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By : KogasAngel

From ANON - ad on November 04, 2005
Ohh. Forgot to mention that as the story went on, yours and hers became very different..xD
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From ANON - ad on November 04, 2005
Finished reading what you have, loved it so much. Would love you so much more if you update this sexy piece of writing.
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From ANON - ad on November 04, 2005
Hello, I've read up to chapter 6 of your wonderful fanfiction and I love it to pieces but I'm not sure how two fanfictions can be so similar with each other. Please take a look at http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no=544201408 , a fanfic title The Assistant by KibaSin. I'm posting a link here since it shows that you've published it before she had.. Its a bit too similar. Same situations [basically but with differences] and how he takes her to his house and has Jaken give her his shirt..[except you had him pass a black shirt and she had him give a white shirt..] And the same use of character Nazuna except you had them become friends in the office while KibaSin had them friends from before..Also Inuyasha was already married to Kikyo but she was cheating on him with Naraku. Also some of the dialogue is very similar [the one about respecting Sesshoumaru's guests in front of him]..u.u; Please just have a look at the fanfic. If I am mistaken I will apologize..

Anyway, I just thought I'll notify you seeing how no one mentions it..and continue reading this delicious SessKagness.
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From ANON - sheana on October 29, 2005
hi really like your story so far please update soon. I really want to see how Kikyo fairs lol.
sheana
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From ANON - Linda Masurova on October 25, 2005
Hi KogasAngel!
My name is Linda and I am new in reading of fanfics. A friend with the name Makula was the one who shoved me this art of entertaintment and i am verry happy abaut that. I will tell you, that I read a lot of stories from you and I relly enjoyed it. I will beginn and hope you are not annoyed with my writing. At first sorry for my horrible english. I know that I am really bat, but I am working hard to make it better and the stories I am reading are helping me a lot.
I will start now and hope, that you enjoy it.
To make you feel my love and To make you feel my love again was the first, what I readfrom you. It was so beautiful, I couldn�t stop and was reading until the early morning hovers and I woke early, because I was eagre to continue in this story. I found it amazong how strong Kagome became and how was Sess lokking, when he saw her true power. It was nice, how near threre became in this story and his love to her. In the end of the first part he shows his affections with his wish. He is not selfish and he wish for her a ncie future. That is something, what shows how deep he really feels. In the second part things became interesting with the resurrection of Naraku and the end was unexpected as well as surprising. I liked it. It was something that I really loved. Then there is Sess jelausy. Your charakters are not verry much OOc and when they are it is not disturbing. The story is written so well, that the OOCs seems to be natural in the story. I enjoyed it so much.
To Close encounters: Huh! That was really a hat story and I was laughng a lot at some parts. The part were Sess is stripping in the beginning and he forget about his armor. I felt as if I was unable to catch my breath and stop to laugh. Tears were running down my cheek and my mother came to my room and asked what is so amazing. ( don�t worry I am, so it�s ok when I am reading your stories). I didn�t told her. It was only a deal, but the little problem with Sess�s selfcontrol was something, that amazed me to no end. Every time, when he was thinking about Kag, his hakamas became a little bit to tight. That was so cool. And inuyashas feelings when he found out what happend, that was great. From this story I became more carefull with laughing, especially in the night.
Know I am reading Sriking a deal and If you�re not the one. Striking a deal is so a nice story. Sess is really an asshole at the beginnigs but then he is so nice to Kag. I enjoyed the part at the restaurant, were he, his family and Kag meets for the first time after the long period they didn�t see each other. I enjoyed the part, where his father and his mother are demanding explanations and how ashamed Sess feels. After this it is really sweet, how cariing and getle he is. I love also how his yokai is. The yokai gives him hard times because of his behavior. But I have to admit, that he desrves it.
Know to If you�re not the one: KogasAngel, will you kill me! ( joke) I had hard times because I was reading in the night ( as ever. I know I shouldn�t, but I couldn�t stop myself). Some parts were so amazing, that I had to take a pillow to silence my laughter and nearby choked myself. How stupid from me. But my mother or my father were not awaked and so I was able to continue antil seven o�clock in the morning. I didn�t finish it yet but I think, that this fanfic is really good ( as all the others that I read from you). To let them in our time as buisnismen is good. What I like in this Fanfac is, how you made the characters. That are really verry good, one of the best.
What I would tell you: you sametimes write about people, that are angry at you. I dodn�t agree with such people. I think and believe, that you are one of the best authors and your stories are simple great. I don�t understand, how can somebody think to critisiing you. It is your story and you are the only one who is writing it. Nowbody has the right to make you down. I know, constructive critic is somthing that you sometimes ask, but if I don�t like the story I must not read it. I must not make you down, because thousands of others can like it. How I wrote I like your stories. You have a great fantasy and so your stories are perfect. Please continue with them. You are to good to stop.
I would have question at the end. I am reading Question about honor as well. I know, that you are busy at the moment, but I would know if you could be so kind and place it somewhre else, because the server were it was is not working and will be closed for a longer period of time. I don�t know if you will update it soon or not. It does not matter for me. I will be pacient. But I will let you know, that I love the story. I don�t think, that it is hentai. Such thing happen every day in our world. It is not nice, but it�s a great idea, and Sess have to work a lot to earn the destroyed trust of Kag and I am curious how you will proceed. The scotish inuyokais are perfect, and Sess is one more times jelause at the other mens. Karin is a perfect original charakter and I like how she is acting. I hope you will continue with this story as well, but I understand that you didn�t have time. Only what I will say is, that I love this story.
I hope you are allright because of the tornados. I worried about you. That is so horible with them.
So bey and thank you for your great stories
Linda
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From ANON - Subaru on October 22, 2005
Wow, I loved that chapter! Please update soon!
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From ANON - Tsuki on October 21, 2005
Hi, as usual your stories are great but I wanted to know if you were going to keep updating this story and the other ones (the one you submitted to single sparkhere because I know that this story was more advanced in the other site until it recently got close I hope you will update and submitting here or Fanfiction.net or mediaminer cause you're a really good writer and it will be a shame not to be able to continue reading your stories! Are you going to continue your most recent story (the one where Kagome get raped by Naraku because the others left her tie to a tree) sorry I don't remember the name....

Anyway hope to see more stories from u sooon!!!

Tsuki
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From ANON - Reader on October 19, 2005
Please update! I'm loving this story!
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From ANON - neptune on October 17, 2005
Hello please complete this story please I thought It was finished hurry like a fast rabbit and finish this please. This is the bomb
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From ANON - Kiari on October 16, 2005
I really like your stories; though there is smut you still have a plot! Very nice work, as far as I can tell you're using most of the characters. My only problem is that you left it in a partial cliffhanger. Who�s Kikyo going to mooch off of now? What about the hit on Sessomarou? Well as you can see/read, I can�t wait to find out what�ll happen in next chapter.
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From ANON - Esper on October 13, 2005
OMG..... did I just spend 6 hours reading that entire fic....::looks at clock:: wow, I did. heh heh ^^;
Wait a minute?? Wheres the next chapter?? ::screams in saddness:: NOOOOOO!!!! I want to read the rest ; ; Please update soooooon!!!
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From ANON - N/A on October 03, 2005
This has hot to be one of the best a/u pairings Sesshomaru and Kagome i have read so far. The way you've intricately woven a plot between all the characters starting from the beginning is amazing. Also, you seem to only use profanity when necessary... I applaud your techniques and your Fanfiction. ^-^
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From kruemel on October 01, 2005
This is such a sweet and wonderful story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - bettychan on September 30, 2005
Thank Kami! You updated. I hated the thought of Sesshoumaru getting shot.
I've been really enjoying this fic. All the twists and turns you've put in are great. They make the story very interesting, no matter how dizzy they make me. I can tell you take great care with your writing.
Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to read more.
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From ANON - lost child on September 30, 2005
another amazing chapter. Man am I loving this story. Keep up the good work.
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