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Reviews for Sweet Winter Reminisce

By : Bunnybop102
  • From angel23 on February 06, 2019

    Please update soon


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  • From ANON - Bunnybop05 on October 17, 2009
    Hey B miss u
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  • From LunaKageTenshi on October 06, 2008
    Please update SOON! This is so good and I want to read more.
    Please Hurry.
    *LunaKageTenshi*
    "I don't suffer from insainity,I enjoy every minute of it."

    ^.^
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  • From nightshade41230 on May 24, 2008
    I can't wait to read more it is the begining of a wonderful story
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  • From winter1992 on March 01, 2008
    huh
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  • From missnykoongawa on February 23, 2008
    I love the idea for this story and all, but you really seem to have no structure to your story I may not be the best writer here, but I have a better developed paragraph structure. My reccommendation is to find a beta. I would like to be your beta if you want. This story has been up here for a while i its illegible.
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  • From Panchat on February 20, 2008
    it's very hard to read your story, the dialog is cramped together and the actions are not well defined. i would suggest to ave someone ( brother, sister, friend) proof read it and give you tips on how to better lay out your story. it's a much easer read if tings are niely spaced out.
    Constructive critisisme, not insult. i really like your story, but please change the lay out of it so it's easer and maybe redo your other chaps at the same time. i'm sure you'll getmore readers and feedback by doing that.
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  • From marcia on February 19, 2008
    Please tell me that wasn't a serious attempt at writing. You're dialog was completely confusing. Who was saying what? It's all in one paragraph! Where did the diaper bag come from? She forgot about the baby until Sango mentioned it?
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  • From Maru on June 16, 2007
    Update soon!please
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  • From ANON - paxydog on December 20, 2006
    ahhhh you gotta update soon you just gotta thing
    were juststarting to get interesting i can't wait
    to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Karena on July 27, 2006
    This story is the best what's going to happen next will Kagome protect the baby from his Mother and live with Sesshoumaru? Please continue thank you
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  • From ANON - Mongo on June 27, 2006
    Your formatting on chapter 1 is messed up making the chapter hard to read
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  • From on June 26, 2006
    Ok I am really sorry to tell you this. But, I don't understand anything that is going on in these chapters. I don't understand what happened in the forth one either. It doens't make any sense. Please fix them, I do like the plot, but I just don't understand what is happening. Sorry for the flame
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  • From ANON - tanesha on February 09, 2006
    so who is the baby's okaasan?

    how in the world did sesshomaru become a father?

    what is the baby's name?

    why did sesshomaru ask kagome to take care of his son?

    update soon please

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - reviewer on January 16, 2006
    Brilliant. Please update soon!
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