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Reviews for By the Bay

By : sakepolitan
  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 27, 2005
    You hated that chapter! Who are you, Bethoven? It was lovely and exciting! I just read through the whole fic and couldn't stop. I love your style. The ideas with the oranges and riddle are absolutely unique. This is totally awesome!

    Snowfall
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  • From Mmoirai on December 12, 2005
    Ummm...'The End'??? Okay, that was just mean! I'll just have to put you in my fav's so that I can check up on you from time to time...meany!
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  • From ANON - BirdieBlythe on August 12, 2005
    WTF??!!! Wgy can't she?? What's wrong with her!!! I'd freakin throttle her...unless she want's him to ask her father or other high ranking male figure for her hand first. then it's okay ^^ Other wise....
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  • From ANON - GenshikenNoTaicho on July 28, 2005
    YAY!!!! Coooooool fic! Character develpment is all to nice in this one. Like your writing! Like the story! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - HentaiMitai on July 28, 2005
    Hello! I really like this fic! SF is awsome and I like the fog thing in that chapter! Heheh! Well, Im sorry to hear you wont be posting for a while. I check everyday for updates. Please come back with more than one chapter! =3
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  • From ANON - IHateKikyo00021 on July 28, 2005
    Noooooooooo! How could you! I won't accept it! If you make Inu betray Kagome with Kikyo im gonna die! PLEASE let my suspicions be wrong!

    Nice chappie! (mood swings much? o_O)
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  • From ANON - kayabachobabe on July 28, 2005
    Woohoo! Another update! Well, I must say, I'm on my toes to find about about this "last time" and "she" stuff. Good chapter! I feel sorry for the little kid, but then again, I would cry if I met Inuyasha too, probably for a different reason though. Heehee. The next chapter better be worth the wait! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - kayabachobabe on July 11, 2005
    Yay! New Chapter! Us fans aleways appreciate a fast update! Anyways, bravo on having a long chapter. And you asked for reviews on the lemon? Well here's my opinion: The lemon was...different. Normally, lemons on this site make the 'reader squirm' (heheheh), but this time, I felt, it was more for the story and the characters. I think you used it in the right way, since it was sooner than expected in the story, but If your gonna put some more lemons in here, they gotta be HOTTER! Heehee. Well thats just what I thought. I liked how you used it though! The whole chapter was fun! And one last thing to say: Curse you for the cliffhanger, and update soon. Bye! :D
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  • From ANON - KayabachoBabe on July 01, 2005
    Wow! Yay! Another chapter! Please leave the Point of View lines out. To many line codes can get confusing. Anyways, Im SUPER excited to find out what happens! Although, Im a little sad, this chapter moved too fast. It also seemed to be consecutive time. I thought we were going to swtich between the time him and Kikyou were dating, the time him and Kagome were dating, and the time him and Kogome were first meeting. I felt like in this chapter we should have switched between Inu and Kagome having a fight in the future and them first meeting. It would have been cool to see him chase after her and be all "I love you!!" and then read about him first putting the moves on her. You know? Well, thats just my opinion. Still an awesome story though! Dont make me wait too long for the next chapter! =D
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  • From ANON - Rachel1330 on June 30, 2005
    Great Job! I love the fact that its set in S.F. because I'm from there and I think its the best place in Cali. Keep updating and once agian great job.
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on June 30, 2005
    Problem? Short chapters.



    Likes? Setting, pace, and characters.



    conclusion? Awesome.
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  • From ANON - IHateKikyo00021 on June 27, 2005
    HAHA! This was funny! Id eat the whole damn cake too! YAY! I like it alot!
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  • From ANON - KayabachoBabe on June 27, 2005
    I must say, I like the time switches. Very enticing. Your writing style is better than most on this site. Good job. I applaude you.
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  • From ANON - ShoujoFreak on June 27, 2005
    Wow! Luuuv the style of writing. Sounds like this one is going to be good! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - bbbbbb on June 22, 2005
    Oh my, that s nice. I have been to SF a couple of times and it is one of my favourite cities. ^_^
    Hope to see you soon with a more developed chapter.bbbbbb
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