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Reviews for Let Me Be Your Downfall

By : Aubs
  • From XxSangoxX on August 16, 2006
    pretty cool. I like the lemon! it's dignified.

    That's how i like to do mine too, not too overly...
    um, cliche, not too metaphorical, and definitely not
    'ghetto' or wranchy. . . but still gets the point
    across...

    Hope to read more stories from you soon!

    just a clue though, you might want to reiderate some
    of the words you use... example being... you say breath when
    i think.. i'm pretty sure you mean BreathE other than that
    this is nicely written. But a writer's editing is never
    really done is it. lol
    I hope you'll check out some of my stories and comment
    me as well! I'm sure you will like them if this is the kind
    of lemon you enjoy.
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  • From ANON - ldymoonluvsinuyasha (not logged in) on June 23, 2005
    Wow, it was like reading a harlaquin romance. I loved it. I just wanted to let you know too, that I was actually afraid to put up my work as well. My first Inuyasha fanfic was Desires of the heart. My friend was like, dang girl, put that story up. Again, I didn't listen but I wrote another one called Love Only Me and she nearly pounded me in my head and demanded that I find a web site to post my stories. Then I found this one. I felt comfotable and I gave it a try. So, I understand what you mean by being nervous. But, keep writing kay.
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  • From ANON - snowfall on April 27, 2005
    Chapter Three: I swear I had tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat. That's what you wanted, right? Job well done!

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - snowfall on April 27, 2005
    Chapter Two: That was so romantic. I enjoyed it very very much.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - snowfall on April 27, 2005
    Chapter One:

    Wow. The angst is tremendous. Aside from a few easily corrected errors, you have excellent writing skills. He went back. Yay! Oh, I hope it wasn't a dream. On to chapter two.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - pinkstockings on April 26, 2005
    Oh! That just made me happy! A good feeling deep inside my chest.
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  • From ANON - Kat on April 25, 2005
    You didn't disappoint a bit with the lemon!!! It was WONDERFUL!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on April 25, 2005
    I LOVED IT! PLZ FINISH IT I EVEN SAVED IT ON MY INUYASHA STORYS FILE I ONLY PUT MY FAVS IN IT! GREAT STORY MY MOUTH WAS VERY DRY AFTER READING THIS!
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  • From ANON - Lizzy on April 25, 2005
    I loved it. Very ... poetic in a sort of ways.
    I'll be waiting for chapter three!
    ^-^ Lizzy-chan~
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  • From fallenangel7583 on April 24, 2005
    very interesting. i like it. no words needed, just comfort. very kawaii!! keep it up great story!!!
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  • From ANON - catseye on April 24, 2005
    Well, Im glad you put the story up again, cuz I didnt see if before and I liked it. So, you said you had more ?
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  • From ANON - IamReven on April 24, 2005
    I LOVE IT!! I completely agree about this song being perfect for Inuyasha and Kagome. I've been a devoted Matchbox Twenty fan for years, but had never really thought about Inu and Kags in that context. I,m glad you reposted this. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on April 24, 2005
    this was your first? you did very well. it is well written and constructed. hope you finish it, will be looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Kat on April 23, 2005
    WOW!!!! It's VERY good!!!! PLEASE update tomorrow!!!! :)
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on April 23, 2005
    You have a very nice writing style. Not as tight as the potential shows, but still, nice. Not a fan of songfics. But nice incorperation. Forgive the spelling errors, I don't have a spell check.


    Matthew.
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