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Reviews for Moonless Night

By : Redknight
  • From ANON - christina on January 14, 2007
    plz update soon it good
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  • From ANON - Megan Dougherty on October 28, 2006
    Your story was awsum and I personaly think you should keep writing and finish the story. P.S. you spelled koga wrong its K.O.G.A. no afence. i love your writings

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2006
    keep going please

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2006
    really great story your a really good writer
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  • From ANON - shi shi hayashi on January 15, 2006
    WOW............UM...........WOW.ALL I CAN SAY RIGHT KNOW IS.............WOW..................UM..............WOW.MAN THAT WAS BRILENT ONLYA GENUIS THAT WOULD THINK OF THAT IDEA.KEEP THE WORK UP
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  • From ANON - shi shi hayashi on January 15, 2006
    that was a nice chapter but short but very very nice.oh and i cant wait for the*looks around*lemon^_^.see u next chapter bye.im such a baka how am i going to see you LOL.ill WRITE u next chapterLOLbye.
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  • From ANON - toast_to_bread on December 27, 2005
    hey! Great story so far haven't read to the end yet XP I'm not flaming here Ok? but when people talk use the " " it'll make it a lot easier to read!^__^ Keep on writing woooot.
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  • From ANON - Josh on December 01, 2005
    hey good story about Kagome and Inuyasha I like the set up but what is going to happen next and plz update soon
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  • From ANON - kegoma on October 13, 2005
    this story is so good please up date soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon i cant wayt enymore i need to no what happinss hery




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  • From ANON - inuyasha on October 07, 2005
    make the next chapter so that kagome has the babys and inuyasha is so happy to here that kagome wants him to be with her when she gives birth to the babys and make it ditaled when she gives birth to the babys it will make the story vary intens and exsiting.

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  • From ANON - anna g on October 06, 2005
    that was one of the most amazing fantastic inuyasha and kagome lemon stories i have ever read in my life
    i hope you keep going
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  • From ANON - Lori on October 06, 2005
    You need to proofread. Re-read and read again until you have all the errors out, or you may want to get a beta reader. You need to watch out for run-on sentences, and make sure you have quotation marks at the beginning and end of the character's dialogue. Aldo, you may want to seperate thoughts somehow, like have them in italics or single-lined quotation marks.

    On a positive note: It was an interesting story. First Human Inuyasha lemon I've read. Good job with the plot line.
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  • From ANON - MARY on October 06, 2005
    PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY. I HAVE ENJOYED SO FAR.
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  • From ANON - kunkra on October 06, 2005
    depending on how the babies are should determine the names, like if the boy is a half demon or a human, he could have a normal human name or something else. same for the girl, leave an authors not telling what the babies are, half or quarter demon, or human with a touch of demonic power.
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  • From ANON - kunkra on October 06, 2005
    pretty good, but it could use a bit more of a plot
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