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Reviews for The Poison of Erised

By : Vyncent
  • From ANON - Linda on August 08, 2005
    I especially loved this chapter because it brings their bond to a new level. It's not only the physical, but the spiritual connection of them.(Although the physiclal is pretty dam good!)Looking foward to what comes next...and when they'll be together again and when can see the bond strengthen even more. Hurry!
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  • From ANON - Linda on August 08, 2005
    OH MY GOD....I'm still fanning myself! In the words of Kag....MORE MORE!
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  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on August 08, 2005
    Great chapter as always!

    Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2005
    I have been following your story but I am the same way if the next chapter takes to long then I lose interest in it , however I have been following along and I am sorry that I haven't reviewed I do respect your opion so I hope the story will turn out alright on the other site
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  • From ANON - Kokuei on August 05, 2005
    No you have to continue....I really like this story....and it's true you shouldn't have to be one of those people who demand reviews. I mean you can't make people like your writing it just isn't right. Anyway please continue with this it's really really good! This is one of the few good Sessho/Kagome fics I read on here anymore alot of them aren't really that good and don't really catch my attention but this one does! Please continue with this fic!
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  • From ANON - J on August 05, 2005
    I want to know how I vote so you win like your suppose to. Congrats man. God bless!! I do love your stories.
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  • From ANON - too lazy on August 05, 2005
    I haven't read this yet, but if it's anything like the beast awakens one was, I'm sure I'm ganna love it. One thing straight off the bat that I MUST correct you on though is: "tenchi" is NOT angel! I'm really not sure where people keep gettting that from... I'm guessing it's because the heard the real word for angel -- "tenshi" -- and then heard someone talking about "tenchi" from 'tenchi muyo!' and got it confused. According to my dictionary, "tenchi" is 'creation of heaven and earth'. So, again, it's "tenshi" not "tenchi". I'll come back with a better review once I've actually read the story. Though I must say... I really do think you should continue with the beast awakens story:P
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  • From ANON - Alleycat on August 04, 2005
    Oh! Come on! Thats not fare! I check every day to see if you have updated this and your other stories! There are a lot more people who read but just don't review. And yes I know its frusterating but most people get lazy about reviewing or don't have time. Well at any rate I hope you reconcider but if you don't, can I at least get your author name on Single spark, so I can keep following along? I really do love this story. can you email me it, please?

    Thanks.
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  • From Dunkelgelb on August 03, 2005
    Sweet, holy mother of God! Lemonization, thy name is Vyncent!

    **kneels and bows head**

    My liege!
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  • From ANON - inuchik on August 03, 2005
    i love it and cant wait for more please update soon. :P
    - love inuchik


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  • From ANON - moosegirl13 (AKA. Morgan) on August 03, 2005
    My god your chapters are long! (Not that I'm complaining ^_^). Your fic is great and I look forward to reading more. Please update soon, okay? If you don't, I don't what I would do!! Keep up the great work!!! -Thanks!
    ~Morgan
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  • From ANON - REadER on August 02, 2005
    I hope Kagome doesn't get mad at Sesshoumaru. I think Kagome should remember the time in the cave, because that showed how much Sesshoumaru loved her and she wouldn't be mad at him if she knew how he really felt. I wanna know what would happen if Kagome went back to her own time. Would she still crave for him? Will he follow and be able to go through the well? Does Kagome have dreams about Sesshoumaru?
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  • From ANON - Jessie on August 01, 2005
    ^_^ I just finished reading the third or fourth chapter in your story, "The Poison of Erised" and I can't stop myself from saying that I LOVE the way your write, and I'm sure that you hear that all the time. I, myself, am I writer, though I can never get the courage to put my work on any website; But the way you write, it's just simply amazing!! I really hope that you keep it up and don't let what the "flamers" say get to you.



    Your work is just amazing

    ----Jessie
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  • From ANON - monecque on July 30, 2005
    How could you leave it like that? I was so into it too.
    This story is so good I just could not put it down so to speek.
    I am sad cause the last chapter is so short.
    It has been nine chapters don't you think that it is time for Sesshomaru
    to show himself. This story is very sexy in an obsessive way. Keep up the good work.

    Monecque
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  • From ANON - sel on July 29, 2005
    Ooooooo DAMN An invisable bear youkai deadly as hell!!
    I hope sesshomaru starts being more upfront about things,
    and I wonder what inuyasha will do when he finds out about his brother and Kagome.

    Hrmmm...*ponders this and more* Sel~
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