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Reviews for You Belong to me part 2

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 28, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From Rebeldedm on October 09, 2006
    Wow this story rocks it took awhile but wow UPDATE SOON and thanks for your review!!
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  • From XxSangoxX on September 21, 2006
    i heart you.

    ps.
    thanks for reviewing
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  • From XxSangoxX on September 21, 2006
    I
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  • From ANON - Mirokus dream on August 17, 2006
    ldymoonluvsinuyasha you rock!!! I've been reading Betrayal's Gift and I love it, I read through the comments of this story and I would suggest that you just not pay any attention to what that person said, they sure had a lot to say but obviously they were jealous. So what if you didn't put quotations it's your story, I followed it just fine I guess they were not intelligent enough to get the picture. When they write their own story they can put all the damn quotations they want.

    Anyway, enough of that are you goint to write out what Miroku and Sango do. I loved the visuals you gave of Inuyasha all that sweat and passion as you can tell I am a fan of Miroku so please write a story about him.

    Carmen
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2006
    um... you have no idea how to write proper ly do you?

    i don't know if you realize this but, you need quotations, spacing,
    and you get confused alot when it comes to the point of view and tense
    that you are speaking in.

    ugh.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on June 28, 2005
    Uh Wow, that was some very vivid imagery there. I am still hot over the scene of Inuyasha doing what he should be good at. (Fans self) Anyone who reads this story will be very pleased, no satisfied with the end results. I tip my hat to you ldymoonluvsinuyasha, please keep writing.

    your fan
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  • From ANON - Big Bad John on June 27, 2005
    I thought that the story was vivid in description when it needed to be. I had a hard time focusing at the beginning as it dragged, but then had a hard on later and was really focused. Felt that the story line carried over well from the first story.
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  • From ANON - Oceanna on June 22, 2005
    I need a cigarette (puff puff "and I don't even smoke" ) whoa I tell you I am jealous I loved everyone of your stories I tell you Kouga, Inu wow you are some verry strong and virile men amen to that..........The way you wrote it with feel girl gave me such naughty thoughts that if I had of piece of shikon it would turn straight black cause I must say I was EXCITED "notice those words are capitalized ok well now I must say I'm so impressed with what you did that I have to give you a CHALLENGE "heheheh as I laugh evily" You need to hook up Sango & Miroku OF course my MAN of the HOUR LORD SHESSY and Kagura I think how does that sound dare to take the challenge I will wait to see if you do just keep up your series of "YOU BELONG TO ME" I know you had just gotten into Mirku and Sango so continue please then end it with Lord Shessy and Kagura..............She don't you just love it when My plan comes together........KEEP it up kay bye.....
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2005
    awesome write more, hey maybe a sesshoumaru story :P
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  • From Aubs on June 22, 2005
    I just came across your stories and I went ahead and read all three of them in order. I have to say, such intense sex isn't normally my forte (I guess I'm a romantic softie at heart) but I really got into all three parts of this fic. Men being dominant can definately be exciting, no? There were also alot of elements that I thought were unique and when I read them they made total sense. Like Inuyasha using tetsusaiga (spelling?) to open the barrier to Kagome's time. Duh, why didn't I think of that? And after reading the high-handed way you had the characters reunite I thought how appropriate it would be to have Miroku and Sango experiance something similar.....literally 30 seconds before I read that you had the same idea first! Anyways, thanks for the good read. I hope you continue to write. And I noticed a few comments about your lack of punctuation. Don't worry too much about it. You'll develop that stuff better as you go but it's the imagination that can't be learned! Hope to see you soon =)
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  • From ANON - Lizzy on June 22, 2005
    hehe, I liked it. too bad you didnt mark out what was conversation with "[text]" or - [text]
    I still enjoyed it, very much.
    Liz~
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  • From fallenangel7583 on June 22, 2005
    good strong lemon. very well played out. it's well written except for the missing qoutation marks but other then for that, great stuff! loved it!
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