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Reviews for Desire of the Heart

By : LdyMoon
  • From Darknessdawns on May 25, 2008
    This is a wonderful story. I love romance and a bit of action. This was great. Im still in awe by it. All hail to the author. Please writ more wonderful stuff.
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  • From ANON - linda on October 30, 2005
    Oh, my god!!! This story was great:) First of all the way it begain I was captured from the start. Then the whole time I'm in this roller coaster ride that i just i was able tocan't get off of ( not that I really wanted to).And the end end I was in mid tears with the lost of InuYasha friends and family. I loved the happy ending !!!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 12, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - janice on July 15, 2005
    This was a very interesting and wonderful love story, I liked how you made it all play out. I also like the fact that it is finished. So, here are the points I like: I like that Kagome beat the **** out of Kikyo in her dream and that she was forward with Inuyasha in it as well so now he knows definately how she feels. It was original how he was able to use the jewel shards and Miroku was classic with his black mail. I liked how Naraku finally got what he wanted out of kikyo only to have her call out someone else's name that was evil a low blow for anybody. I think you kept true to Sesshomaru's personality and I liked how he realized at the last moment that no matter what Inuyasha is still his brother. I liked how Inuyasha was able to use tensaiga, since I know in that one episode I can't remember the # of the episode but Sesshomaru asked tessaiga permission to use it to destroy the ghost that was haunting the woman who loved him *sorry for the spoiler, I don't know if you saw it yet, but if you didn't it was a good episode, Sesshomaru's first love* Anyway, so it was fitting that Inuyasha in turn can use the other fang if it gave him permission. Over all, this was a good story and I wonder why people haven't commented on it more since it is COMPLETE I mean, I browse the web looking for complete stories, I've noticed that a lot of people don't finish their work and I am left wondering what in the hell happened. I tend not to read uncomplete work or works in progress because it is too frustrating 9/10 times they don't get finished. I will read your other stories and leave my mark as well (if they are finished). Sorry I am rambling here, but, I have no one else to talk too at the moment. Over all you have a great imagination and a great story here. Keep it up, if you keep writing like this than I might keep coming back to this site.

    Janice
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  • From ANON - Cathy on June 28, 2005
    I just want to say, this was a great romantic story. I felt like I was reading some harlaquinn fic. I also love the fact that it was complete. I am going to keep your name in mind. I really like your story and again the characters their behaivor, it was like watching it on tv. I could see this story being part of the show. Great job.
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  • From SirenicSprite on May 30, 2005
    I read your story, and I think it is written very well. I truly enjoyed it. But, the reason I think you are not getting as much response as you should is because people are lazy. A lot of times if a person finds a good story, but it is already over 10 chapters, they won't read it. I guess they see your 18 chapters and get a little overwhelmed. Because of this, many authors, including myself, post their stories chapter by chapter; this way they build an audience. Though I do believe you have guts for posting it already complete. Me myself personally, I need a little feedback to make sure everyone is on the same page. I hope to see more of your work, and good luck! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2005
    great story. can you please make a sequel?
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  • From ANON - Ldymoon on May 27, 2005
    Hey thanks for the reviews. That was pretty fast, hope that more peeps will like the story. Well, I've written another story about the gang and a whole lot of sex, orgies, and such. So, when I see more people responding to this story then I will put it up. I am currently writing another story since now I am finished with teaching for at least a couple of months and I have yet another in the back of my mind. It's a fan fic of a fan fic. I like to put up complete stories so when they are complete they'll be up. Please keep reading.

    Thanks again.

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  • From ANON - Trez on May 27, 2005
    Well I have to say from a guy's point of view "What in all the 7 hells is kikyo doing with Naraku and he screamin her name and the witch screams Inuyasha's that is cold I think everything that would be hard on my body would just melt heck it would just fall off. GOod story though I can't complain you a completed your story so I got to say little ldy that you caught my attention and I wouldn't be mad if you wrote more stories. Ok my girlfiend is standing over my shoulder to tell you that the love scenes were B..... I'll let you figure out what she was trying to say lol. So from her point of view you gave her the romance she wants while you gave me the fight and the cold scene that could scar a man forever. I give it 5 stars it good keep it coming little LADY..... LOL
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  • From ANON - Michiru on May 27, 2005
    You did a kick butt action with a whole lot of romance and what kind of a girl would I be if I didn't say "May love reign forever" with my peace signs hanging around the room lol you finished your story wow that's great most stories I have read on here aren't finished you made me think of Inuyasha differently an Poor Kouga wow I wanted to HOWWWLLL for you I about broke down and I can tell you it takes alot for this girl to cry... But I will admit I did kinda of tear up. Oh and I lust after Sesshomaru He is so hot and you worte him as hot as I know he is. Girl I don't you from the man in the moon and I have to say your the first author I have thought to write too and gotta give you props you are one Hell of a writer . Please Continue writing with your COMPLETE STORIES. This girl loves it Good show cool girl.
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  • From ANON - Oceanna on May 27, 2005
    Wow this story was great??? I loved the way that all the characters they all seemed so real. I have to say this is my first time on this site and I LOVE INUYASHA MANGA'S. This author of this story I think captured what I think Kagome really thinks of Kikyo and how cold in her dreams she can be. Inuyasha doing and being the butt that he is all this ROCKED I WILL LOOK FORWAWRD TO YOUR NEXT STORY. PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITTING YOUR STORY BUT MAYBE YOU CAN DO A STORY OF SANGO AND MIROKU OR KOGA AND KAGURA. Well let me sum up and say keep up the good work and thank you for complete story......
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