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By : OriginalSinner
  • From KishaW on July 05, 2006
    If I thought the first version was dynamite. Whoa!!! God what I wouldn't give to be Sango for just 5 minutes. I pride myself on being, ya know, the whole independant black woman thing, but god! Sesshoumaru could do anything short of...Hell Sesshoumaru could do anything to me!!! I think all women, especially strong ones love to be dominated, atleast sometimes. A guy that really knows his way around the sack. I'm gonna go search for my magic lamp now. I wanna appear as a character in one of your stories and my trusty genny's gonna help*lol* Please update soon!!! Can't wait for the new stuff. Hell, I'd beg your ex just to get my fic fix!!!!!
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  • From ANON - PinkRoseBouquet on July 04, 2006
    Another incredibly wonderful chapter. It just keeps getting better and better. Talk about hot! Whoa...Sessh is one sexy puppy in this story. Keep it coming, please!
    To answer your questions about Demon Slayer Sango, the story posted in this section isn't especially different from the older one-- I have done some work cleaning up the prose so that it reads more easily. So if you want a better proofread story, I'd continue reading the chapters as they are posted here. Thanks so much for your kind words about my writing-- the sentiment is totally reciprocated. You are a talented writer, and I am tempted to steal some of your techniques!
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  • From ANON - silent pluto on July 04, 2006
    hmmm this is one of the most sensual lemons I'ved ever read!
    You soo have to update!
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  • From LdyMoon on July 02, 2006
    Original Sinner you did it again...left at such a climax....If I were Sango I'd wonder the same damn thing, why in all the hells are you beating my poor bottom up, whatever did it do to you? It was well written looking forward to your update.
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  • From ANON - qutie1 on July 01, 2006
    I read this story cause of what i saw it was about.plus i wanted to see if you'r a good writer and you are!
    Not like you needed me to tell you that.I realy liked it i usally dont read long stories but any way thank for all the help you have givin me.**take care**^^
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  • From KishaW on July 01, 2006
    As always, I loved it. You could give me more than a few tips. Most writers don't give Sesshou a sadistic sexual side. It so hot in more ways then one! Cold regal Sesshoumaru, a real freak in the sack! You'd think he'd only do it from the back or missionary. Please keep it comin!!! Can't wait for the newest chapters! I have the story on my other computer. Unfortunately, it's in Virginia waiting to be shipped to Chicago. I really miss it. My laptop's great, but it's just not the same.

    Keep it coming babe,

    Chigirl
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  • From PinkRoseBouquet on June 30, 2006
    What a delicious little story this is-- very hot, very sensual. I am thoroughly enjoying it. Your writing is clear and compelling, and your descriptions are quite vivid and on the nose. Sesshomaru as controlling seductor is right on the money. I am a huge fan of the Sango/Sesshomaru pairing (I am the writer of Demon Slayer Sango in this same section)--the arrogant youkai and the youkai hunter are a power couple if there ever was one.
    Thank you for your kind words about my story-- it was actually posted before on AFF, before the big meltdown. I am reposting it here since I never had it under the Sess/Sango category.
    I look forward to reading more of your wonderful story, and hope you can update soon.
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  • From ANON - swissnights on June 21, 2006
    i see your back on line so WHY HAVE YOU NOT SENT ME AN E-MAIL????????
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  • From LdyMoon on June 21, 2006
    Hey great story, I like the smut...It was funny to see both reactions from Kagome and Sango when Inuyasha yelled. I was laughing, but, no, I like where it's going and I want to see more, so, update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2006
    If you're updating this one, PLEASE tell me you are going to update "Lessons in Lust"?!?!

    I love both of your stories, your smut rox my sox.
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  • From ANON - Pana255 on June 18, 2006
    I'm lost weren't we more ahead in the chapters. O-well! I like what ya did with the chapter can't wait for the next one
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  • From Dunkelgelb on June 12, 2006

    Let's see, here: I woke before noon for once, spent time with an old friend of mine, and have now discovered that OriginalSinner has returned to AFF.



    Yep.



    This is a good day. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!



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  • From ANON - Begger195 on June 11, 2006
    please please update
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  • From candyguru on February 02, 2006
    All I can say is wow girl. Me reading your lemons makes my husband a very happy man ~_^
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  • From ANON - Dawna Chan on January 15, 2006
    hey I understand, as a fanfiction writer myself I know what its like not having enough time to type. I hope that you had a good christmas and a happy new year. now. GET THAT CHAPTER UP! I'm just DIEING to see what fluffy is going to do next. lol btw, congrads on your bouncing baby boy!

    Dawna Chan
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