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Reviews for One Life

By : Mmoirai
  • From Ruuka on August 24, 2008
    WOOW!, great twist on chapter 19 ! : ).
    i LA-LA-LOVED IT! And yes, your dream//reality was very interesting, Cuz your sick like that ! :P lol.
    Anywhoo, i hope you update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter >XD

    ^_^ Ruuka
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  • From ANON - White_Youkai on July 12, 2008
    Wow... I have no words... The story is really amazing. It's been a while since I've read such a good story. The plot is really good. When I started reading the fiction I couldn't stop. I finished it all in one day... (hell, my mother was very angry at me cuz I had to help her with house chores and instead of doing it, I was sitting and reading the story. Hehe but it was worth!) The end of the last chapter left me laughing. Poor Sesshomaru... Is he really going to ask Jaken approve his marriage with Rin? Because if I remember correctly, Jaken is older than Sesshomaru and he is the Demon Lord's of the West pack member.
    Well about Sesshomaru's mate/wife, I think that he somehow managed to undo the mating marks with his father’s fang. Right? Back then the Lord of the North had something in mind and I guess he found a solution how to make his daughter and Sesshomaru happy. Now that I think about it, does Sesshoharu has to kill his mate? But if he does, he is going to die too. He wouldn’t be able to revive her before his death… But on the other hand he has good reflexes… Hehe, well I can’t wait for the next chapter.
    I love the way you portrayed the characters of this story. Sesshomaru is so true to himself and the way you presented Totosay (urgh... not sure about the spelling) I could almost hear his voice in my head. Good job!
    All in all, the story was amazing. So please, do not torture us, the readers, cuz we are dying to know how the story will end. Please, just do not stop writing this fan-fiction. Update as soon as you can.

    P.S. E-mail me when the story is updated. My e-mail is: white_youkai@yahoo.com
    Thank you very much. ^_^

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  • From ANON - Nahaujaret on March 26, 2008
    I absolutely love your fic and can't wait for you to update. Keep up the wonderful work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on February 21, 2008
    Thank you for not abandoning this story. It's one of the best Rin/Sessy stories out. Please don't make us wait 6+ months for another chapter!
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  • From oxcab on February 08, 2008
    wow...yeah where is sessy's wife? but great chapter love it ^_^
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  • From kagome2004 on February 06, 2008
    duuuuuuuuuuuuude...it's about time sesshy comes around. *sighs* i don't care how this is going to happen just as long as sesshy and rin mate. but riddle me this who is the oldest male relation.....totosi??? update soon please it is driving me insane not knowing.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on February 04, 2008
    Hey Chicky,

    You finally return. I thought that the story was going to the waste side just like my other favorite stories. I am very happy that you have updated. I hope that the next chapter will not take as long. Update really soon.
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  • From Sorceressofthenight on February 04, 2008
    Wow.......as always and about time geez I hope I don't have to wait another year for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - shadowhawk on November 29, 2007
    Oh wow!!! this is amazing and so touching and heart-wrenching...the emotions that you draw out bring tears to my eyes...I love this story and can't wait for the last chapter...I just hope that Sessy make it in time to stop Rin from accepting the marriage...I most diffently does not want him to be alone...best wishes and regards.
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  • From Sorceressofthenight on November 02, 2007
    I can't wait until the next chapter is up I truly love your work and I am looking forward to read more of them
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  • From ANON - Evee on October 06, 2007
    Love your story, but what happened to that draft and not taking as long to post the next chapter? 9 months since last post...I'm starting to worry. :(
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  • From ANON - anhimals on September 03, 2007
    i love your story and your writing style! its been a many months now since you updated! i hope you will update soon! cause i am dying to know the ending!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Evee Thorn on July 16, 2007
    So what ever happened to that rough draft of the next chapter? Without more to read, I'll actually have to do my course assignments, study for exams, and clean up the house! lol
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  • From ANON - katta on July 16, 2007
    Please update!
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  • From jenn2118 on June 03, 2007
    THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY I LOVE IT I HOPE YOU GET TO FINISH IT I CANT WAIT TO SEE
    HOW IT ENDS!!!
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