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Reviews for Scream

By : Dunkelgelb
  • From ANON - blacknoise on July 03, 2005
    Oh. Wow. That was hella hot. HELLA hot. Great work.
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  • From ANON - Shard on July 01, 2005
    Wow is about all I can say about that. I hope you plan on continuing this one, it's great!!
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  • From ANON - Inu-midoriko on June 28, 2005
    Yo,
    I love this story, it's so incredibly awsome. plz plz plz make another kagura/sesshomaru story.
    this one was so fucking good.
    love ya

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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2005
    Really REALLY AWESOME.
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  • From ANON - YoukaiMusashi (too lazy to sign in) on June 15, 2005
    Awesome. I LOVE this pairing, I worship Kagura and Sesshoumaru is beyond cool, beyond hot, and you portrayed them both wonderfully and IC. Hot, steamy, and sweet but never OOC, which is something most writers tend to do, especially when writing about Sesshoumaru. I had given up looking for fics featuring this pairing that I adore because the OOC just discouraged me. You have proven me wrong! I'm adding this to my rec readings, if you don't mind. This Youkai Musashi bows to thy.

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  • From ANON - BCross on June 15, 2005
    This was supremely excellent work of literacure. I find no errors in it what so ever, only that it should continue on as a series perhaps. I rate this with the best, and will recommend it to everyone I know.

    BCross
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  • From stetsuntam on June 13, 2005
    Sorry, Battlefield 1542.
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  • From stetsuntam on June 13, 2005
    I enjoyed this so very much. Thank you. I love lemons and Sesshoumaru and Kagura are such a neglected and underrated couple. For a first time you did very well--I'm very impressed. I wish you luck in further writings (yes, I'll be sure to check out Battlefield 1545).
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  • From ANON - Isuzu Emi on June 10, 2005

    I have read a lot of "adult" fanfiction, and this has to be, without a shadow of a doubt, one of the best pieces I have ever read: everyone who is going to write a lemon, or indeed any type of fanfiction, should read this.

    I really enjoyed your characterisation: it was not only "in character" but consistent. Inconsistency of characterisation within a Fic rather than actual OOC-ness (something I feel inevitable anyway due to subjective interpretation of all characters) is one of the largely unrecognised, yet endemic, problems in the Fanfic community today and it was refreshing to read something which didn't chop and change in such a manner.

    Moreover, your description in the opening scenes and throughout was simply flawless; writing to capture a feeling such as that of movement convincingly is something that requires a certain amount of talent and you were certainly convincing in your descriptions. It was simply the whole tone and effect of the Fic which was so wonderfully complete. I really, really enjoyed this story: finally some adult fanfiction in every sense of the word!

    P.S. slightly OT, but, I could tell you were a boy when I read this - although I'm not :P - recognised some of the... erm... "themes" from more realistic "works" which female writers don't usually pick up on - almost had to start playing some funk at one point! ;)
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  • From ANON - Kira-chan on June 09, 2005
    This was amazing! The lemon was awesome, and the story was really sweet! This couple doesn't have enough stories about them, but yours would shine even if they were the most written about pairing in all of fanfictiondom (pardon my making-up-of-words-ness...).
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  • From ANON - MistressKagome4U on June 06, 2005
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    Wow... completly... wow... im... speechless... i want more.. please write more... i love you... please write more... i crave it like Seshomaru craves his desirable wind mate...
    Im begging for more.....

    MistressKagome4U
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2005
    hmm...nice
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2005
    HOT
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  • From ANON - no name for now on May 14, 2005
    Wow... Seriously, that's the hottest lemon story that ever read in my life. I swear to god it is. Wow...
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  • From ANON - FOX on April 30, 2005
    I'm obsess with Sesshomaru and Kagura pairing the story is one of the BEST the BEST the BEST the BEST that i have read i hope that you write more SOON.
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