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Reviews for I just want to be loved

By : Ryoko7002002
  • From ANON - Saiyanluver on July 26, 2005
    I like where this is going. you've got a good story. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Onyxlight on July 18, 2005
    of course you should continue...you are off to an interesting start
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  • From ANON - Frozen Tuna Queen on July 12, 2005
    Thats it? Man you need to write more!
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  • From ANON - Frozen Tuna Queen on July 12, 2005
    Thats it? Man you need to write more!
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  • From on July 06, 2005
    i like it so far, wish the chapter was alittle longer though. Of course i say that to my sister all the time when i read her stories and she hits me for it, lol.
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  • From ANON - Inugirl1117 on June 20, 2005
    hey ..... I think it's great so far !!!!
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  • From ANON - Angel of Immortality on June 19, 2005
    Nice start. It would be better if it had longer chapters then that, bu that makes a nice introduction. Angel Sere
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  • From ANON - senachan141 on June 13, 2005
    AACK!!NO!!NO!!PLEASE DON'T CONTINUE!!THIS IS GOING IN THE WRONG DIRECTION!!
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  • From ANON - Kim on June 12, 2005
    continue I want read some more ^_^
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  • From ANON - lady on June 11, 2005
    what is there isn't bad, but not sure where you are going. might be neet to see.write some more and give us an idea of your writing stye and where it is going.
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  • From ANON - TheMysticalDragon on June 11, 2005
    Your story is good, but you need a little but of work on it. We all have our start somewhere. I agree with the other reviewers where you need to add atleast a line between spoken parts ie

    "hello, how are you"

    "Fine, Thank you"

    And more detail. Writing is a good conductor for imagination, so dont skimp on details. Sometimes it takes more time setting the scene, but the better the description, the better the reader can imagine it!

    Also when you are speaking to the reader use (A/N: ) or (Author's Note)

    feel free to email me at ryo_oh_ki_78@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - invisible one on June 11, 2005
    ::stares in shock::

    okay... I can understand the fics where InuYasha is grown, but the child stories........
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  • From ANON - Kailover on June 11, 2005
    Interesting. I enjoyed that but its a bit 2 short. Keep up the good work and plz continue this story and could u make the chapters longer
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  • From ANON - Becca on June 11, 2005
    Your fic is really good so far, and just a word of advice, don't get mad or anything I'm just trying to help.

    When you have two characters talking to each other, it helps to put a space between the sets of "". Also, don't forget your punctuation or grammer, some people can be real stiffs about that sort of thing and not be so nice in letting others know.

    I would like to know if you need a beta reader, email me when if you want I won't be offended if you don't. I just hope I haven't offended you.

    That's all for now. Keep up the fic writing.
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