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Reviews for As Long As You're Mine

By : tareacel
  • From Charity on January 23, 2009
    A really good oneshot. You captured their feelings over being resurrected and not knowing how things might end up for them well. A nice song too.
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  • From ANON - Bouken on July 22, 2006
    Soooooo good!! I'm impressed of how good it all sound when being readed, the words and so... I'm a big fan off the shichinintais, mostly ban and jako (Soo cute^^)..... AndI tell; This is one off the best I've ever read with them^^ be proud....
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  • From ANON - Stardust on July 17, 2006
    Yay! I'm a Bajatsu fan and that was awsome. Hmm they were dead for ten years and I sepose it would have been thier souls yurning each other, but still I wish I could right like you.
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on November 11, 2005
    ahhhh, yet another awesome ban/jak story from you! i'm glad i decided to look for some and found yours.. ^___^
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  • From ANON - ...... on October 26, 2005
    kool
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  • From ANON - dead men turn me on on October 23, 2005
    no offence but this is sick jakotsu and bankotsu are just friends! jakotsu loves inuyasha not his best friend! besides bankotsu is MINE all mine!!!! ewwww grosss best friends doing it!!!! ahhhhh!!!! yes i no im insane
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  • From ANON - Yasmin on October 13, 2005
    This was an amazing peice of writing. I loved the *cough*lemon*cough*

    ...

    It's to good to be a one shot!!!!
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  • From ANON - MARY on October 04, 2005
    I REALLY LIKED THE STORY. PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE STORIES.
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  • From LunaraDeNaraku on September 18, 2005
    Yeaaaaaaah... So I said before that I loved you... Now... Er, well... I love you even more. lol
    You left them nameless! How ingenius of you, tarea! What an impact.
    Many cookies!
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  • From ANON - Eboni on August 08, 2005
    Hehehe, girl. You sure know how to work things into a climax. You could feel the passion as well as the ejaculation building hehehee. I usually don't read love making scenes. I don't see why you don't think you're a good writer. You have a great flow with words.
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  • From ANON - Hotnspicyfox on July 08, 2005
    That was one of the most beautiful things to travel from my eyes to my brain. The writing style was so fitting, so flowing, it feels like drinking something good and the sex had just the right combanation of steamy and sweet. You know, the thing that makes Jakotsu/Bankotsu one of my favorite pairings is the tragedy in it and which you've captured that flawlessly. The fact that both know their time together is limited but just want to enjoy it for as long as possible........"as long as you're mine."

    I think I need a box of kleenex.

    Anyways, you're a brilliant writer and have great taste in music (I'm downloading the song even as I type.) Big congratulations!
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  • From ANON - subjunctivity on July 05, 2005
    Very nice sex scene and story. You have an excellent style of writing. It's unfortunate that you don't get as many reviews as you want--and deserve--but requesting them sometimes annoys people and convinces them not to review, rather than the other way around.
    Two little fastidious comments:

    1. Limbs that move by themselves often sound odd in an otherwise active story--unless the limb movements are intentionally such. [from the Marshall Method of writing novels]
    2. Calling eyes 'orbs' is just a little weird. Try another word. [From "Avoiding Mistakes in Fanfiction", guidelines on some fiction site]

    You did an excellent job at not letting the song dominate your story. Anyway, now I'll go read your other stories. Great job on this one.
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  • From ANON - crystal on June 21, 2005
    Wow!! You have such a descriptive style in your writing. Please continue writing. I thought that the song interwoven between the prose only heightened and enhanced the actual story. Very beautifully done, and keep up the good work. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - shichinintailuv on June 12, 2005
    This is really great. I love the way it is written and the flow of the whole thing. Great job babe. ^^
    Much Love,
    ~Mac~
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  • From ANON - hanyou slave on June 11, 2005
    That was very romantic
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