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Reviews for Something Real

By : Angelica
  • From ANON - black_talsiman13 on April 29, 2005
    you know, I admire you, I really do. There aren't many authors who put so much thoughts in the characters, and you did that in every single way, it's incredible. Only for that you are already an incredible author. Not to mention your story. I didn't care how long it was, heck, I read your story till I was finished at 1.30 in the morning! I couldn't stop, and normally I don't have that much of a problem to stop reading and continue the next day, but with your story that wasn't possible.
    Also, I absolutely loved how you pictured Inuyasha. Many seem to forget the fact, that as a hanyou, you aren't exactly loved by anyone. But you took this for your advantage, and it made perfect sense.
    Kagome, too. She would be the one to help Inuyasha where she can.
    As for a sequel, hell yes, I would highly suggest this! You could even make a story of it, in my opinion. I would love to see Kagomes fears now, how everything will change, if it will, how now Inuyasha would have to help Kagome with her fears.
    You're an amazing author, and you should really continue with your great work! Don't hide any of them on your computer and just post them!
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  • From ANON - HMPrune on April 28, 2005
    Wow! This is an amazing story - you feel for poor Inuyasha, you 'get' why Kagome does what she does, and at the end, they both get what they want. I'm glad that they didn't go all the way - it wouldn't have suited the main point of your story. You are a wonderful writer - I hope that you have your work on more than one site, to give it the maximum exposure that it deserves. I'm grateful to DQBunny (another wonderful writer - it's nice that she is in your corner) for pushing you to publish this piece. I look forward to more from you - and yes, a sequel would be nice.
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  • From SirenicSprite on April 28, 2005
    Hmmm....That's a good idea! I might have to adopt it. I have gotten a lot of argument on my fic....hmmm
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  • From Angelica on April 28, 2005
    Sirenic Sprite: ^_~ No one insulted me, so no confusion. I honestly always have an editorial for my fics (I write in another fandom under a different alias). I tend to take the characters on whatever fandom I write to new places emotionally and as such I get lots of the same questions. It's much easier (and keeps me saner) to simply write up the thought process I go through while writing each fic and try to guess what the issues will be. That way if someone STILL disagrees with me, they can come to battle well-armed. I do so love C&C when it's articulate.
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  • From ANON - silvermoon on April 28, 2005
    This was an absolutely woundeful story! It's one of the best i've read in a long time. Please consider continuing it!!
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  • From ANON - Nick F. on April 28, 2005
    Hey there. Great story and explanation. I'd love to see a sequel, though, since there are still emotional issue that Kag and Inu have to deal with.
    Does he still love Kikyou? Now that he share something very special with Kagome, will his obligation to the dead miko change? I think Kagome should be repaid with something, more kindness at least, for willing to heal Inuyasha without thinking much about herself.
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  • From SirenicSprite on April 28, 2005
    I just came back to see how many more reviews you collected for your story, and saw you posted a second chapter. I read your editorial, and I'm slightly confused. Who was that for? I don't recall any one saying anything bad about your fic....?????????
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  • From ANON - nabikineum on April 28, 2005
    I just want to say: GO Angelina! I loved your justification, and I liked the story. Ptui on those who gave you crap, if any. You see it as likely, and it's just as likely as a lot of stuff I've seen (on this and other sites, and about this and other shows/comics/whatever). Your written defense was great, and frankly, I agree with most every word.
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  • From ANON - Thorns on April 28, 2005
    This has to be one of the most well written fanfiction stories I've come across, and I've read... ALOOOOOT, very realistic like in the human psyche of emotions and such. and with the exact right amount of discription that you understood perfectly, without falling asleep, but also didn't jump from one point to another like alot of fics that go - They snog, have a quick shy factor, then decide to hump like rabbits with shooting stars everywhere. - It was well written, realistic, interesting and it flowed, everything needed for a great story that's enjoyable to read.
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  • From SirenicSprite on April 28, 2005
    I can't believe this hasn't gotten more reviews! I don't think people understand how important each review is, and how they alter your confidence. I posted a challenge, then answered my own challenge, so it's kind of awkward for me. It's hard to read each story, and write a story with similar content, without seeming like I stole someone elses ideas. But, it was my challenge, so I'm going to read every author's answer to it. I think this was very good. In this challenge, it's pretty hard to judge whether or not a character is OC, unless it's extremely over the top. You can't be too critical when the characters were never presented in this light before. As for your story... I think you did a good job at portraying them realistically for the most part. There were some areas I thought were a little OC, or unrealistic, like the number of orgasms and how her first time was oh so pleasureable, but that's just my own ideas. I really think you did them a justice. Good job!
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  • From ANON - tornadotrail on April 28, 2005
    AHHHH!! How could you just leave it at that. O wow that was HOT! Please do a follow-up on this, I have to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - hinshihoushi on April 28, 2005
    Very well written. Hope to see more from you. I think I would liked to have seen if they went back to their "norm" and how the villagers were dealt with in the morning. Although I know it is a one=shot and you had to cut it somewhere.
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