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Reviews for Under the Egyptian Sun

By : Crystal56
  • From ANON - DaisyLee1239 on June 24, 2005
    Keep up the good work! update soon please!
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  • From ANON - yukana on June 24, 2005
    That was great!!! Your story is 1st in my top 5 so keep going it is really good. (I'd keep going one of my other stories is catching up and I want this one to be the 1st) (By the way this is just a feedback Inuyasha has amber or gold eyes.I think it's amber though.)
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  • From ANON - Toy girl on June 24, 2005
    i hope u finish the story i was staring to think u didnt care anywayz plz update ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Anaidil on June 23, 2005
    This story is amazing!!!! I really love it and the detail that it’s based in facts from Egypt makes it even more amazing. I’m really looking forward in reading more chapters. Thank you for updating this fic.
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  • From ANON - BlackmagicFoxkitten on June 23, 2005
    Heheheheheh. Me again! I'm sorry to just review out of the blue again but I had something to say. I was looking at something in a book and it was Egyptian Zodiac. I looked for my birthday. It just so happens that my Egyptian sign is Anubis! It said that my soul is supposedly clever and evil. And I think that describes me pretty well. ^.^
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  • From ANON - BlackmagicFoxkitten (not signed in) on June 23, 2005
    WOW! This was awesome! Please update as soon as you are able! I really like this idea and I really like this fic! Ja ne! Luv, Fox
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  • From ANON - LHacher on June 21, 2005
    Great start. If this is a Kag Inu fic, maybe it would be nice to see how the good she serves feels about the relationship.
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  • From ANON - poopoo on June 20, 2005
    nice update soon plz -_-
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  • From ANON - anonymous on June 19, 2005
    it rocks. but hurry up and update i want to read more
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on June 18, 2005
    COOL TIME PEIRIOD SETING FOR AN INU YASHA FIC....I TOTALY LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE BY THE WAY, AND AM HOPEING THAT YOU WILL CREATE MORE CHAPTERS FOR THIS STORY REALY, REEEALY, SOOOON...CAUSE I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT..OOH, ALMOST FORGOT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK O.K.
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  • From ANON - Micca on June 18, 2005
    This is GREAT! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Radish on June 16, 2005
    Very creative, good writing, I dig, I dig very much.
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  • From ANON - Knight2 on June 16, 2005
    Seems very good, I hope you continue this fic soon.
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  • From ANON - Isis on June 14, 2005
    Okay, so I'm biased... just look at my name... But I really think that you should make Kagome a priestess of Isis, seeing as how Isis is also a fertility god, and it'd be funny... Cause you made Inuyasha a fertility god as well.

    Anubis is kinda dark, being the master of souls and all, and I really don't think Kagome's with her trusting heart and inherent goodness would really want to be a priestess for a death god.

    Just a thought, not a demand. Otherwise, good grammar overall. You might want to use a bit more description rather than blunt sentences and dialouge. As my writing teacher once told me: Show, don't tell. I think this story has a lot of potential.
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  • From ANON - Neo on June 14, 2005
    love the story...a new twist on the gang..please keep writing would love to see how it ends...
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