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By : Mmoirai
  • From ANON - Phelony on November 26, 2005
    Just finished reading Chappy 13. Oh, My God!
    That was so sad! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ivy on November 25, 2005
    Ohhhhh, Jeeeeezusssss!!! That was SOOOOO good! Please keep updating!!! I can't wait to read more, and find out how it all emds!!!! Don't keep us in suspense!!!! Thanx!!!!!!
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  • From Phelony on November 25, 2005
    I just finished reading your first chapter, and I'm hooked!
    I'm deffinately going to continue on your other chapters tonight.
    I just wanted to thank you for sharing such brilliant talent.
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  • From Phelony on November 25, 2005
    I just finished reading your first chapter, and I'm hooked!
    I'm deffinately going to continue on your other chapters tonight.
    I just wanted to thank you for sharing such brilliant talent.
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  • From ANON - Pixie on November 23, 2005
    This is one of the most amazing works of literary art that i have ever had the pleasure of reading. Thank you, thank you very much for writing this and sharing with the world. Please write and share more, your style and attention to detail is stunning. You adapt characters to the story, keeping them "in character" flawlessly. When I was reading, everything Rin and Sesshomaru did I could understand how and why and see them doing just that in coherence with the characters portrayed in the series. Amazing descriptions, you pull off emotional power without being sappy. I hope that other authors - fan fiction or otherwise - will learn from your prowess. You certainly could have a future in writing original characters and storylines (if you haven't tackled that already). You have my support 100 percent.
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  • From ANON - Irivel on November 23, 2005
    I´m soooooooooo happy. Please. keep witing!!!!!
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  • From ANON - izzyco2001 on November 23, 2005
    I have always prefered stories that portray the actual characters. Unfortunatly, we do not know how Rin will be in the future but you have made her very realistic. I do believe that you caught the real Sesshomaru in your writting. (That is really hard since so little is known of this mysterious demon.) I normally don't like it when other characters are added but, I did enjoy these. I did enjoy your story very much and would love it if you continued from the ending you left. I REALLY want you to continue!!

    Sincerily,
    Liz izzyco2001
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  • From ANON - DragonsLore on November 23, 2005
    oh geez, you just HAD to go and leave all of your readers off at that, how cruel! Great story! Great Chapter! Write as quickly as possible for I don't think your readers can wait very long... My Rin... So sad.
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  • From kruemel on November 23, 2005
    This chapter was certainly worth waiting. But here you leave your readers again with a cliffhanger. That's quite sadistic, you know.
    The scene between Sess and Rin was so hot and romantic and heartbreaking at the same time.
    And now they both are in deadly danger...
    Please, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Chica on November 23, 2005
    That's so sad, not Sesshomaru! So he really does love Rin then, when he said that in the last few sentences my heart skipped a beat.
    I really love this story and i hope it dosen't end sad.
    Also the lemon was scorching hoooooooooot! I'm hoping that this won't be your last one
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on November 22, 2005
    OMG! How intense! I thought it was gonna good, but I didn't think it was gonna THAT good. A lot of angst. So sad. I cryed lightly. The last sentence was the one that left me sobbing though. Great poem. Well I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - fib on November 22, 2005
    !! An update!!
    And WHAT an update it was! Excellent!
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  • From ANON - C\'Asia on November 22, 2005
    no it cant end like this make it all
    better and have sess and rin back together
    and kill the bastarding trolls
    but i love your stories none the less
    udate soon
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  • From ANON - Devon M on November 22, 2005
    Okay, I am supposed to be doing homework, but I saw that you updated and took a break ^_^ Loved the chapter. It's getting good now. There is a lot of esplaining to be done. Oh Lucy, you so crazy!
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  • From ANON - Morwen Re on November 22, 2005
    gaaaahhhh! so cruel! just when i had just about given up hope on this fic and then you leave it at a cliffie! i would normally damn you to the darkess reaches of hell, but i want you to finish with this fic before i do so. if you update quickly i might even forget to sick my imps on you too. good job on this chapter and i loved the lemon.
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