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Reviews for A Life For A Life

By : Estrella13
  • From SirenicSprite on May 04, 2005
    First I would like to say congrats for writing your first fic. I always review and tell my opinions whether they're good or bad. I never try to be mean, but I am honest in what I say. As for your fic, I would suggest warning people that your characters will be OOC if that's your intention, or putting them in character if it's not. I could tell this was your first fic by your OC/Mary Sue. LOL. If you don't know what a Mary Sue is, check the story codes. Many new writers love to create characters and give them the perfect body, best powers, all the money in the world, and everything under the sun. Please try to stay away from this. I know it may seem like a good idea, but your readers have no idea who they are, even if they have a little background info. When people see OC in your summary , a lot of times they won't read it. If you want to use an OC, I would suggest building a story around existing characters first, then slowly bringing them in. I hope I didn't insult you, and I hoped this helped. GOOD LUCK. ^.^
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