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By : Mmoirai
  • From ANON - Melitot on July 18, 2005
    Good Lord, this was an amazing chapter. People saying Sesshoumaru was rude yet deeply passionate were damn right! It's a difficult task to portray him in character, yet you seem able to do it without effort. I envy you ^^
    I know it's the same conclusion as always, but please, update soon.
    Kisses
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  • From ANON - DPM on July 16, 2005
    OMG....that was breathless...I am already waiting for your next update !!!

    You words evoke such imageries for the brain to absorb, which I've been told, is the most potent form of aphrodisiac. This story really gives it a great exercise.

    It's been a wonderful story. Not too mushy but with enough guts to make it believable.

    You've touched upon a great point about our darn human pride. As a third person reading this, I can see how silly Rin and Sess were acting over this simple misunderstanding but were I in their circumstance, I could see myself behaving inanely stupid with a cussed-egocentric stubbornness just like them.

    This is a weakness that most of us can't seem to overcome and lead to unnecessary suffering.

    Anywho....keep up the great writing !!!




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  • From ANON - sraven on July 15, 2005
    Love, Love, Love this story. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Roushijin on July 15, 2005
    Geez....*fans face*....that was in a a simple word.....HOT...man how good was that and it was only a dream...*evil grin*...gosh, Sesshomaru has such vivid dreams of Rin...MuHAHAHA....I hope Rin is not having someone attack her or something, please don't let it be that...*sighs*...but if it is so...I guess the show must go on, Please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! I'm all on a cliff...hehehe, I thought I was the only one who left cliffy around here, *giggles*...Man I'm all excited about the nect chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Ren on July 14, 2005
    Wowy, tee hee hee, I want to know what happens next. Please continue soon...keep up your great work!!!^_^
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  • From ANON - TheFavoriteBabySister on July 14, 2005
    Well, well, well. I didn't know you could write quite like that, it was good. It was great. It was enough that I was blushing. I'm giggling for lack of a better thing to do. Great job, great chapter, can't wait to read about what Rin was actually screaming about. Great detail. No mistakes that I found. Um... great job... great good job... great. ::giggles:: *Has a stupid grin on face* I want dreams like that. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Oh Festive One on July 14, 2005
    OMG!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!! ITS THAT TIGER DEMON ISN'T IT???
    OMG!!!! that was such a teaser lemon... makeing it a dream.... sniffle.... you suck... i wanna see some real lemon!!! woot! i love how
    your trying and for the most part succeeding in keeping Sessy in character... i hate it when i read fics about like sess all of a sudden becomeing this love sick shakespear romantic... its just not realistic!
    whaaaa! your an awsome writter... update soon!
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  • From ANON - Daxemon on July 14, 2005
    Always. You - You - Must you always end it with me practically falling off my chair. Now I'm going to have to wait in bliss filled agony for the next installment. (Weeps uncontrollably while putting story in favorites list once again)
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  • From ANON - Melitot on July 14, 2005
    Yes! I can't believe it, you've finally updated! I'm so happy *goes dancing around*
    I'll tell the truth, I've not read the new chapter yet, but I wanted to thank you for publicing it. Later I'll add a real comment!
    Bye and kisses
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  • From ANON - rinwantabe_sesshylove on July 14, 2005
    I love this story!!!!! I cant get enough, and i love cliffhangers. Keep the chapters comming, and I'll be wating
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  • From ANON - Sarah H on July 14, 2005
    A dream? A DREAM! Noooooo! It was way to sexy and real to be a dream i was so hot reading that chapter it was a shame when i found out it wasn't real. I loved it when Sess wanted her to say his 'given name' there was something so sweet about that. I'm enjoying this story very much n my friend recommended it to me. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Loving kisses on July 14, 2005
    I've just read this for the first time. The lemon was great but what is wrong with Rin? Update soon so i can find out.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 14, 2005
    Wow, that was a powerful chapter. I wonder what is happening to Rin. I hope that her future 'mate' is not
    hurting her. Maybe she is having the same dream as Sess. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Fallenrose on July 14, 2005
    I can't believe that you have never written a lemon before because that was just. . .well amazing!

    Sesshomaru was so raw and passionate and it brought out a whole new sensual side to him

    You should write another one very soon!

    And what a mean cliffhanger you ended it with! I am interested to see what Rin is screaming for

    Update soon!

    Fallenrose

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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on July 14, 2005
    OMG!!!! that was a sweet little dream!!!!!! I'm getting so angry....WHY WON'T THEY SAY IT!!! She be gone in three weeks!!!!! ARGH!!!! the panther demon is right it is funny that the other will be marrying the other's true love......good chapter....keep it coming please!!!!
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