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By : CommanderX1125
  • From ANON - YUKANA on June 17, 2005
    that was great email me when the next chp. is up ok?
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  • From ANON - CommanderX1125 on June 16, 2005
    Sorry everyone, my update is going to be late. I just found out my grandmother has cancer so I'm going to visit her. I'll update when I find out more. Thank you for being patient.
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  • From ANON - kristen on June 16, 2005
    ok that was realy good i liked it. bye the way do u know how i can post my stories?? pleas write me back.
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  • From ANON - CommanderX1125@hotmail.com on June 13, 2005
    Thank you both for your support. Just for a note, the next chapter should be done in four or five days. Also, Sauratos, thank you very much for your kind words, I noticed as well that there are very few stories that have the secret leak out.
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  • From Sauratos on June 13, 2005
    you shouldn't be so humble. if this really is your first story, you should be proud. my first story completely sucked. it was nice to see that second chapter you added on. not many stories go into what would happen after the "magic night".
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  • From ANON - Emi on June 08, 2005
    Wow... I wish I had a mom like Kagome's! I like it- keep going! ^_^
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  • From ANON - CommanderX1125 on June 08, 2005
    Alright I'll keep that in mind, and sure I can e-mail you when I get the next chapter out. Everyone doesn't seem to mind it all that much so I see no reason not to continue. All I ask is for more reviews!!!
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  • From ANON - CommanderX1125 on June 06, 2005
    Thank-you both so much for the ideas. I was a bit unsure on which shoulder to place the mark on Kagome's shoulder, so that really helps. As for the ellaborations, I'll work on that. It never hurts to have constructive criticism. Thanks, oh and when I add chapter two, please review again!
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  • From ANON - Oluremi_Annas on June 06, 2005
    I'd say that you're off to a good start. The basic story was fine. Now embellish. Add more details to the story to stretch it and give the reader a little more to help them really get into the mood.

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  • From irish on June 06, 2005
    OH AND E-MAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDAT OKAY.
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  • From irish on June 06, 2005
    WWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    KEEP GOING THIS IS GOOD YOU NEED TO KEEP GOING (JUST WANTED TO TELL YOU SOME ADVICE INUYASHA NEEDS TO MARK HER ON HER RIGHT COLLARBONE LIKE SINKING HIS TEETH AND DRAGGING IT DOWN 3 INCHES AND TO MAKE IT STAY PERMENANT)
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  • From HettyBobcat on June 04, 2005
    This story was very nice. It was short and to the point and sometimes people really like that. :) I'm curious to see what else you come up with. Keep writing. :)
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  • From CommanderX1125 on June 03, 2005
    Thank-you both for your feedback. I'll try to keep that in mind if I have enough time to continue it. If I get lucky I should have it updated in about 4 or 5 days. As for the hugging and kissing, I'll see if I can make it a bit better in that area, like I said, this was my first shot.
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  • From ANON - inugirl on June 03, 2005
    Not bad for a first shot, it was exciting! It ended a little abruptly, coulda used a little huggn and kissn in the end haha but i liked it! Good job :)
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  • From ANON - Emi on June 03, 2005
    Wowness..... it would be cool to show how the group in the other time reacts to this. And a pregnacy would be cool.
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