter(s) with great anticipation!!!!
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From ANON - jedicarl on March 29, 2007
keep up the good work
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From Reymond on March 05, 2007
Hello ! I found your story very, very good. The thoughts are so very well described, and tasting mmmmm !!!!!!!
When I saw you've updated in January, I was so glad. Yet I hope that you will continue : nothing for the moment, but I wait with all my patience, I'm sure you will update some time... Good luck to manage your time (like for all of us !) and thank you for your wonderful story !

A french mother and reader,

Bon courage !

Merely Truth
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From ANON - Lous_Me on January 12, 2007
Welcome back! All I can say is that it was well worth the wait! Glad you have managed to get yourself settled. It really is a hellish task; trying to find a place and then to get successfully moved in! I absolutely love your fic! As ever, the quality of the writing is excellent and the plotline is truly superb. I eagerly await the next installment - keep it up!
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From ANON - srg1 on January 09, 2007
This was great!!!!!!!! Just a fantastic piece of writing!!!!!!!!!! I have so many favorite parts that its hard to list them all!!!!!!!!! But here are some of the ones I love.

1. He looked ridiculous striking that I-am-taiyoukai-and-you-must-fear-me pose. She bit the inside of her lips to keep her laughter in. She forgot why she wanted to yell at him and his poor little singed ear.

2. Sesshoumaru was enraged yet again by the impertinent miko. She would not be cowed! She had the gall to mock him! Pointing out that he�d lost his moko-moko due to her successful attack. It was insulting. If she hadn�t been so successful in her attack, he might have killed her on the spot. He forcefully reminded himself that Rin�s safety was his ultimate goal, no matter what he must endure to ensure it.

3. �Besides,� he thought to himself, �the miko has the means to prevent human conception and pregnancy. Rin need not have children before six years have passed if I change my mind later.� He didn�t share that thought with Kagome.

4. Sesshoumaru stopped speaking mid-sentence and, as Kagome glanced at him, she thought his eyes seemed to light up in anticipation, almost gleefully if such a thing was possible.

5. �Take her and run, dog-breath! Don�t let your bastard brother have her!�

6. Miroku looked back at Kouga, his eyebrows lowering in renewed anger. Yes, he was looking for a fight! He was going to murder the wolf here and now, not only for himself but for Inuyasha too. Gods, he never felt more empathy for his hanyou friend than he had in the last few moments since Kouga turned his eyes to Sango.

7. Why?� he wondered. Why do women protect �poor Kouga� like that? Why did Kagome use the subduing spell on Inuyasha when the wolf came around? Why did Sango suddenly defend the wolf after years of indifference? Why? What secret did the youkai have that turned every woman into his champion?

Miroku wanted that secret. He needed that secret. He wanted to use the secret on Sango so she�d look at him with those big eyes of hers that projected sympathy and something else at the wolf just now. He�d have to force the secret out of Kouga before he killed the youkai.

8. Apparently, Sesshoumaru had also checked to make sure Inuyasha had everything he needed for a proper mating, and supplied whatever was lacking. In this case, he�d left one dagger suitable for creating a barrier so that anyone inside the barrier could have privacy and be safe from interruption. How nice of him. She might have thought it romantic if she didn�t know the real reasons behind Sesshoumaru�s thoughtfulness. He was making sure no one could bother her and Inuyasha when they mated as Sesshoumaru decreed they would. The jerk.

There are others, but these I feel are some of the best. I loved this chapter a lot, its the best, full of humor and drama. I can't wait for the next chapter, and I know I'll be reading this chapter over and over. Again, your story is the greatest, thank you for it.
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From ANON - two step on January 08, 2007
I thought it was a very good lemon especially since they were both virgins. Totally hot. Keep writing and try not to repeat so much; going into long explanations, other then that ur doing fine.
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From ANON - Sayanna The Rover on January 08, 2007
Simply wonderful...Both tenderly realistic, and indescribably sweet ^_^
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From ANON - AnimeFanInuYasha on January 07, 2007
WAYOOOOO!!!!!!! I'm an InuKag lemon FAN!!!!!!!! (or just regular story fan)!!! Please do not think I am a pervert like Miroku....trust me no one could go that far. Anyway, great story. I personaly liked chapter 15. *wink* *wink*. Ok yeah, that was a Miroku moment. (ewwww)Hey do you think you could make a sequel to this? If you can...PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!!!! INUKAG FOREVER!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Inugirl33 on January 06, 2007
I loved chapter 14!! It had so much feeling into it! There frist time together was awsome! I can not wait to see what more you have planned for them! Keep up the excellent work ^_^
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From ANON - Snowfall on January 05, 2007
This is great. Except for the occasional interruption, I read the last few chapters clean through because I couldn't stop. I loved the manipulative, yet murderous Sesshoumaru. Very, very plausible. That was just too much fun. It was great when Kagome blasted the hell out of him. He deserved it if for no other reason than to punish Sesshoumaru for torturing Inuyasha. But, I guess it did help him to achieve the goal...I think. Wouldn't I love to be Rin! (eh, bunny trails) Sesshoumaru really is smart, gathering his allies and making them have an honor debt to him. But, everything that he is doing know makes one wonder whether or not he disowned Inuyasha. That's such a mystery, and I'm babbling... His treatment of Shippou and the results, Shippou exposing his true self was great. And that event was very heartwarming. It will be interesting to see how Shippou does in battle now, especially after he is trained. He should do really well.

And, Inuyasha and Kagome are going to need to learn to trust each other a bit more if they are going to confront someone as devious as Naraku. The approach/avoidance issue was very well done, and I love your idea of having Inuyasha attempting to do everything right to satisfy Kagome. I'm so glad that he didn't screw it up when he decided that he was going to immediately mate her at the hotspring. Oh, Sessshoumaru leaving the dagger was so funny! All of the near misses with those two were very amusing and a nice build up. The well incident was very amusing. Poor Inuyasha, just couldn't pick a private place.

I just love your depiction of Kouga. He is honorable, just a bit...off. LOL Poor little wolf cub. I feel sorry for Sango now too. She's really in for it. And poor Miroku is going to finally feel what Inuyasha did and perhaps he will be a bit ashamed of his responses to the interactions between Kouga, Kagome, and Inuyasha.

LOL Shippou and Inuyasha conniving together was great, a familial type thing. I loved Shippou helping out Inuyasha. Those two really do care about each other.

Oh, I really want to know if those hair combs were a family heirloom or if they were just something that Sesshoumaru gave to them. That whole thing with Myoga was well done. I loved the part where Sesshoumaru first addresses Myoga, LOL, to Myoga sweating it out at the cave. That was great.

I just loved the whole gag with the book and then ending it there in the lemon had great effect.

You've done a wonderful job here, not only with the story, but with your writing skill. Your characters are very IC. Thanks for that one. I know that I haven't covered everything. But, I've done the best that I can. Keep up the good work!

Snow

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From ANON - gracemis on January 05, 2007
A wonderful wonderful chapter. The lemon was a very realistic first time lemon with alot of love and trust and affection. thank you so much for sharing this great story.
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From ANON - Snowfall on January 05, 2007
OMG!

"This was the last time she would be late in returning from her mysterious time. This was the last time she would miss an appointment with him. This was the last time he would be made to wait for an explanation of the strange writing that accompanied the pictures in the mating book."

I was just catching up and had to tell you that I laughed out loud at that one. Seriously. On to more chapters!

Snow
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From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2007
lol
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