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By : Mmoirai
  • From ANON - amhor56 on September 28, 2006
    god help us!!! please gosh update very very soon. u dont kno how long i have waited!!!! Very nice chapter. I felt the pain they were ghoing through!! Please update soon
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  • From ANON - blue on September 28, 2006
    **whoa sorry i don't know what happened, but i accidentally pressed submit before i finished. anyways, here's the TRUE review, hehe.

    Oh man! It took you SO long to update it was TORTURE! (and I don't mean to be or sound like an annoying reviewer who bascially screams out to UPDATE!!!!!!) but i REALLY like your story, and I just wish that you'd update sooner. I mean, it's such a great story, and when I started reading the updated chapter, I kinda had to refer to chapter 16 a bit, because I wasa bit lost with the characters again. Please don't make us wait for SO long like before. This story is amazing right now. Please continue, because it's fascinating!

    ~blue
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  • From ANON - blue on September 28, 2006
    Oh man! It took you SO long to update it was TORTURE! ( and I don't mean to be or sound like an annoying reviwered who bascially screams out to UPDATE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - angel on September 28, 2006
    ~sniff sniff ~ wow that was great story .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on September 27, 2006
    Yea Rin is back (jumps for joy) I glad that she isn't dead but why is Sesshoumaru having a hard time believe her when he can tell if she is lying? Rin loves Sesshoumaru and always will, I can't wait to read the next chapter please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - C'Asia on September 27, 2006
    please update soon
    don't take as long to
    update as you did the last time
    you had me waiting for so long
    but i will tell you that you had
    this well written and i enjoyed it
    my heart is still racing please keep
    it up
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  • From ANON - Evee on August 29, 2006
    This is really very good for a first story. It flows well without the grammatical and spelling errors of many first time writings. I especially like they way you explained Rin's education, instead of just skipping over that part, and how poor Jakken was roped into being a tutor. Furthermore, your characterization of Sesshomaru, thus far, is one of the most authentic I've read. Good job. I only hope that when I get around to writing a fanfic it will read as well.
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  • From ANON - raizer on August 18, 2006
    this best not be the end!!! i loved it! great story! awesome writing!
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  • From ANON - Atchan on August 16, 2006
    Omigod... that was amazing. Positively amazing. I teared up and everything! And the whole chest/gut wrenching feeling of "omigod no..." Beautiful. Definately a favorite. There are a few typos I think since the words that were used didn't quite fit the context. But it didn't detract from the story very much at all. I think this is a story where the author's voice comes out so clear and the story well written to where minor mistakes don't matter anymore.
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  • From ANON - swiss miss on August 12, 2006
    omg... that was AMAZING. rin can't die, tho! why doesn't the tensaiga work??? =(
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  • From ANON - Stitch1706 on August 02, 2006
    please update soon! this story is pure amazing and i love it so much. I really do hope you will finish it! Congrats on such a wonderful job! I check to see if you have updated nearly everday and i can't wait till you do! Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on July 28, 2006
    I love this story sooo very much and would love to read a new chapter soon please........I'm begging you.
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  • From ANON - Phxazkyote on July 19, 2006
    *Throws a nasty 2 year old fit* you big meanie!!!! you had my captivaited attention! and then you left me hanging!!! VERY BAD!! lol. awesome awesome awesme chapters!!! please write more.
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  • From ANON - Lauren on July 16, 2006
    Wow! this is by far the best Sessh/Rin fan fiction that i have ever read! Not only did you make it suspenseful, but you also made it very interesting and enticing. I think that you did an awesome job with the conflict between sesshoumaru and rin during the fight where he was testing to see if she was marked. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it's a happy ending!!
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  • From ANON - Crimson_Rose18 on July 15, 2006
    that was so sad! *crys* she died!!! *crys more* God i hate myself! how can i read this stuff and still say if this was a really book i would buy it?! i mean this story was great!!! and i loved it! even though rin did die... *bows* thinks for writing this story. it was good and i enjoied reading it.
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