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Reviews for Sorrow by me

By : Smarty0016
  • From ANON - DeronsDemonGurl on November 02, 2005
    It was a good story. I think you should do a chapter about in inu/kag only and a chap about mir/san only then go back to the format now. It is a good start though. Also have someone beta it for you. so your grammar will be better.
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  • From ANON - amanda west on August 19, 2005
    kool story its really good!!!

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  • From ANON - Shitza on July 01, 2005
    There is nothing stupid with grieving a lost animal. Myself i remember seven years ago, the day we found i was allergic too animals with fur. Both me and my brother couldn't eat that day, we simply cried. It still makes me cry when i think about it, because I miss him. he was a wheat coloured Cairn terrier, a nit stupid but really cute and always my guardian. We gave him away, I don't hear much from him anymore.

    Thinking of that your experience must have been six million times worse, so take your time updating. we can wait. These wounds heal with time, just be patient.

    Shitza
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  • From ANON - NeNe Harumi on May 30, 2005
    I liked Miroku's lil masturbating scene..you should do more of these scenes.
    And I want to congradulate you on your English. For it not being your first language you're doing very well with it ^^
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  • From ANON - JWM on May 29, 2005
    Interesting, I wish there were more Miroku/Sango fics (or at least more Sango fics), but could you please work on the formatting. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Gyousei on May 22, 2005
    ja, Ich mag deutsch, aber Ich bin nicht so gut mit meine deutschkenntnisse und mein lehrerin ist sehr streng (sie ist einen grosse Weibsstuck ab und zu)!! Ich spreche irisch, englisch, deutsch und ein bisschen franzozisch. I mochte japanisch nachtes jahr im uni studieren, mit Englisch und Psychologie. Mochtst du mir uber deine geschicte untersuchen fur englisch Fehler (e-mail mich mit deine Kapital)? hoffentlich, du verstehst meine deutsch!! Ich kann kaum erwarten deine nachtste Kapital zu sehen!!

    P.S. Was statt wohnst du?
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  • From ANON - Gyousei on May 21, 2005
    just a quickie =P.... its french hby the way and are you crazy??? Spanish has 12 past tenses!!!!! do japanese!!! they only have two!!!
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  • From ANON - Gyousei on May 20, 2005
    I'm too tired right now to think german. Your english is getting better, but you only use "an" before a vowel, the exception being "hour". I don't think the tickets are for sale yet, and i need a job first in order to buy them. Your solo was very good, I couldn't imagine doing a short story let alone a solo in german. go you!!

    Looking forward to the next Kapital!!
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  • From ANON - Rawben on May 20, 2005
    yey!! i loved the solo! heh... oh! and love how inu was all... 'uhh.. where's kagome? i should find her!' and runs off... ;) funny... although, your grammar is getting worse... sorry.... but maybe you could find someone to help you out w/ that! anyhow, i loved the update! oh! and it would be great if sango had followed him!!! :D anyhow, i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Shitza on May 19, 2005
    Ah, I just bumped in here at the Miroky/Sango section, only of curiousity. I found one of the best fics ever. Come on, I mean update this!!!

    Shitza
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  • From ANON - Rawben on May 19, 2005
    sure! masturbation's great. i dont know that sango would... but you know miroku has to, like, every day. ;) he's such a cute perv...
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  • From ANON - Gyousei on May 17, 2005
    ich habe auch viel probleme mit meine zeiten. Ich finde die zeiten und die grammatik sehr schwerig!! die relativ pronomen sind auch schlect. ich mochte ihr hilfe mit ihre Lemon. Ich schriebe ein solo mit sango in meine erste , uh chapter? Machen sie deine abitur dieses jahr? Wo wohnen sie? ich mochte nach deutschland nachtes jahre fahren fur die pokel um die welt??(fussball) es tut mir leid, meine wortebuch sind zeimlich klein.

    ich kann nicht warten fur irhe nachtes chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Gyousei on May 16, 2005
    Ihre englischkenntnisse sind sehr gut!! Ich mochte ihre geschicte viel.

    Ok we've established my german sucks, which is bad considering I have the equivilant to the abitur next month.

    Your mixing up your tenses, they are harder in english than in deutsch, if you'd like, I can help, just to make it a bit more readable. If not that's ok.

    Looking forward to an update!!

    viel gluck!!!
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  • From ANON - Rawben on May 16, 2005
    aw man. no one's reviewin? that sucks. well, i really liked it, but i think you could get into their heads a bit more. it's a bit choppy. this should make the chapters a bit longer... but i love the plot! and i like that kagome and inu got together first... oh! and i like your reason for miroku's ass-grabbin. good job. update soon ;) ...i just dont get why people dont like mir/san pairings... they're so good! ;)
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