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Reviews for Inuyasha and the Succubus Demon

By : Oluremi
  • From ANON - on January 09, 2017

    it was never love between inuyasha and kikyo they were both lonely and he had to be human and the jewel had to be gone he was a means of geting rid of the jewel and ending her duty he felt that he was bownd by honer to her he and his brother both have an all encompassing sense of honer sess would never harm a child and inu had his honer for what he feals is his falt that he faild in his protecting that is what tetsiga represents protection when sess wanted tet from thair dad thair dad replied who have you to protect inuyasha had kagome.kagome was the glue and he was the leader she was the spirit he was the strength with out her he would lose hart and with out him she would brake they need each other he would kill koga to keep keg neer him he gets upset about hojo becas she is his everything no mater what 


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  • From ANON - on January 09, 2017

    The end 'she was born for me and i was born for her' is not love when he was told kikyo was still alive he stade with kagome he was conflicted but he allways loved her and she was the only one for him kikyo was the wrong life time that was why he loved her becase she was kagome wether any of them want to admit it or not she tide up the loos ends in modern time and left to go home to him. she calls his brother big brother. Her brother tells his friend that asks about his sister that she ran off to get married after graduating. He tells meroku wile thay are apart that she has pepole that love her as he dose maybe you don't mean the last episode maybe just dering the paus when the manga was still not done and they had nothing to work with i wached every episode and i was sick to my stuck when kikyo or koga came up but now as long as they dont interfere to much im ok but Inuyasha dose love kagome and would be with her  


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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2008
    great updates... good of sesshoumaru to save kagome and bring her back to life... he even saved inuyasha... so inuyasha is avoiding telling kagome what happened to him... and he confessed to her his feelings while in human form... will inuyasha ake kagome as his mate?... what will happen now... update when you can... please and thank you...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2007
    nice story... very interesting... really liked it... glad that inuyasha & kagome are together... good job... great work...
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  • From Oluremi on November 14, 2007
    hey guy,

    please please don't focus too much on my last rant about the end of the Inuyasha series. First off, I know that the manga is different then the anime, however like I said at first this story was suppose to sorta fit in between 2 episodes...so I'm playing off the way the relationships are in the anime.

    I said all that to say that had I watched the complete series before starting a fanfic, I probably would have written the story to go a little differently.
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  • From ANON - Lalala on November 14, 2007
    Hmmm... you don't have a very good grasp of the characters themselves. Also, when you're just starting out writing, you might want to stick to a less convoluted plot-line until you feel better able to weave the strings of story telling. Despite that, you were quite creative, and you seem to have the potential to write a much better story. Keep trying!
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  • From ANON - Lalala on November 14, 2007
    FYI - The 'last' episode of the Inuyasha anime is not actually canon as far as Rumiko Takahashi, the actual creator of Inuyasha is concerned. If you get a chance to read the manga, where Kikyo is portrayed much more darkly, you'll see. In addition, you also get to see the true development of the feelings between Inuyasha and Kagome - it is definitely not a "sense of ownership" that he feels towards her, as you can see when they almost kiss, and every time Kagome gets in trouble, and the time he promises her that they will always be together (and not in an 'I own you' sort of way). At the very least Inuyasha and Kagome are BFFs, but it is obvious that they truly do hold romantic feelings for each other, although it is slow-going. So don't give up faith in a wonderful pairing just because the writers of the anime (and NOT the actual writers) were biased one way or another. Maybe that will make you feel better about your fic?
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  • From kookookitty on November 12, 2007
    as far as anyone sesshoumaru knew yasha was in a pod and not humping some polymorph youkai succubus. interesting, makes one wonder about pregnancy prevention and what's happening on the other side of the well and when they'll make it official. and maybe the purchase of a manual or instruction video...
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  • From kookookitty on November 12, 2007
    "I watched the last episode of the Inuyasha series; therefore I got an opportunity to see what really took place between Kikyo and Inuyasha."

    what really happened in the anime is not what really happened in the manga. since the manga came first, it is the only true story. the animation writers butchered yasha and kagome's relationship by adding misleading filler scenes and episodes while omitting important dialog and scenes. for example: in the episode after kikyo put him under a spell where she was going to drag him into the abyss while kagome was wrapped up in kik's shinidamachu and kagome snapped him out of it; he promised to protect kik and revenge her death. when the anime has yash sending kagome home saying he'd chosen kikyo and telling keade that he would even go to hell with her, that NEVER happened, it has kagome flash back to when he had asked her to stay by his side and she asked him if he had meant it if he promised to protect kikyo, he said he meant both (protect and revenge kik and to protect kagome and to have her stay by his side). there are less criticisms and sits, there are more affectionate moments between the two, less dealings with kikyo and not the same flashbacks in the manga. the anime puts more drama into the 'triangle' than truly happened and the english dub makes it worse. the english dub adds dialog where there is none, they change the content of the conversations, they mispronounce most of the character names and they use stupid translations for all of the attacks... at least in rurouni kenshin they use the original japanese attack names instead, i wish they did that for inuyasha...

    oh, this was just the response to your a/n in the beginning of the first chapter, i shall read what's up now and review again. sorry about the rant, although i loved the anime (in japanese with subtitles) i am still a manga snob.

    *humbly steps off soapbox* sorry.

    thank you,
    ginny


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  • From ANON - rin-chan on November 06, 2006
    OMG that was awsum.please say that isnt the end

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  • From xxPuppyEarsxx on January 08, 2006
    this is very good, its written very well. please continue.
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Chasarae on December 16, 2005
    This is actually a very interesting read....look forward to more.....
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  • From ANON - Oluremi - the author on June 09, 2005
    Sorry people. I'm remodeling my house and it's kept me busy for a few weeks. I'm still writing and I plan to have some more good stuff in a bit. Thanks for your patience...:D

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  • From ANON - beccapatty on May 19, 2005
    ooooooo boy whats gonna happen to Kagome and Inuyasha.. I can't wait to find out. Whats Inuyasha gonna think when he finds out who he really fucked..and whats he gonna think when he finds out that while he was doing that and not paying Attention.. Kagome was almost killed.. by who she thought was Him no less.. oooo boy.. plzz plzz update soon! REALLY REALLY GOOD STORY!
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  • From ANON - beccapatty on May 16, 2005
    wowwie Good Good Story soo farr.. Poor Kagome.. shes gonna be crushed.. Once she wakes up from her.. "death" lol .. She'll think that Inuyasha killed her when it really wasn't him.. and if she finds out about him fucking a kikyo look alike she'll die.. ahhhh Damn Inuyasha Why!!!!! ahhh Plzz update soon and keep up the good work. I really hope Kagome and Inuyasha get together.. they are my alltime favorite pairing!
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