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Reviews for One Life

By : Mmoirai
  • From ANON - Fallenrose on July 13, 2005
    Chapter eight was well written, i like how you've portrayed Rin too

    She's not too weak but she also has a gentle feminine side

    Oh Sesshomaru! Open yor eyes! You too Rin! It's obvious that they are perfect for each other

    Great Chapter i look forward to seeing how Rin will explain her actions next

    Fallenrose
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  • From ANON - Daxemon on July 08, 2005
    Are you really trying to torture me with unatural means. I've been waiting days and days and days for the next installment. I'm not trying to rush you but this story is so good that I think if I don't know what happens next my brain is going to explode. Keep up the phenomenal work. As you can clearly see I'm chomping at the bit for more.
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  • From ANON - lady_green_bat on July 07, 2005
    It can't be "done"!!! You have to finish this story! You write with intelligence and a flair rarely seen on this site: the act of anticipation!!! The suspense is more than half the fun and your take on the Sess/Rin match is truly intoxicating!!!
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  • From ANON - TheFavoriteBabySister on July 07, 2005
    Well you can stop nagging, I've read chapters 7 and 8. You did a great job! Even I was getting emotional. The descriptions were memorizing. This is a Rin/Sess Fic and I am really having a hard time not picturing Rin and Lord Kazuo together. He is so handsome; startling blue eyes, hair white as snow, ears pierced several times with glittering gems, and a firm, masculine jaw line and cheekbones. I can't wait to hear the story behind the scars. He is trim and muscular with powerful arms and legs, oh I just can't get enough of him. I can't wait to see pictures, they're going to be great. Well Older Sis, until we meet again, great story and don't you dare lose interest or I WILL tell mom!
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  • From ANON - rinwantabe_sesshylove on July 06, 2005
    PLEASE!!!!!! up date soon. I love ur plot of your story and you r leaving me in suspence...Keep up the great work!

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  • From ANON - sraven on July 05, 2005
    Wow, this is great. You are an awesome writer. Can't wait to read the next chapter
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  • From ANON - One Life! on July 04, 2005
    Omg!.. please make some more on this story I'm crazy about it !!!!!!!!!!.. anyways i really hope that you do because this story is the best and with someone of your talents you soundn't stop writing them!!!...
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  • From ANON - Serenity on July 03, 2005
    Love the fic...update soon please. :)
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  • From ANON - sphinx on July 03, 2005
    ah so exciting.. aniwae i hope ya concentrare some parts on Lord kazuo"s past and his relationship to Rin...hope some love will blossom.. hope that kane wont be too disruptive towards rin and kazuo"s life... update soon great story
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  • From ladyrinremix on July 03, 2005
    OMG You know how to be angsty. Every chapter is just full of torment and heartbreak. I honestly can't take it anymore. God Lord you are too good. I honestly can smack Rin for not telling Sess that he is the one. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't let this end up as a death fic, that all this humble fan asks. You are also going in my favorites.
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  • From ANON - Lord Roushijin on June 29, 2005
    WOW......AWSOME JOB.....this is getting so good......oh please to the Lord above why did have to have such a cliffy in such a great kiss. I LOVE YOU....GREAT JOB...KEEP UP THE AWSOMELY GREAT WORK.....The next chapter is going to be as good as the last....UPDATE DATE>.....I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From aoi37 on June 27, 2005
    When will they ever learn, you can't fight the moonlight? Loved the chapter.
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  • From ANON - DAXEMON on June 27, 2005
    More, More, More, More, More. Don't do this to me (Beats head against nearest wall). Please don't leave me waiting, but don't rush either, but don't leave me waiting. Just find a middle ground somewhere in there. This is so good.
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  • From ANON - aferdeity on June 27, 2005
    nicely done though kind of disapointed at the owtcome even though i know it will end with the together right? well cant wait till next chap
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  • From ANON - Melitot on June 27, 2005
    O_O Oh my Gawd. This isn't happening! How could he... how could they...
    *Melitot faints*
    Lol. How I love your fic! It's really thrilling, not the same old sappy Sess/Rin story; gogo with the angst though! A question: how many chapters there will be? I'm dying to read the end, even if I'll be sad at that time. Keep on going like this anyway!
    Kisses
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