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Reviews for Yellow Flowers on Wednesdays

By : amhor56
  • From ANON - Zelix on May 16, 2005
    Quite a good chapter here, really good... though you had two errors there, one, you said that Sesshoumaru is a 'Youki' instead of 'Youkai' and i don't know about Inuyasha's swords name, there are so many different names for it but I myself prefer "Tetsusaiga", since that's the only that makes sense to me... Anyway, besides those, good chapter!
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  • From Kittycat69 on May 16, 2005
    Hi! i love your storie!!! plz keep updating, i think this storie has real potential. Keep up the good work!
    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Kandy on May 16, 2005
    awesome fic so far, keep up the good work!
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  • From Velika on May 16, 2005
    i like this story a lot... please continue soon! =)
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  • From ANON - Rawben on May 16, 2005
    ohhh!! this is good! :D ohoh!! and is inu's dad sending him to this chick b/c he wants him to hit that? cause that would be funny.. what's his 'other reasons' for sending him?? yey for quick updates!!!
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  • From ANON - ME on May 15, 2005
    I really like the start of your fic--I think it sounds very interesting ^_~ Don't let others rile you about the age thing--I think it sounds hot. I hope you really don't hold this story 'hostage' for reviews--and I don't mean to tick you off--but that's one of my least favorite things when reading a fic--are you writing this story for yourself, or just the number of reviews you can get? AFF is not known for its quantity of reviews, unfortunately. I think you story's worth a read and the premise is interesting--please don't make us wait too long before you update
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 15, 2005
    i liked the story, the only thing to maybe work on is chapter length.
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  • From AngelEvie on May 15, 2005
    I'm so happy you updated so fast!! Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Reviewer on May 15, 2005
    You need to put a warning in your summary that this story is about a pedophile.
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  • From ANON - ME on May 15, 2005
    wow this is very interesting i cant waite to see where you go with this UPDATE soon!
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  • From ANON - Zelix on May 15, 2005
    Hehehehehe, this seems like good little piece of fanfiction, i'm game, please update soon... god, that was good, really funny.
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  • From ANON - p423 on May 15, 2005
    not bad so far, what's next?
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  • From ANON - Gyousei on May 15, 2005
    First off, good idea, it's different from the norm high school fic.

    You started off on third person then jumped to the first person, I personally think this story would be better in the third person.

    Sixteen and never having a girlfriend wouldn't make anyone think someone is having problems.... 19/20 is more that zone, but if you want Inu to stay younger so his father has control make him 18, theres still a six year gap and the maturity difference between men and women would make it more like eight years.

    Your story has promise, don't let anyone discourage you, take mine and others constructive criticism to heart and use it to make yourself a better writer.

    Looking forward to an update.
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  • From ANON - bettychan on May 15, 2005
    This sounds like it might be a cute story. But I'd have to read more chapters to be sure.
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