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By : Mmoirai
  • From ANON - amhor56 on September 07, 2005
    NO NO NO NO! How could Sesshomaru not understand that Rin loves him. It is not fair! I hope thing get better! Update soon! Please
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  • From ANON - Muem on September 07, 2005
    Sweet- but, yet, sad. porr sessy
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  • From ANON - TheFavoriteBabySister DragonsLore on September 07, 2005
    Great chapter! And I *know* the next one is gonna be even better. Quick! Write quick! Anyways, I didn't find any spelling errors, and it was a good setup for your next chapter- don't change anything.
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  • From ANON - C\'Asia on September 06, 2005
    why is sessy so mean and things
    why cant he realize that rin love him in
    return so please udate so i will know
    how they will get together and live happy
    and on top of it let see some more waff
    and bloody fights and arguements

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  • From ANON - C\'Asia on September 06, 2005
    Why do you leave so many cliff hangers
    I can not stand it please plaese update
    soooooooooo sooooon please please
    stop torturing me
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  • From ANON - Ren on September 06, 2005
    Arigato!!! Wai! Wai! You've updated, FINALLY!! Sheesh, but it's okay, I liked it, but Sesshoumaru is being a meanie, huuuu, T.T poor Rin, I hate the whole outcome so far, but I'm sure you will not disappoint me in the end. Teee hee heee, continue your wonderfully great work ne? I'll stay in tune for the rest that is to come. ^+^
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on September 06, 2005
    What can I say...be yet again another great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read about this thing that tried to kill Rin and it's master.......Why is all this stuff happening to Sesshomaru from long ago??!!!!!.......keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Yue on September 06, 2005
    Update soon! This story is amazing!
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  • From ANON - Fallenrose on September 06, 2005
    I thought this chapter was perfectly fine, i don't see why you would want to change it at all.

    Sesshomaru's jealousy is growing increasingly, it can only lead to disaster

    Many things seem to be coming together now also and the promise you made about the next chapter is intruiging.

    I hope you are quick in releasing chapter 12 i can't wait to see what happens next

    Fallenrose
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  • From ANON - lady_green_bat on September 06, 2005
    I'm just so happy that you didn't abandon this fic! Loved the latest chapter---you had no reason to worry about mistakes, it was very well written. Keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - icygirl on September 03, 2005
    your story is sogreat please don't give up it's been awhile since your last update don't let it unfinished! bye and have a good day see you soon i hope!
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  • From ANON - sraven on September 02, 2005
    I love your story. Any idea when the next update will be?
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  • From Menomaru on September 01, 2005
    PLEEEEASE you have to update your story, im hanging here! :D and absolutely love it! :D
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  • From ANON - Tori on August 30, 2005
    This was a very moving and intense chapter. I'm breathless and eagerly awaiting more.
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  • From ANON - Milia on August 17, 2005
    1. Kazuo needs a hug.
    2. You have a lot of "starred" where there should have been "stared."
    3. You also tend to use too many exclamation points. Some of your statements, such as those in the italicized recount of Rin's revival after the wolf attack, could be joined together with commas, dashes and ands for a bit of variety. Also, some of the sentences that end your chapter could be more effective as single-line paragraphs ended with periods (i.e. Ch. 4). Bit more menacing that way.
    4. Can't wait for the rest of the story.

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