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Reviews for Immortal Love

By : EnchantedFaery
  • From ANON - Shiva11 on June 23, 2005
    That was good. If I were Kagome, I would have followed through with the vision. lol. CONTINUE!
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  • From ANON - Keiharu on June 22, 2005
    wow... surprisingly, your fanfic was the most meaningful one i have read from this site... the most beeeeautifully written "drama" lol. I'm impressed. You ARE gonna continue writing it right? Oh and by the way, the additional comments you concluded in the end are hilarious. I didn't know I'd end up reading an Inuyasha fic again and yours is sooooo good!! ^-^ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ continue it!!!!! I really like this story! Me wanna read what happens! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 19, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - rachi on June 18, 2005
    i liked it, it was very nice. Death is always part of my own stories. Not the ones I post on here, just the ones I write for fun. When I get bored. Anyway, it was very nice. But toward the end I did notice that you switched tenses, and then switched back. Like,

    Kagome rose slowly from the river, as if savoring it. She is picking up the dagger, rolling in in her palm as if to memorize it. she looks into the forest, feeling eyes on her body from somewhere deep within the dark foliage. The young woman turned her attention back to the dagger......

    I just made up a line. Do you see? I don't mind, I'm just pointing it out. But, really, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I do hope you continue very soon?? ja!! ^-^
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  • From ANON - crestfallenpetal on June 18, 2005
    These two chapters, I must say, is so vitally new to what I normally would read, it is riveting. Although, I shudder at the thought of the
    suicide ... but I guess that is what makes the plot so spellbindingly wicked ... extremely intoxicating.

    keep up the work... ^__^
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  • From ANON - Jazmine on June 18, 2005
    For a second there I actully thought Kaogme stabbed both Inuyasha and that son of a bitch Kikyo. Still, she shouldn't cut herself because she can't be with Inuyasha. I mean that's just stupid. Great Fanfiction! Keep Going. I started one too. Mines is My One and Only Love.
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