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Reviews for One Life

By : Mmoirai
  • From ANON - DPM on May 14, 2006
    Okay. It's been such a wait (*crying here*...) but I guess it was worth it. Just please don't make your readers wait that long again.

    On to the review. OMGosh !!

    Did you know I was misty-eyed and mesmerized by this chapter. It was extremely well-written and the explanations all tied together nicely and believably.

    I love the mule-headedness of Sess and Rin maintained her bravery and faithfulness to her heart through the bitter end.

    What a cliffy !!! But with just one word *PULSE* so eloquently and strategically placed and your magical prowess as a writer just opened up a whole realm of possiblities ... would she stay dead (let's hope not LOL...) ...would she be revived ??? ...and what about her disfigurement ??? would he still love her despite that (I don't believe he is shallow) ?!??!?!? so many questions....

    Now the trick is to explain away how to untangle him from his demon bride.... :-p

    Hey, but you know what ??! I have total confidence that the story will continue to be well-written, well thought out, water-tight, and of fantastic reading quality !!!



    Lovely, lovely work !!!

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  • From ANON - New Fan on May 14, 2006
    Awesome chapter. I can not believe you end it there. Please update really soon.
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  • From ANON - Destiny on May 07, 2006
    Wow! Your story is so amazing and intense! Are you sure this is your first fanfic, becase if it is, I can't wait until I could read your next story! This fanfic is ultimately one the BEST action-pack, anticipating, and alluring story I have read yet! Your plot structure is outstand from the beginning to right now. You evoked so much emotions in one's spirit, and I litterly was on verge of tears serveral times during the process of reading this story. The way that you described your characters and their thinking process is hand down logical and thrilling. You made me think and q? the plot while reading the text, and you made me feel the energy which was transfer from the fanfic toward its readers. Like I said above, this story is truly significant and I cannot wait until your next update. Don't ever stop writting because from what I have read, you either have extremely talented writting skills or you have a hella awesome editors. I will be looking foward to your future update. Have a nice day and keep writting!
    -D-

    P.S. Your lemon scenes are extrodinarily done! Will there be more during the story?
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  • From ANON - inkheart6 on May 04, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON I REALLY WHAT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPESNS NEXT
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  • From ANON - Irivel on May 03, 2006
    You are great!!!! please, keep writing. I can´t wait for the new chapter
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  • From ANON - YOUR FAN! on May 02, 2006
    OMG!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!! i haven't been to this site for a while and it was rather difficult navigating through the new layout and stuff....but you HAVE to update NOWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - starfall on May 02, 2006
    please update soon cause seriously...kane has to die so rin won't be 'in love' with him anymore
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  • From ANON - LaLaMoon on March 15, 2006
    Hello. I have been trying to keep track of your fic and I hope I have been reviewing, but it's been awhile. Sorry. You must love causing pain and misery. You left us on a cliffie. I hope you update soon. I really want to know if Sesshomaru and Rin get it together. Or did she die? I hope to see other works by you. I think I'll go looking. Thanks for writing this.

    LaLa.
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  • From ANON - ethere on February 12, 2006
    o.0 - okay, i'll still follow your story, even after you killed off rin. i was worried for a moment. please update sooner! pretty please...
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on February 06, 2006
    YAY for updating, boo for leaving a cliffy! LOL, it was great, really good and I can't wait for more. GOod job
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  • From ANON - Serena on February 01, 2006
    I've been waiting for the new chapter and I'm really interested to see how it's going to end (we all know Rin isn't really dead:P ). Great job.
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  • From ANON - Alex on January 31, 2006
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!??!?!?!??


    NOOO. Rin btter not be dead. More hot smex instead please. ;_;

    This is the first and best SesshoRin story I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - Jazmine on January 31, 2006
    You gotta update this soon! I hope Rin didn't die.
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  • From ANON - SakeMan on January 31, 2006
    *crys* It's so well written and I can't wait to see what happens next. I just love this stroy. Please Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sintar on January 30, 2006
    I have sat here reading this the better half of the evening and I have to say I absolutely ADORE this story its beautiful, erotic, sensual, and very endearing, I love your portrayal of Sesshoumaru and the sweet gentlness and fireyness of Rin, wonderful story, well thought out. I love it and will continue reading it as the updates come.

    ~Sintar
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