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Reviews for Loves Tears

By : passionflames
  • From ANON - hehe on October 23, 2005
    nice nice i like
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  • From ANON - Unknown on June 18, 2005
    Hurry up with the next chap! i must have more! muhahaha
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  • From ANON - sahara on May 30, 2005
    i love ur story sooo far! soo freakin kool!! i hope u post more chapters! can't wait to see where u go with this one! i love kagome and inuyasha fics! i love inuyasha!!! bastard at times.. thou.. , anyway! hope u keep writing this story! cuz i'll be reading and waiting!!!! please UPDATE SOOON!!!! PLEASE!?!?! *begs* thank u! -sahara
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  • From drake220 on May 29, 2005
    well, there are quite a few spelling mistakes and the character changes are a bit abrupt. you also might want to insert a bit more plot because it's pretty meaningless right now. cute but pointless. there is potential so advance the plot!
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  • From Blackraven85 on May 24, 2005
    Please update ASAP!!!!!!
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  • From SirenicSprite on May 24, 2005
    Your plotline is really good...I did see a great deal of grammatical errors, but I will gladly correct them for you. I would like to see how you're going to get him out of this. This story could end really quick, or it could go on for a long time depending on where you take it from here. If you do plan on it being a long story...I would like for you to do a little san/mir as a side couple if you don't mind. You have them vocal enough that you could easily bring them into bigger roles. Also, i really hope you put some kind of twist in here, so it doesn't sound like all of the other inuyasha/kagome stories. You know the routine...inu hurt kag, kag gets mad and cry, inu feels bad, they both get advice, then make up and have hot passionate sex. I'll be reading!
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  • From ANON - Get a Beta Reader on May 23, 2005
    Your story has a lot of potential but your grammar skills are very poor. "I seen" or "she seen" is incorrect -- it should be "I saw" or "she saw" or "I had seen" or "she had seen". There are many, many, many more errors such as this one and it really is irritating to read your story with so many errors.

    If English is NOT your first language, I can understand your problem, but you still need to get help.

    If English IS your first language, then I can only assume you are too young to have learned any grammar skills and you should not be posting stories or reading them on this web site. AFF is for adults. If you are an adult, go get help, because it is clear that you do not have a high school level education.
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  • From ANON - Gary on May 22, 2005
    Great start! followed traditional Inuyasha and the closing paragraph leaves readers in suspense!
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  • From ANON - Lee Lee on May 22, 2005
    Wow!!!!I love it!! It was great!!!! Hurry write moreI wanna see what happens!!

    ~~Love yaz babe~~
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  • From ANON - Lee Lee on May 22, 2005
    Wow!!!!I love it!! It was great!!!! Hurry write moreI wanna see what happens!!

    ~~Love yaz babe~~

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  • From ANON - Alyssa on May 22, 2005
    ok they keep getting better! its like i NEED to read the next chap, and i can't wait to ^.^

    ~Alyssa
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  • From ANON - shanee on May 22, 2005
    Bravo..Bravo! You definatly got me interested. Wondering how poor Inyuasha is going to get himself out of this one. Can't wait for the next chapter. Are you sure you are an amature writer? You wouldn't fib to us would you?
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  • From ANON - shanee on May 22, 2005
    Awsome! You really stayed true to the established personalities of the characters. Love how you ended the chapter with an element of suspense, always leave your audience anxious for more. I can't wait for the next chapter...
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on May 22, 2005
    Not bad. I like how you threw us in the middle of the battle. This has potential. I'd like to see more.
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  • From ANON - Alyssa on May 22, 2005
    OMG! i loved it soooo much! it sounds as if it really was an episode of Inuyasha! i can't wait to read the next chap ^.^

    ~Alyssa
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