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Reviews for One Life

By : Mmoirai
  • From ANON - nomifairy on May 20, 2007
    i was looking up pictures of rin and sesshoumaru on yahoo, and the picture for one life came up. i searched my fan fiction sites and finally found the story that the picture belongs to. i love it!!! it is well written and the plot is fairly easy to follow. i can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2007
    omg!! can't wait for the next chapter!!
    keep up the good work...ur writing is heaps good!
    i'm all teary!!
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  • From ANON - Evee Thorn on March 14, 2007
    Finally! :) Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - mai on February 23, 2007
    Please, please say this has a happy ending? T_T I've been crying my eyes out over the last few chapters, and I'm going crazy with suspense over the next! Shows how good a writer you are, to get me all worked up. ;)
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on February 21, 2007
    Thank Goodness you finally updated. Kudos for the nice summary in the begining of the chapter. This is just tragic. I hope Sesshoumaru and Rin find eath other. Please don't take as long as you did before to update.
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  • From ANON - oxcab on February 21, 2007
    love it, love it, lllloooovvvee it ^_^ update soon
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  • From ANON - tigeryasha on February 21, 2007
    I've thoroughly enjoyed this story. I have to admit, for the next chapter, I'd like to see a very dramatic confrontation between Rin & Sess. I'd like to see Rin hurl all her anger at him and give him a dose of his own medicine, telling him to go back to his "purebred" bitch who can give him his "purebred" pups. I can't stand to see females who have been wronged get all meek and wishy-washy when it comes to being hurt & betrayed. Rin ought to be a reflection of the coldness and anger Sess gave her. I don't know if I'm making any sense.
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  • From debbieganda on February 21, 2007
    Geeeeeeesh! It made my head spint ... INTERESTING YET VERY COMPLICATED TWISTS ... INDEED!!!! Hope this will be a happy ending ... cuz I'm a Big FAN of Fluffy. keep it up, update soon and TC!!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - ivana C on February 21, 2007
    I want you to know that I nearly fell out of my chair when I saw that you had updated... I had all but given up hope of ever reading the ending to the love story, when suddenly -- WHAM! There it is! Chapter 18 is up!!!!!!!!!!! My heart leapt with joy! I have been following One Life since -- when? Spetember, October of 2005, I think. And, to this day, there is not another Sesshoumaru/Rin pairing that even has hope of coming close to this masterpiece. I am so glad that you updated, and this chapter certainly did not disappoint! I must say that I was troubled with the introduction of Takaeda, and began to fear that the story would end with Rin accepting his proposal, and living comfortably, if not happily ever after, while never knowing what became of her love... I am anxiously awaiting the next (and final?) chapter in this saga, and I will continue to wait if I must, even if it takes another sixteen months to complete. Genius should never be rushed!
    Thank you for a wonderful, incredible, fascinating and thoroughly engaging read!!!
    Your biggest fan,
    Ivy
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  • From ANON - Shea on February 20, 2007
    Bout damn time.........Yah, the ending is coming, please let it be happy!
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  • From on February 20, 2007
    Wow I can't wait to read the very last chapter but please let him find her and even if it is to see her with someone else at less he will know that she is ok. but still heartbreaken.
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  • From ANON - Evee Thorn on February 11, 2007
    (Im)patiently waiting on the update! :P Love the story, but don't leave us hanging! :)
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  • From ANON - Cherie on January 25, 2007
    So...I read it again. It was even better the second time around! I really love this story.

    I found a little oops, I didn't mark the chapter, stupid me, but it was when Sesshomaru was going to Totosai's (sp)forge. The line was something like "He could here the loud clangs of the sword smith working..." It's just the wrong hear here thing.

    But yes. Love love love love LOVE this and I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter!

    Good luck with your job search as well!
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  • From ANON - CherieElizabeth on December 21, 2006
    Wow. WOW. This is an amazing story. I just recently started watching InuYasha and I was familiar with the potter fiction on AFF so I decided to browse the InuYasha section. After reading a few lines of various other stories I thought that there was nothing of worth to be found, until I found your story around 2pm today, and it's now 11pm...I couldn't stop reading. You have an amazing talent for wording things so perfectly. The imagery you create is astounding. I felt as if I was being allowed to witness with my own eyes what was going on. I felt as if I were there. I cried dammit, and I don't cry. This is by far THE best fan fiction I've ever read, and I've read thousands of stories. I am forever a fan of your work! You are amazing and I'm in love with you! The plot, the revenge, how you keep the characters in canon..GAH..I lack words to properly praise you. I do hope this story is still in the works for you because it might leave my heart broken with Rin's if the story is not completed!

    Once again, you leave me in awe and I will bear your children...or pups...or whatever. I cook, I do theatrical stuff, and I illustrate novles from time to time, but I'm best at groveling at ones feet in hopes that for my good behavior and servitude I will be rewarded with more chapters!
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  • From ANON - pandy on December 03, 2006
    HOMG~~~~!!! I'm absolutely reeling~~~!! I need more of this greatness soon or I shall die.. Unless you say you'll update soon. :3
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