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Reviews for Learning to Live Again

By : Ilana
  • From ANON - Vanessa on August 13, 2005
    Great Chapter. I so love Sango with every pairing!!! I mean almost every...Nah yeah every pairing she is just good enough and sometimes more for them. Haha... Well I hope you update soon. I really enjoy this fic but one thing. I don't really tihnk InuYasha would call her a bitch... Oh well it's your story and it's cool. Just like I hope Kagome doesn't really end with him but oh well. Bye and Sango/Koga is awsome. Now fix Miroku with some one...
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  • From ANON - Cac on August 13, 2005
    More, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more,more,more,more,more,moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
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  • From ANON - Cac on August 06, 2005
    Um, hey, I checked this in case you'd updated, and no, the chapters haven't increased, I see. But they seem to have DEcreased - wait, did you delete A/Ns or something? I can't recall if you had them...
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  • From ANON - Vanesa on August 05, 2005
    Good as always. I liked it. Please don't let Kikyo die. I mean she can literally do that again. Right. Don't I love this pairing to much.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2005
    this is a really good story and it definatley didnt come out as i expected
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  • From ANON - Cac on August 04, 2005
    YAY!! You updated, and are updating lots of you're stories, though true, at the moment I couldn't care less if you update THIS soon!
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  • From ShessomarusGirl on August 01, 2005
    Make another chapter soon. I'm working on my first story right now, but I'm trying to make a better plot. I'll start writing it when I get out of summer school. Your story is very good so far though, I want to make one just as good. Your my new role model ^.^
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  • From ANON - jen on August 01, 2005
    wow that is well just wow i hope that you will up-date the story soon !!
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  • From ANON - jen on August 01, 2005
    well i really like this chapter cuz it shows a new side to Kikyo and i like that side of her!
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  • From ANON - k-chan on July 30, 2005
    Whoa...like whoa... I'm absolutely overall impressed with this fanfic. You think it would be slightly offensive because it’s so rough, but I think it’s just right. This is probably one of the few fanfics where the characters are actually in character within the limits they’re given (I mean in the real show I doubt Kikyo and Sesshomaru would end up like this). You are very talented in that this fanfic is not too aggressive since in most “real” fanfics I’ve seen, it gets too violent and gory that it’s just kinda gross or it makes me depressed. Here it’s enough to show the emotion but also be enjoyable and I want to keep reading (oh yes, I WANT to keep reading, you will update, yes you will). I love how you have Kikyo and Sesshomaru starting to feel something but not already head-over-heels for each other. Though, the two faults I see, is that I doubt Sesshomaru would ever let Rin get raped but hey, it’s working with this fanfiction. Also for all the intelligence and wit Kikyo seems to have, you think she’d be able to explain sex or give better advice to Rin… But hey, if I woke up naked in that position (no pun intended) I don’t think I’d be able to give good advice out of thin air either. As far as technical, I have found little or no obvious grammar/spelling mistakes (and if I did I can’t remember them). Tips to you for actually using spell check (lol). Your style of writing is very good, keeps it flowing, not so detailed but enough to get the picture (as opposed to me who can’t get enough details). Originality/Creativity gets a huge thumbs up to the fanfic idea. Sess/Kik is not my fav but a defiant spot in my heart as far as Inu pairings go. The whole concept of how everything is playing out with everyone (of importance to the love triangle ((or square or whatever shape it is now)) that is) is very well thought out and, yet again, I am delighted to see everyone’s feelings kept real to their actual personalities. Also, I was positively delighted in the first chapter when it switched from Kikyo’s pov to Kagome’s, just reminds me of the attitude of every other Kag/Kik fanfic I see (also it shows your understanding of the two groups of haters and I find it hilarious how you can use both in the same fanfic). And as you can see my enjoyment factor of this fanfic is 11 and infinity! Well, I hope my rambling encourages or helps you in some way. I’m glad to hear you won’t give up on this fanfic and hope you never do. If you do, you will probably get an equally long review on my disappointment and encouragement to get you started again. ^^

    Sincerely,

    k-chan ^___^ ( or gumi-sama or yuzy200 ^^; )

    P.S. I already put this review up on MM.org but I thought it would be better as one, MM.org can’t handle my long review! xD
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2005
    Oh, you wrote Alpha? Loved that. Anyway, can't wait for more on this...
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on July 29, 2005
    OMG! I love you! This is wonderful. Damn what a great chapter. I really enjoy how you really put every character in order. I really love this story. well if you could see me I am freaking crying. So keep writing I tell you. I LOVE YOU. One tihng I had to ask. Can she realy SIT Inuyasha? I think it is really possible because of her being the orginal. Nevermind she was always herself and a wonderful person. Sesshoumaru might be wll in hiding his feelings, but he is a great person and a great (Sex God!!!)
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  • From ShessomarusGirl on July 27, 2005
    Writer's block will end soon enough. I hope it will, I love your story. Think outside the box and make a very creative twist happen in the story, I love it when that happens.
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  • From ANON - Marissa on July 16, 2005
    this story rocks. update soon.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on July 15, 2005
    I normally review this story on MM. Out of curiosity I came and looked at the latest chapter over here on AFF. I saw what you wrote on your A/N. I cannot believe someone would say that to you. ......I am the same way, I go back and edit, if I notice something like a missing 's' or something and I go fix it. I know alot of times, by the time I get the story up, I'm wiped out and blurry eyed. Then reading it fresh eyed for the 100th time, you notice things. So if I go in and change something, I put *editing* on the summery. That way it shows what you are doing. That's just an idea. I know it would eat at me otherwise.

    This is a great story!! Keep up the good work!!
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