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By : Angelica

From MsSpaceey on August 11, 2017
This is one of my all time favorite one shots. Kudos for great writing. You have a way of putting the reader right where your characters are.

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From EikoTakayama on December 15, 2009
OMG!!! I really can't believe I found you xD Ok ok... First I'm Eiko007, that's my nick everywhere xD I read Something real a pretty looooooooong time ago, like... mmmmm... two or three years, I'm not sure if it was longer, but there was one fact, I didn't know English xD so I translated fics on Google and read them, well, I did that with a lot of fics, obviously taking their soul away, Google translate like crap some stuff xD well, I loved something real even when I read it from a pretty bad translation and with out the first two interesting parts with Kagome taking "care" of Inuyasha xD why??? I don't know, but well, like... a year ago, maybe a little more, I began to look for all the fics that I had translated and read them in English, and well, I found the copy of something real i had in English in my computer, and I realized that something didn't fit, so I looked for it, and I found it again, in a web page with like red background, well, and then I read it all, and I just fell in love again with you're fic, and since then it's like officially my favorite fic of Inuyasha, I just love it soooooo much really and I couldn't review to you then and I felt really bad, but I've found you here!!! yeah!!! and i really... but really really love you're fic in every way, I mean you made a fic so complex, so... better that Stephanie Meyer's books of twilight really, I love the books, but there are a lot of things that she doesn't get in, well well, what matter it's that you're fic its a MASTERPIECE really!!! It's sweet, and innocent but also a little bit pervert and... i don't know it's the perfect mix of everything, and what I love the most, besides form the lemon of curse xD, it's that there is no Kikyo in the fic, I really deeply hate Kikyo, and this fic was sooo great and so complex and didn't need of the usual drama that Kagome goes through because of Inuyasha's love-confusion for Kikyo, and the lemon it's soooooooo good also, I mean it's really hard to write sometimes, a really good lemon, but yours it's beyond fantastic xD I mean it's another level xD really really, you got so deeply into Inuyasha's feelings that it's almost as if you could at the end like feel what he felt, seeing things from his point of view, and so deeply into the world that ahted him and rejected him, not being accepted by anyone, and all that stuff, I mean just... so deep, in a way that i haven't see anyone looking at it that way, the dark past Inuyasha had before everything, just soooo deep, and... I just admire it so much xD I really admire you, and really don't know how you could write this one fic of Inuyasha and make it so perfect xD I don't know if you had write about anything else before or something, or you have like more Inuyasha fanfics, that I know Inuyasha and Kagome's fanfic fans like me would really love to read, but it still amazes me, I mean you made you first shot with Inuyasha and made it soooooo perfect, I mean I admire a lot of people that writes, and it take to someones more time that to another ones to get to write like really good, I was one of them, but you, I mean perfect from the beginning xD You rule Angelica Pierce, I really admire you and you're fic, you're both the best and now that we are near Christmas I would really like to wish you a really really happy time, Merry Christmas and a very very successful year to come to you, and the best of wishes and good luck for like for ever xD really really have a wonderful Christmas and a incredibly happy new year xD
Eiko Takayama
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From swissmiss on September 19, 2009
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!!
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From lozzapilgrim on April 05, 2008
Oh my God.... this the the BEST Inuyasha fic I've EVER read!!

Ah I loved it and there had so better be a sequal cause I'm not done reading!!!! So SO hot!! ;)

Loved ur writing style, descriptions and who u kept them in character :)
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From LoveRinnie on January 24, 2007
hi there :P
I suspect that you've hard it many times by now but do you have any idea how absolutely fantastic you're fanfic something real was?? Unbelievable, I just couldn't leave my chair!! How you described the emotions of inuyasha and how you described his past...when the girl told him that she wouldn't play with him anymore my heart broke for him..honestly! and his confusion about everything..also very well described...oh oh oh I could go on complimenting you like this forever but you might start to think of me as a weirdo so I won't :P. I believe I've made my point :) I don't think that I need to add that I hope for a sequel...even though it's been awile since you've written this...:P anyway..if you will write a sequel or not...you did a fantastic job and I thank you for that!
Much lovies,
Rinske (holland, so sorry if my english sucks :S)...yikes...I wrote much...*blushes* sorry....
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From ANON - Mia on December 19, 2006
I hope your working on the next chapter. I really loved it very much and don't give up on it. So many good Authors do that and It's understandable but still very sad...kinda like how you felt when they shot Bambi's mother...

(O.o)
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From ANON - HopelesslyEscaflowne on November 30, 2006
Beautiful! I love your writing style and your depth of understanding when it comes to the characters themselves. The interaction between Inuyasha and Kagome was sweet, sensitive, and passionate. Kagome truly is a caring, forgiving, loving individual and I agree that she's a people pleaser. It's one of the main reasons she is so important to the story. She keeps the Inutaichi together! She's like a buffer for everyone and she does it extremely well. I just loved how you brought out her true nature and didn't make the whole fic broody by adding Kikyou. Your fic was very original and I enjoyed reading it with a sense of discovery, just like Inuyasha and Kagome had. ^^ A sequel would be wonderful if you do write it and I hope it'll be more than a oneshot since I enjoy your style not to mention your use of words. I hope if you post elsewhere now that you'll let me know since this seems to be the only fic you have here on AFF.net. You said that you don't usually write Inuyasha stories...what do you usually write? I'd be interested to find out so I can read more of your works. Take care and I truly do hope you continue authoring fanfiction.
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From ANON - Mia on November 01, 2006
Very good story, as a matter of fact I actually wanted to cry at the beginning because I was wishing that maybe that girl would be his friend...Although I know that something like that might have happen...that's why we got the Inuyasha we have today LOL. Anyways I've been checking on this story from time to time trying to see if you post any updates on it. I actually was hoping maybe you can make and part 2 or another chapter. I really want to know what happens next in Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship.

I really hope your doing well and that your still alive�(poke poke) a lot of Author�s sort of give up on their stories and I was hoping your not one of them because it would be very depressing to end the show without taking a final bow�you know what I mean?

^_~ I hope everything turns out well for you!

Ur Loyal Fan

Mia

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From ANON - Catherine on August 09, 2006
I've read this once before. It's a really good story--very well written and I don't think it's out of character at all for either of them. I think you had a major understanding of the characters you were working with for this story and so it came out great! I'm glad that they didn't actually do it. That just wasn't the right time and they're still not sure (beyond any doubts) whether their in love with each other. So, they needed to wait anyway. I would like for you to continue this story... If you could. But I know my saying that probably won't make any difference. ^^"
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From ANON - randomreader on August 06, 2006
wonderful story!I really enjoyed reading this.
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From ANON - Yuta on July 01, 2006
I really do think you should review. It takes real talent to get someone�s attention to a story. Especially one like this, I thought it was well structured and very character like. I really do think Kagome would do that to InuYasha if time called for it. I also found the part about InuYasha and his features (claws, eyes etc...) To be very well thought out. It really got to me, knowing that people realize what InuYasha is. He really is the best of both worlds. To bad no one else can see it. The lemon I just have to say was fabulous, I found myself drawn completely into it. I could stop reading when Kagome first started kissing InuYasha. I was thrilled to see InuYasha and Kagome in that kind of position. I also, like the fact they didn't have sex. Because, the story would have just died if they did. Not saying you�re a bad writer. I just don't think having them have sex would have been a great thing. Maybe, in the sequel (if you decided to create one) But, alas you didn't make a sex scene and I think the story turned out great. Showing the relationship they have for each other and showing that InuYasha is just like all men out there (not talking about an asshole man) So, again think about making a sequel. I would read it; I'm sure a lot of people would read it and maybe create a mating scene in it.
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From ANON - RodiSquall on June 20, 2006

Thank god for the internet.... if this had been published (copyright issues not withstanding), and you were standing before me asking for my opinion? Not only would I be a quivering mess of fangirl lust, I'd also be totally speechless. Wow. This is the most wonderfully detailed and IN CHARACTER InuYasha smut I've ever read. Seriously. Holy shit! I've been writing smut in other fandoms for 10 years, and this has easily been one of the best ones I've read! And it's InuYasha.... please, you've GOT to write a sequel; however, being a writer myself, I understand when real life gets in the way. Whenever you're able, I'll eagerly snap up the sequel to this.

Just to let you know, after I read the story and saw the other three chapters, I yelped. Gleefully. Then I saw that they were editorials. I was disappointed, but only a little. Hey, I'm a fangirl, not a drama queen. Now if only I could convince you to write a Miroku smut.... shit, I don't think I'd be able to speak for days! :-D

Regards,
RodiSquall
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From ANON - Ai_No_Uta on June 20, 2006
wow that was so wicked omg it would ROCK my socks if there was a sequel soon lol man you have a lot of talent! ^_^
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From ANON - lil_merc_girl on June 12, 2006
one word...

WOW!
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From ANON - Gary Thunder on February 09, 2006
SEQUEL. NOW. That was one of the best lemons - hell, one of the best fics I've ever read. And I've read thousands, tens of thousands, in my time. I don't toss around compliments like that lightly.

Being a fellow author, I admire your writing style. I'll have to try some of your techniques myself...(not to say that I'm going to plagiarize, but the sincerest form of flattery is imitation, as you know.) I also enjoy the way you characterized Kagome. It seems very like her to give herself - her whole self, body and mind - to Inuyasha, just to try and heal him. Great stuff. Sexy as anything. Write a sequel with a real lemon inside, would ya? Also, I want to see Inuyasha trying oral. Being how his senses of scent and taste are heightened, well, think about it. Magnificence.

Gary Thunder
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