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Reviews for Never Hatred

By : calenloke
  • From ANON - Kiara on December 11, 2005
    Really wonderful story! I love the plot, it's ingenious. I noticed that you haven't updated in such a long time. Please, update as soon and often as you are able to, I am dieing to read more.
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  • From ANON - loke on December 11, 2005
    Kaorustalker30

    Thanks for the review. and thanks for the correction. You actually got the wording right. I was totally stumped there. Thanks. And for the mother gasping....it's because Inuyasha's eyes were so (this is going to sound cheesy...but) well...hypnotic. Something like that. As for the scent that calmed Sesshoumaru, it's Inuyasha 's scent. Sorry for the mix up. Thanks for the tips....it's was reviews are about right? Later
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on December 11, 2005
    I really like this story, not many have ever dared to venture into the brothers' past, so I commend you for that. I loved Sesshomaru's thoughts in the 5th chapter, especially regarding the 'Prince Inuyasha or General Inuyasha' one. Hmm, General Inuyasha - that has such a nice ring to it.

    Oh, there was one thing that caught my eye, but (I felt) that it could be re-worded if you wanted: //Still very young to comprehend and yet old enough to hate entirely.// I reread this a couple of times and figured it would sound better if the sentence said, "Old enough to comprehend and yet still young enough to hate entirely." UNLESS you meant //Still too young to comprehend, yet old enough to hate entirely.// Which then I think that's a perfect sentence lol I would explain why I think this but, I am probably boring you. lol

    Oh, and a question: that smell that calmed Sesshomaru down so fast, was that Inuyasha? And why'd his mother gasp, did she also notice that scent or did she notice Sesshomaru's sudden change in emotions? Keep up the good work, I'll be looking for your next chapter!
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  • From ChibiPorunga on November 20, 2005
    Oooooo! *paws at screen* I likes it! ^.^ You've done a great job with this so far. *gives a thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - uzamaki liliana on November 04, 2005
    please update is this gona skip forwart to when they r older I hope it does plesae update
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  • From ANON - Deity on October 22, 2005
    I think that this story is amazing so far. Please continue, I'm looking forward to your next chapter greatly.
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  • From ANON - person on September 22, 2005
    ... this fic is making me want to kick InuTaisho reeeally hard, and tell him how much of an utter IDIOT he is. *twitches madly* Must.. refrain... from pulverizing... everything... in the... vecinity... other than how irritated at InuTaisho this fic makes me, I really like it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dante on September 21, 2005
    Nice update. General Inuyasha; I like the sound of that.

    D_
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  • From ANON - person on September 10, 2005
    Great work! Ah, angst, how I love it... ^_^ I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - person on September 05, 2005
    Coolness. This fic is shaping up very nicely. Yoko dekimashita. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2005
    please continue! I can't wait to see where it is going

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  • From ANON - purplekitty on September 03, 2005
    I loooooooovvvvvveeeeee it! Baby Inuyasha sounds soooo cute! I can't wait to see how the rest of the family reacts to him once they actually meet him. I also find it interesting that you kept Sesshomaru's mother alive. Most people kill her off so that Inuyasha's mother can come into the picture. Makes me curious, are you going to have it similar to Saiyuki's Gojyo, where the mother raises her husband's love child but is sad and upset by the child so much that one day she atempts to kill him. Also why did Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's father cheat if his first wife is still alive and well? Is it because she's not compassionate like her son? Ohhhhhhhhhhhh all these thoughts make me even more excited to read what you're going to write next. Please update soon! But no pressure! I know you can't rush a genius.
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  • From ANON - dioXclaus on September 03, 2005
    i hope those were good things on your mind,
    i love the story
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  • From ANON - DC on September 03, 2005
    I loved your story so far and I like how this story actually has a developing storyline instead of just the usual, oh look they're in love lets make lemon juice. I admire your use of imagery and your charachter anaylsis. Very good. ^^
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on September 03, 2005
    oh wow that was great. keep it coming
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