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Reviews for Something Real

By : Angelica

From ANON - Kuro Hime on June 27, 2005
Ok, i want to give you a lot of praise for this because this is the only story i have ever reviewed on AFF.net. Not that i'm one of those mean readers, i just usually never felt so strongly about anything to leave a message... But i think this was really well written and i agree with every move you made in the story. I felt really strongly about this fic because i dont' think it was gratuitous at all. I think it had a very real point. I don't know how to describe it but i loved this story so much. I really felt for Inuyasha, his confusion and rejection, in a lot of the scenes. And i loved the fact that i was never bored with the story. I hung on almost every word because i really wanted to know how the characters were feeling. This story gets two double thumbs up because i thought it was really great. I think it was because it was "something real". I think it could actually happen. People might complain that it was a little OOC (and i admit Kagome's forwardness did disturb me a little) but you know, if you really considered the situation, it's not SO hard to imagine her doing that. Inuyasha IS her "best friend" and she is in love with him. It all works out in the end. All right, well i'm done babbling. Great, great story! ^__^
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From ANON - aphroditie_wicca on June 20, 2005
I LOVED YOUR STORY! I only wosh t would have been longer. I love the way you wrote on the characters emotions, it makes the story feel all that more reall.
Keep on writting, it's one of the most beautiful goft a person can give to others. Thank you for that gift.
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From ANON - Emiko on June 19, 2005
I have to say it- Wow! This story was so beautiful, and not what you'd expect to be on here. But I wish there was more of this on here! This was amazing- only wish you'd of ended the thing properly! *winks* Simply lovely.
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From ANON - gossa on June 18, 2005
I must say that this is the best lemon i�v ever read,really O_O
Amazing!!! :D
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From Elsewhere on June 13, 2005
This is, without a doubt, the best Inuyasha fanfic I've read so far. This story was so touching, and real, and so incredibly in character...it's just perfect. Thank you for such an engaging read.
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From ANON - Rhiannon on June 12, 2005
I told you I'd read it! And I did! This shows that I am finally making a dent in my to-do list! Yay!

Lol. Your story is very, very good. It's hard to find lemons that don't turn Inuyasha's and Kagome's characterizations completely inside-out, and you did a wonderful job. *Fans self off* Okay, more than wonderful. That was HOT.

Are you planning on continuing this? (Don't bother answering; I'll just continue with the homework procrastination and read your AN.) If you are, I can't wait to read.

--Rhia
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From ANON - howlingblue on June 12, 2005
Absolutely amazing! You are soooooo good at this!

Please, please, pleeeeeeeease write another part to this! I wanna see Inu and Kagome get together!!
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From KeikoDogDemon on June 06, 2005
OMG, what a great fic! The way you portrayed Kagome and Inuyasha's situation is commendable and amazing. I applaud you tenfold! You truly have talent as a writer and I hope to God that there will be a next installment. *Hint hint*
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From ANON - random on June 04, 2005
This is the best inu/kag story i've ever read, and that's alot considering i've read over 1000. But wait this is not just the best inu/kag story, it's the best inuyasha story ever written gay or strait. I've read both sides, but not for the sex, for the story. You see, i'm an author, and this is the best story i've ever read. The sex is just an extra. (A much appriciated extra =) )
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From ANON - icedhaze on June 04, 2005
Wonderful story! Loved all the emotion displayed by both characters. I don't know about other people, but I hope there's a sequel.
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From ANON - AmberRose on June 03, 2005
Seems to be a lot of spooge for a porn fic. Anyway, I loved your story. I'm not going to complain about Kagome 'putting out' in a story that's posted on this site. I mean, the main reason I come here is to read adult fics. Reading a story like yours, where the characters are interesting and real, and the writing is superb, only makes the experience better. I'm off to look for more of your fics, or at least in hopes that more exist. (or will soon... :)
AmberRose
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From ANON - Yuuki on June 01, 2005
Wow! This is probably the best Inu/Kag story (or one-shot) that I've ever read. Thank you for writing this! :)
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From ANON - Laurel on May 22, 2005
I greatly, greatly, greatly enjoyed this wonderful work of fiction. I am a long time reader of several fandoms and this stands out as one of the best works that I have read. I love that it is character driven more than it is plot driven, and that the sex depicted was not crude but rather it was a physical expression of love and care, not lust. The way you shaped the thoughts and feelings of all the characters, even the villagers, created in my mind pictures of real people, not just figures in a story. I really look forward to reading more of your work.
On that note, I shall take the risk of your other readers hating me and say that I actually would not wish for a sequel, or to find out the villagers reactions the next day. That is not what this story was about to me. This story was about how Kagome helped to heal Inuyasha's self-image of himself and how he responded to her actions. I believe that this is a beautiful moment set apart from the rest of their lives, sort of like a Kodak moment but without the cheesiness (please excuse my dive into pop-culture, I couldn't help myself).
By the way, I thought your Vital Update! was as good as a story on its own with its biting wit. I just hope it didn't go over the head of the person it was aiming at and instead was a heart shot, clean and quick to kill. Here's hoping they learned their lesson. I wish you good luck on future endevours and will be keeping an eager eye out for more works, in any fandom. Thanks for a wonderful experience.
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From ANON - JWM on May 22, 2005
This is one of the most interesting fics I've read in a loooong time. I'm glad that someone else out there realizes what kind of prejudices Inuyasha would have suffered. While I'm not sure Kagome would have been that uninhibited with him, its your fic. Please do a sequel.
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From ANON - No one important on May 19, 2005
Hello.
I must say I am a little shy about things like this -so please forgive me for taking so long.
I read your story quite a while ago -and fell in love with it, so let me first say your a wonderful writer.
I have been torn between sending you an e-mail and leaving you a review, however I tend to be very personal with either forms of communication, so again forgive me if this seems to bold.
I think what helped me finally over come my hesitation towards praising you -as I assure this is praise and there are no negative reasons behind this... Save for one I'll address towards the end of this- comes from your most recent note the 'Vital Update'.
-When I read that I was hoping to come across a new chapter -however I am getting ahead of myself.
I read it, and while I do not know who Kiwi is it seems to me that we are on the same page.
To those who would flame you I have much to say -though in all honesty, as I am a fan of yours what I would say would be rude and very biased so I'll stay my tongue for now for the sake of keeping my image as a -hopefully- respectable individual intact.
I suppose that along with telling you how much I enjoyed your story, I'd also like to solicit you, regarding FF.net and an account -one of mine.
An Unwanted Soul
I am asking you if you would -and only if you have nothing other to do than to waste a little time- mind reading one of the stories on it.
Past this request -and this is only a request- I'd like to tell you also that I -and this is in regards to the 'negative' element that must be addressed- look forward to more of your work.
-This is in short the negative element behind my praise. I'd be lying if I said I did not hope that upon your reading this you felt like writing something new.
-By no means am I saying that I mind waiting or that there is anything really negative per say.
I am only saying that I do so hope you write more -despite whatever fools to choose to flame you.
As a fan of yours I am constantly on the look out for more of your stories in particular.
In any case I have no doubt taken up enough of your time with this, and if you've read it all -or even skimmed over the majority of it- then you've done me a great honor.
Thank you, and take care.
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