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Reviews for The Poison of Erised

By : Vyncent
  • From ANON - Cassie on July 06, 2005
    My goodness I had to get up this morning and read this chapter I tried last night but my kids kept me up and the first thing I did this morning was read this chapter 6..... and boy was it hottttttttttt. I very much enjoyed the fact that Kagome gave Sesshomaru back his arm I really liked that he being able to touch her with both arms now...... Yes I would like to know myself about the changes Kagome is going thru especially while their mating... Why is she in a demon form and why do she transforms back into a human afterwards..... and this time will the effects of the poison stay and make her stay demon I really hope so...And when will she realize what she is doing, and doing it with Sesshomaru? Will she continue with him I truly hope so and will she accept him as her mate and when will Sesshomaru let the others know about their little escapade in the forest,especailly Inuyasha for treating her so bad and all ... and boy after reading this chapter I had to take a nice cold shower to settle myself down... I have to say that this story is so hot it makes u think about doing the same thing to your boyfriend/girlfriend minus the fangs, blood and the making them your mate and all...Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter... chapter 7 to be exact... please don't keep us the fans waiting for long I need to know how this will come out..... ^_______________________________^
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  • From ANON - komiko on July 03, 2005
    i just love your fics.. I can tell this one is going to as great as your last.
    update real soon please please ppppplease.
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  • From ANON - MysticAngel77 on July 02, 2005
    So much passion! This is a great story so far and I only wish you would update faster < wink wink > How come Kagome doesn't think it's odd that she's acting so strangely lately (when she's conscious at least)? I wonder when she finds out about these encounters if she'll be horrified at the thought of her and Sesshoumaru, or if she's always sort of had a fascination with him... hmm... either way, I'm hooked! The only thing I was disappointed with in this chapter was that the sex scene was sort of too similar to the first one they had together, maybe that was your intention, but maybe next time something unexpected could happen. You're the author, I wont tell you how to write! Keep doing the updates and I'll keep sending cookies! < hands you a cookie >
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  • From ANON - J on July 01, 2005
    Yes it's me again, she seems to have some of the abilities of a demon. What I want to know is that if the potion was given to her does she still have a chance to refuse sess as a mate because she was under something? Is inuyasha with you know who and will he be mad at her for being his sister-in-law? In you darkness they're together what about here? Damn you raise more questions then give answers and that's upsetting but then again that is whats done to have me coming back for more. You've got me chained to you for more information. Damn five chapters in and there is already a small mountain of questions threating to become more. You are that damn Good or just love giving people more headaches then anything? I say both but then again I bang my head on things to get to that point. Your taking that away from me when I read this. *glares at author* *Bows* Thank you for that!! ; @-->--


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  • From Idontreallylikeyou on July 01, 2005
    Thats perfectly alright, maybe it was just me and I was having a boring day or something. I like your story very much though and I can't wait for the next chapter.
    l8er.
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  • From ANON - pianogoddess on June 30, 2005
    *mwah* You are an amazing writer! I'm absolutly captivated by your storyline, keep up the excellent work! :o)
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  • From ANON - EchoKat on June 27, 2005
    this story is wonderful, and your comment at the end of chapter 4 was inspiring. keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - qnofserenity on June 26, 2005
    I don't usually do reviews to much, since I read a lot of Anime. But this is a GREAT story, I luv it. In fact I luv all the stories you've written (heck! I've gone back and reread them again several time, not many authors can say that) and I'm always looking out for your updates. As to 50+ years and liking Japanese Anime you are not alone... I'm 30+ myself and luv it with a passion... Hey, I'm a kid at heart, so sue me (for the lawyers: I don't have a dime to my name anywayz so you'll get nothing)... As to your flamer, get a life and get a clue. Life is about the good times and the bad times, it's how you get through those time that's important. Again, I want you to know, I absolutely luv the stories you write and can't wait to read the next installment. A loyal Anime Fan - QnofSerenity.
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  • From ANON - Sel on June 26, 2005
    I am right there in the story and still loving it..

    Can't wait for more! patiently waiting...

    Always,
    Sel...
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  • From ANON - animeluva on June 26, 2005
    I really enjoyed this story and i hope you will update soon.....
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on June 26, 2005
    I immediately was hooked to this story! Great lemons too! *wink* very very very good lemons. You definitely have a talent for writing! Keep up the good work. I really hope you update soon. Oh yes...KUDOS for the long chapters. Thanks!!
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  • From ANON - amhor on June 26, 2005
    I immediately was hooked to this story! Great lemons too! *wink* very very very good lemons. You definitely have a talent for writing! Keep up the good work. I really hope you update soon. Oh yes...KUDOS for the long chapters. Thanks!!
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  • From ANON - Knight2 on June 26, 2005
    Intresting story, I'm waiting for next chapter. BTW, I hope there will be no Inuyasha/Kikyo pairing. I hate Kikyo.
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  • From ANON - FayeMegan on June 26, 2005
    wow! As great as ever! I'm really liking this so far! I love Sesshoumaru/Kagome pairings! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - idontreallylikeyou on June 25, 2005
    your story is good but I keep thinking that you spent to much time explaining stuff at the begining, and for awhile there you almost lost me but I liked it very much once I got into it. update soon so we can see where your story goes.

    l8er.
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