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By : Angelica

From ANON - demonqueen on July 10, 2005
I read you story and thought that it was very interesting. What Inuyasha is experiencing is a lot like what the mutants(X-men) in the Marvel Comics world have experienced. Yes, its fear,and prejedic(spelling?),and dislike of racial mix-marriages,etc. But its mostly fear. Fear of the way they look,fear of the power(s) they have,etc. Unfortunately, some of these feelings are present in our world still. My brother knew and worked with a young man who was badly disfigured from being burned in a car wreck. No one at work would talk to him or sit with him at lunchtime,etc. Only my brother would talk to him,etc. My brother said that people were sometimes silly this way. You need to look past what you see and discover the person within. Anyway, good story.
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From ANON - AnimeGurl on July 05, 2005
I absolutely love your story. I like you emotional details, it really helps the reader get inside the character's head. Are you continuing this story or is it just a one-shot? If you're continuing it please update soon!
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From ANON - aleaha on July 04, 2005
8 days huh? you know lots of people post other peoples work on ff.net specialy in this fandom. Well aside from that, you story was very very um yeah it was very good (never now how to express myself with this type of story) Um I think you got my vote, but the nominations are not done just yet. There's still more to read.
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From ANON - Me-Anne on July 04, 2005
Man! That was HOT! I want a sequel, now please please..... oh wait after a take a cold shower. ^__^
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From ANON - deeceekaye on July 04, 2005
I loved your story. I think you did a marvalous job of keeping Inuyasha and Kagome in character, while allowing them to grow. It really bothers me when readers complain about characters being OOC when all the author has done is give them room to grow. The only thing that needs to stay the same about the character are their reasons for doing something. We can all do things that are out of character if the motive is strong enough. I hope you write a sequal some day.
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From EMiller152 on July 02, 2005
Oh, man, where do I start? This is a beautiful, moving, well thought-out, erotic, and at times very funny story. As I was reading it, it became more and more obvious that you had put tons of time and effort into it, and the added editorial really drove that point home. This is a must-read for any Inu/Kag fan; it's just fantastic. Oh, and the perfectly apropos reference to Sisyphus--brilliant.
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From kiwichan on July 01, 2005
So I sat down and went through the stories that were updated and I came across yours. I thought to myself...."All right she updated a new chapter and is going to continue! WHOO_HOOO!!!" But, alas, no you did not. :( So I just re-read your story and I have to admit I enjoyed it so much, eh again...! I then realized that I had never left you a proper reveiw for it. Shame shame shame on me. :( But, it is ok, becuase I have finally made myself write one! But I dont want you to think that I am doing this as an obligation or anything, because I am not. I have not seen any fanfictions that have captured these two characters in that situation so well. I love this story and it is definatly one of my favorites and it deserves to be recognized as such! And I will definatly still be on the lookout for plagerists who think that they can steal your work, as well as others. Shame shame on them. Don't you worry, I got your back! And I definatly am looking forward to reading more stories from you!

Kiwi
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From ANON - Byako on June 30, 2005
Loved it to pieces! It was sooo good. The ending was hilarious!
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From ANON - Naima on June 30, 2005
Wow.
I think that word says it all. This story was sheer genius.. Simply amazing.. Wonderfully and beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it a lot. The way Kagome and Inuyasha acted.. I could see this as an episode happening! Well, maybe not all of it, but you get it right? XD Anyways.. I think that this has been the best lemon fic of Inuyasha I have ever read. It was AMAZING. I am so jealous of your talent. SKjsdlfkjdsf. I would LOVE a sequel. LOVE.
Omgmgslkfj. Okay. Thank you for this story. Lately, all the InuxKag fics I have read are not even worth my time, but this one.. You have proved that there are at least some good fics out there, and I just haven't uncovered them yet. So thank you soooooooooo much again. I think it's the rarity of these good fics that makes them so special to read when I find them.

Always, Naima
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From ANON - FieryFaerie on June 30, 2005
This was nothing short of spectacular. The sex was not only wonderful, but it was so realistic, especially the kissing. Probably the most realistic love scene I've ever read, including not in fanfiction. Great work. I hope you write original stuff, because I'm sure you could be a published writer. Thanks.
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From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2005
Now, I have never posted a review before; i've never had the reason to. In fact, before I read this work I hadn't even registered on the site. This story, however, absolutely called for a review. The call was so strong that I could actually hear it yell "You FOOL! Review this fanfic immediately or face the perils of a thousand hells!". That being said, this is one of the best literary pieces I have ever read on this site. It was all about a character driven story instead of a, excuse the term, fuck-fest, and that is what made this story truly great The actions of Inuyasha and Kagome were entirely believable and your excellent vocabulary really enhanced the entire experience; I could actually picture them in that close-knit circumstance with Inuyasha boiling over with inner pain and Kagome seeking to comfort him. I'm glad you sought to bring forward Inuyasha's tough and traumatic past instead of just finding an arbitrary reason for them to have sex. I sincerely hope you create a sequel to this brilliant story and go more in depth with Kagome's insecurities and how Inuyasha deals with them.
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From on June 29, 2005
Only read the first chapter so far but it was beautiful. I loved that they did manage to not be entirely serious and that Inuyasha is all newbie, but an eager student. And I agree about the black pubic hair.

My very favorite bit:

'Finally having her lungs once more, she made to speak. She meant to tell him that she enjoyed herself. That he was her one and only, and that she loved him more than he could ever know. She wanted to further soothe his uncertainties after years of constant rejection from the world he lived in. To drive home a few more points as to why he mattered and that she didn�t care what anyone else had to say on the issue of his worth. All of this she poured into a speech, a look, a caress of her hand as she at last located her voice and forced it to the surface.

�Kiss good.�'

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From ANON - Art on June 29, 2005
Hmmm... I like your story conceptually, though I thought it a tad unrealistic, and wished, constantly, that you would stay on subject. Oh, and p.s., should Inuyasha and Kagome ever have sexual relations, I assure you Inuyasha would be the seme! Overall good job, though.
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From ANON - Hiro on June 29, 2005
i would like to thank the brilliant writer who gave birth to such a great story. that was probably my favorite inu fic so far...and i've read quite a few. (I can't seem to get enough of the Inu x Kag stories - they're my fav. couple) i really appreciate the diction and style of this story too, since you just don't get to see good writing nowadays. so, once again, thank you very much for entertaining me with such a wonderful story. keep writing!
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From ANON - Zincpaw on June 28, 2005
Hello, I originally read this story when it was first published, but never got around to reviewing, or at least I think I didn't. I was rereading it again during this lull of new stories, and I noticed your note about a sequel. Is that offer still valid? This is one of my favourite one-shot InuYasha/Kagome stories, and I would recommend it to my friends if they actually liked reading fanfictions rather than creating their owncharacters and original stories. I tried I hope that counts for something. On this time around in reading your story I was struck by one of InuYasha's thoughts. What Would happen once the night was over? Would Kagome be a little bit more intimate or would everthing go back to the way that it was originally? As always I am struck by the way that Rumiko Takahashi adressing the world's racism in the concept of Youkai, Hanyou, and Human relations. The prejudice could not be more pronounced in your story if you tried. I believe that the characters as you portrayed them were extremely close to the original characters' character. Too many fictions have InuYasha being extremely knowledgable in the ways of sex. I don't see how that is possible. I was surprised by how unrestricted the TV in Japan is. It jus goes to show I should get out of the country for a while. I hope you continue to write more about the InuYasha series. Thankyou for writing this and good luck on whatever you are writing at the moment. ZincPaw.
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