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Reviews for Scream

By : Dunkelgelb
  • From ANON - Piggi on April 24, 2005
    I want to applaude your talent. I truely think ucaptured the essence of this realtionship. Although there are many Rin/Sess fics, it seems that the ppl are forgetting that its not possible. There are sites with rock hard edvidence that proves that Sess was suppose to be wit Kagura. But that is not wat i want to tell you. I want to thanks for a job done to well. I love the way you stuck to there character. Unlike most kagu/sess stories, you understood there personality and created something that seemed so fitting. There is no words that i can give to show my gratitude. Thank you doesn't seem enough. But i have another question, would you be sticking to the manga? I bet you have already heard that Kagura was killed off before the series ended. Right? These are jux questions that have been swimming around my head for sometime now, you can answer them or not. That is all i wanted to say. And once again, Thank you...

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  • From ANON - anon on April 22, 2005
    wow. just- wow. this is probably one of the hottest fics i have ever read ever. i'd LOVE to see this story continued, but i dont know how it could possibly be topped! excellent, excellent work.
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  • From SpecialistMoron9 on April 21, 2005
    Impressive, particularly on description. Plus, it's nice to see someone do a different pairing for once.
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  • From ANON - Diane on April 21, 2005
    Well as far as I'm concerned you do lemons quite well. You did strike one of my pet peeves though, the past tense of thrust is still thrust there is no thrusted.
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  • From botticelliangel on April 20, 2005
    I like this story, you portray their relationship in a very intersting light. however i kept going back and forth from thinking 'wow this is really awsome description' to thinking 'cheezy porn' thats no offence to you but really i laughed when you described sesshomaru's not so mini sessh. it was good comidic relief in the middle of such an intense peice... even if it wasn't meant to be. you have talent and i hope we will see more of your work soon ^-^.
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  • From ANON - Zelix (Not signed in) on April 20, 2005
    Whoa... wow... habba-habba.... *blushes*... Now THAT was one KICK ASS lemon story, this was simply put.... a pure work of art, a masterpiece, Mona Lisa... whatever you want to call it, it was simply PERFECT. I just love Kagura, she is one of my favourite characters in Inuyasha, just like Ayame. Even though i am a pretty strict Inuyasha/Kagome fan, it is good to read something like this between Kagura and Sesshoumaru, you don't see these kinds of stories often which is a shame because those two are so made for each other if you ask me.

    Anyway, i loved this fic, REALLY good lemon and coming from me that's a LOT since i've read so many different kinds of lemons and i've written a couple myself and not to mention i have the title "God of Lemons", so i can say with all honesty that this is something you should treasure, this level of talent in writing a lemon even made ME envious.... oh boy, i am also a boy like you so i don't know what a woman feels during sex but after reading this, oh boy, let's just say that my 'little brother' (LOL) is rather hard right now and i am actually sweating too...

    I salute you and give my full respect to your Lemon skills, you're freaking awesome and i MEAN it, keep writing, you rock.


    Oh yeah, if you're ever puzzled on why i hold the title "God of Lemons", feel free to check out my stories as well, i have three epic fics and i also have two fics which are composed of a series of One-shots, then there is my LONGEST one-shot "Loneliness of the Free Wind", it's my first completed fic and it's about Kagura as well, though she is paired with an OC of mine, i have received nothing but positive feedback about my OC... in fact, my OC could have been nominated to Inuyasha fanguild's "Best OC" section but because the story is old and was not published during the year 2005, it was rejected...

    Anyway, if you're ever interested, feel free to stop by and read my fics, if you don't know how to use the search here on AFF.net, Email me and i'll send you the link since i'm also an author here.

    Man, this is the longest review i've written in a while, hopefully you aren't offended by my little... 'advertisement' above but i really would like to hear your opinnion on my stories as well because you have such a high level of skill...

    see ya!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on April 20, 2005
    All I have to say is WOW!!!! This story is steaming good and if only I could have that chance with Sesshomaru I would love it too... I wonder what Naraku will say and do about Kagura and Sesshomaru's mating....Definitely needs another chapter. Really good hot streamy fic... I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - inusgirl on April 20, 2005
    Wow! I would just like to say that was the most incredible Kagura and Sesshomaru pairing I have ever read! Congrats on your excellent writing and the wonderfully detailed description of their joining! This has been one of the better stories that I have read! Thanks again for writing such a magnificent piece of work!
    Inusgirl
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2005
    nice, maybe you could do a second chapter with Inuyasha and Kagome?
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  • From XYZ on April 19, 2005
    Oh my god! I can't believe how hot this is. I love Sesshoumaru/Kagura pairings. Very nicely done. You added a deeper meaning to the simple act of Sesshoumaru seeking his release and Kagura wishing for some hope. It's a great story, and even though you already said it is a one-shot, I would love to see what would happen next. How will Kagura escape Naraku, and what will become of their pup? Please write more.
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  • From ANON - ghettoside_gangsta on April 19, 2005
    All I can say is wow. That had to be the longest and most elaborately written lemon I have ever read. It was awsome! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2005
    whoa! very good! and...damn! quite a lemon! although all i could think about is how much i wanted sess to go find naraku and take back kagura's heart...
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