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By : inuyashafanaticllmv
  • From ANON - Sirenic Sprite (not logged in) on June 27, 2005
    If you had a death in your family, then you should not be apologizing. Take the time you need. Not everyone is able to update at a fast pace. I update quickly, but we have totally different lives. Readers kill me trying to rush the author when they have no idea what may be going on in that person's life. It's not like you're getting paid to write, so they should shut the hell up. Do your best, and good luck.
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  • From ANON - monara on June 27, 2005
    r u going to finish the fic cause its startin to annoy me...
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  • From ANON - Radish on June 25, 2005
    While the premise of the story is quite interesting and your writing seems good enough, the dialogue is very nearly unreadable. A single paragraph shouldn't contain dialogue from multiple characters, a new paragraph should be started whenever a different character is speaking. The thought of trying to read through a paragraph riddled with such a dizzying mess of back-to-back quotation marks can feel as daunting a task as climbing Everest. I genuinely wish to read this story, but I'm not willing to climb Everest to do it.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on June 25, 2005
    I like your story and I can not wate for the next one . So when is it coming out?

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  • From ANON - Toy girl on June 25, 2005
    that was mean......a clify like that make thetrest ASAP!!!!!
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  • From ANON - bebe on June 24, 2005
    dude u have to write more. i so wanna find out what happens to Kagome. plz write plz write!
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  • From ANON - Twilight on June 24, 2005
    Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2005
    I like it so far. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Rei on June 21, 2005
    wow i like this fic tehehehe can you please email me with the title when you update? well see yain the next chapter! i really like it!
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  • From ANON - ayesha on June 19, 2005
    WOW!!!!!!!!!!! this was really good. hope u update soon. i really wanna knoe wat happens.... SOON!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO!!!!!!!!!! keep it up!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Demon_aura on June 19, 2005
    Wow! That was a really good first chapter! And although the cliffie was evil, I must admit, it was a good one! Might i suggest something? well two somethings actually. Firstly: you posted the summary in the first chapter and a note on the second. Maybe combine them? a lot of people might just leave if they find they have to skip the first couple of "chapters" to get to the story. Secondly, your convos in the story. Try to space out the speech. I'm not sure if it's just the internet messing it up but your convos between characters are just one big paragraph. Every time a new person speaks, hit the enter botton and make a new paragraph! Ok! That's it! i didn't see and spelling/grammer error, so good job! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - JenJin on June 19, 2005
    evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lmao jk update! i love it!!!!!
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  • From on June 18, 2005
    OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! [FYI 5 OMG's is a really good sign that i only give to stories with really good talent so u should b proud!] I already know im going to love this story so please don't hold back on me and everyone else who loves this story come on i beg of u don't do it!!! Update real soon or ill keep bugging you and bugging you until you do...... Muahahahaha!!
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  • From ANON - Hanyo16 on June 18, 2005
    Its a strange plot but I like it ! please do contine it is very interesting
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  • From ANON - lalalala on June 16, 2005
    hey ..... update i want to read more its so exciting!!
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