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Reviews for Seeing Double

By : Kyattochan
  • From ANON - Anon on July 06, 2005
    luved it. hope u do more one shots likethis one.
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  • From ANON - chrissy on June 20, 2005
    I would really like to read more on this story so if you could wright some more chapters I would like that a lot
    thanks chrissy







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  • From ANON - Whispering Angel on June 15, 2005
    WOW....that was a great one-shot! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - makulu on May 08, 2005
    Great, like always. A really good one-shot but has certainly potential for more, if you should decide to write some other chapters. I liked Kikyou in this fic, it´s a nice change to put her on good terms with Kags. Inu was just hot (love the husky voice part). Kagome is a lucky girl!!
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  • From ANON - sweetkokonuts on May 08, 2005
    OH MAN THIS STORY IS THE SHIZZLE!!!
    I LOVE HOW YOU HAD KAG AND KIK SISTERS
    ITS KOOD THAT THEYRE NICE TO EACH OTHER
    IT HELPS THE STORY ALON
    ANYWAYS
    CANT WAIT TILL YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY
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  • From ANON - MME on May 07, 2005
    are you going to continue this? i'd love it if you would!!
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  • From ANON - mia on May 07, 2005
    great story!! The characters do come on a little strong though but you must update!!! i won't be sleeping for nights over this!!!!! you must UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From on April 30, 2005
    Chapter One:

    Pant, pant, pant. That was so fucking hot! As always, awesome job. Can't wait for the next one!

    Are finals over? Hope all is well over there.

    Thanks,

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2005
    Really good, but wouldn't they have been wearing g-strings?
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  • From ANON - Cyperian on April 25, 2005
    Good spelling and grammar, as well as writing style. The plotline is innovative and intriguing - you certainly could make this into a chapter story quite easily. I do have a bone to pick about facts, though. Typically, people should either write what they know or research the topics. While you were for the most part accurate and convincing, there is no way any scene can be done in one take, much less a love scene. It's not about the performance of the actors, it's a matter of lighting. First, they do one take with the lighting set up for one actor, and then they reset the stage for a second take focusing on the other. Rinse and repeat for each additional actor. Not to mention that they move the cameras: for instance on one take they'll have a zoom in from angle A, and then in the second take they'll zoom out from angle A. If you were looking to extend the story, you might want to incorporate this into your story. But otherwise, great job and I look forward to your next fic.
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  • From ANON - frostyshake on April 25, 2005
    Oh WOW!!!! Boy did I love this story. I know it's just a one-shot, and a terrific one at that,but this would make an awesome story.
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  • From ANON - WOW on April 24, 2005
    ohmygod!! you just have to make a second chapter for this, please! this is amazing, i got goosebumps all over my body and that has only happened once before. and that was almost 3 years ago! oh please write a second chapter, please!!!! i know you said one-shot but please?!?
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  • From ANON - Celestial Fox on April 24, 2005
    Jesus Christ! That was soo good! I never thought anyone could do this scene without sounding unrealistic but....but you blew me away. I hope, by the end of this fic, Inuyasha will have her pregnant and marked or expecting their second child! Wow.

    Hmnnn...everything about this fic seems so realistic and you portrayed a pregnant women quite well. Considering that I had to deal with my mother's constant rambling about nothing in particular and her weird mood swings for 18 months.

    Yeah two kids. I'm the second oldest! And third from being the youngest.

    But she didn't have a weird craving for grape juice and cheese slices. It was watermelon (that normally gets her constipated) and liver. It got to the point where I couldn't eat with her without turning green!

    Anyways, please, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - sarah on April 24, 2005
    i know you set this up to be a one of deal but the way you left it would be a good way to start a full lengh story. which would be something i would quite like to read
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  • From ANON - Eiko on April 24, 2005
    OMG!! miroku made a porno flick and didn't even know it ^_^ i know you said one shot, but PLEASE just give a little more ^_^ your a great writer
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