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Reviews for Under the Egyptian Sun

By : Crystal56
  • From ANON - inu hanyou nikkie on June 13, 2005
    WOW!! This is good... Super.. Just as promising as your other story... Which I really do VERY much hope that you are not going to abandon.. I really enjoy that story as well.. Please; if you can, continue with both your stories... You really have soooooo much promise as a writer.... Update as you can with your story.... Do make Inuyasha work hard for his prize... evil smirk.....
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  • From ANON - lonely on June 12, 2005
    cool..... try to update this story .
    im itching to find out whats next.....
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  • From ANON - Anaidil on June 11, 2005
    I love it!!!!! Please!!!!!please update soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - katt_jam on June 10, 2005
    Sounds like this will turn out to be a great story, I really liked the first chapter and will be checking back to read new chaps. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Saer on June 10, 2005
    Wow this is turning out to be a good fic, I like how you what each characters role was and how it came to play in the story. I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - You don\'t need to know on June 10, 2005
    Jep it's much better. It really has a lot potential.
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  • From Precious on June 10, 2005
    Okay I will bow to you for your descriptions. Everything down to the way the fish were left on the bank after the floods. Beautiful! I love Egypt myself and you have brought it to life with your words. Next, wonderful casting job. I know usually InuYasha’s role would be different but you have to make the story work. I’m also proud you didn’t make Kagome a priestess but a faithful servant of her god. That way there is no complication about the taboos of her having feelings besides her inner morals. But I do wonder what their reactions will be. Kagome tries to stay clear of guys but then again he is dressed in a “needy” fashion. So as long as InuYasha’s mouth doesn’t screw anything up he might be invited to diner. I know as time goes on Naraku will be pissed Kagome is chosen over Kanna, might make trouble for Kagome but hey what are you going to do against a god? I’m sure you’ll tell us. And thank you for keeping Koga and InuYasha locking horns. Some of my favorite battles are between them. Well good work and happy updating. I now see why Higurashi Inc. wasn’t updated. But I’m making sure to quench the thirst of your muse so we don’t have a repeat performance.
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  • From ANON - Anika on June 09, 2005
    that's so romantic. write more, please
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  • From ANON - SchorrDifferent on June 09, 2005
    i like it ! but don't leave me hanging u hear! I want to know what are inuyasha the god of fertilatly thinks of are little prietess of nubis, how fitting i must say to put kagome under the watch of a god that looks like a dog !!! ra is a bird so i'm confused on that part LOL. Who the heck cares keep writing i'll check in to see if i got anymore of the story !!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP !
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  • From ANON - I\'m an Ice Queen on June 09, 2005
    Hello, I love your story....update soon please.
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