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Reviews for What will you do now Inuyasha?

By : ANGELA0970
  • From ANON - dd on September 08, 2005
    I read both chapters, they are really good. Why did you stop writing? You have a good story here to finish telling. Are you going to write more?
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  • From ANON - mikotiko on May 05, 2005
    Why?! why are your chapters so small? it's a good story line to be sure, but your chapters are minor and short! try to write longer chapters! sorry for my impudent manner, i have no means of offending! but i do like your story so far! keep writing! update soon i will be looking forward to it! ~.^
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  • From ANON - Deadsea on May 05, 2005
    good story! u have to keep writing!!!! update soon! must kno wat happens to them!! AHHHH!! PLEASE!!! *begs* plz update soon! ok well good story again! bye!!
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  • From SirenicSprite on April 27, 2005
    Actually, you're story isn't half bad! Even though I'm doing a story with Kagome and Inuyasha, I'm not a kagome fan. I have always liked kikyo a little more, because she isn't so whiny. But, that's personal preference. As for the length of your story, I would suggest writing at least 5 or 6 pages in microsoft word. That's how long mine was, and it's still only considered medium length (frustrating). I'll look for more.
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on April 26, 2005
    Why are authors on AFF content to write shorts. This is a good form. A good story idea. Yet poorly executed, simply because it ends on in a terrible manner. I like what I read, but it's not nearly enough. I'll keep reading, it does interest me, but with chapters this short, my attention to it is sure to be fleeting.
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