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By : Mmoirai
  • From ANON - rinwantabe_sesshylove on June 27, 2005
    i love this story! please up-date soon!!!

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  • From ANON - DPM on June 27, 2005
    I was totally enthralled and gripped by the emotions flowing between these two. Why can't they get their acts together (teeth gnashing here...;-) ) and be direct with each other !!! I just love how you portray Sess....boiling over on the inside but cool as a cucumber on the outside...except for that time with the tree demon when he felt he was able to really show his anger. ....But all this tension you are able to evoke from your readership is a great indicator of your talent as a writer. Thank you. I've been following this story since the first word. Please keep going.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on June 26, 2005
    Great chapter. I can not wait to read what will happen next. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - DAXEMON on June 26, 2005
    Talk about sitting on the edge of your seat. I'm practically falling over with anticipation, please don't take too long with the next chapter. I don't know how much more I can take. I guess I'm kinda in the same predicament as Sesshomaru.
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on June 26, 2005
    Sometime I wish I could reach into this stories and slap some sense into Sesshomaru!!!(really I wish I could just touch him....Oh, my dirty mind!!!!!!!!!!) I hope soon we found out a little more about Sesshomaru predicatment....How will Rin take the news when she heard it?????? update soon
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  • From ANON - JazmineD on June 26, 2005
    UPDATE ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on June 23, 2005
    Awwww!!!!!!!!!! I love this story....why why why won't Sesshomaru see that Rin loves him and not Kane and that little seduction and games he was playing she didn't understand.... Why not ask her no demand to know who she loves and then he will have his answer or just seduce her again the right way.....please can't wait for the next chapter don't keep us in suspense and please kill off Kane or make Rin confess to someone that she loves Sesshomaru and he overhears it and realize that Rin loves him......Keep up the good work and please update soon very soon.
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  • From ANON - aferdeity on June 22, 2005
    i loved it very good but im sure the tiger gy is gonna come back right?
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  • From ANON - Jazmine on June 19, 2005
    EXCELLENT FANFICTION! OH PLEASE KEEP GOING, I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Devon M on June 15, 2005
    **throws a baseball glove to Sesshomaru** Catch a clue sweetie

    :) Loved the chapter
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  • From ANON - Melitot on June 15, 2005
    Wow. This surely is one of the most beautiful SesshoumaruxRin fanfictions I've ever read! The plot's very well thought and contains the elements we all love the most about the two of them ^^ but it never gets boring.
    Interesting all the marking/mating rituals *drool for Sessh's Sparring dance* It's clear as day you've reflected on this a lot. Good, good work. And please, update soon. It makes my day ;-)
    Kisses


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  • From Henrietta on June 15, 2005
    All of your descriptions of youkai mating habits are great! Poor Rin and Sesshoumaru, misunderstanding each other so. I hope that Sesshoumaru goes with his hunch that humans may not react the same as a youkai to the sparring dance. Well, the sexual tension between those two is just too much--am looking forward to the lemons. Also, like how you portray Bokusenou in this fic.
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on June 14, 2005
    Fantastic!!!!!!!! I love the fighting dance.......those two and their noncommuncation....ARH!!!!!!!! I very curious about this agreement and this demoness that he was thinking about........and poor Rin to be stick with Kane with she loves Sesshomaru..........keep it coming please....I'll be waiting....
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  • From ANON - daxemon on June 14, 2005
    This Treasure of words has been searched for by me, forever. Finally I have found someone who not only thinks along the same lines as I for a Rin and Sesshomaru fanfic, but they also have the talent to execute it flawlessly. Breathlessly awaiting the next chapter. Thank you for giving me something to look forward to every day in anticipation.
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  • From ANON - TheFavoriteBabySister on June 14, 2005
    Yeah? Well mom loves me best! I am the baby. Anyways, great chapter, no mistakes, the dance was very creative, you made great sense of what Sesshoumaru was thinking VS what Rin was thinking- no confusion there. And man! Talk about tension, Sesshoumaru just doesn't seem to know what he wants or who he wants it from or if he really wants what it is he wants, ya know? Ya... what was that about confusion? ;) "Mairzy doats and dozy doats and liddle lamzy divey A kiddley divey too, wouldn't you." If the words sound queer and funny to your ear A little bit jumbled and jivey Sing, "Mares eat oats and does eat oats, and little lambs eat ivy" -luv ya
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