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By : sweetsatincocoa
  • From ANON - Kagome Hater on August 23, 2005
    Please kill kagome kill kil kil! she must die!
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  • From ANON - FireKitty on August 15, 2005
    YAAAAAAY!!!! YOU UPDATED!!! awesome chapter as usual!!! Keep up the great work and update soon^^
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  • From ANON - Anon. on August 15, 2005
    "Listen, child. First of all we are are coming back. Second of all, this Barbie Palace thing is a lie. Inuyasha saw no such thing."
    ...*giggles.* I love this story and I hate Kagome. Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Hotnspicyfox on July 17, 2005
    Until last night's episode, I would have said that your story was a bit harsh. But now all I can say is "holy crap, you're good."

    Kagome deserves every bit of this treatment after the way she's treated our beloved Inuyasha. Lucky he has Sesshomaru to treat him right.
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on July 14, 2005
    I'm glad to see you updated! And trust me. It's far from crap. It's quite excellent, actually. Very well written, few if any mistakes, a great plot, and wonderfully developed plotline, and Kag bashing. Life doesn't get much better than that, hon. *huggles you and offers lots of cookies*

    Keep up the amazing work. I'll be watching for more updates. ^_^

    **Zeph**
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  • From ANON - bob on July 14, 2005
    no your story isn't crap! i luv it please continue
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  • From ANON - Mamimi on July 13, 2005
    YAY!! i love this story so much im so glad you reposted!! any way my favorite parts of this chapter are the names sessho cally kagome and how inuyahsa don't care that kagome was taken cause they have the shards!!! i cant wate for your next update!!
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  • From ANON - FireKitty on July 13, 2005
    *punches air* Yesh!!! Another awesome chapter^___^ I love your deliciously dark writing style *grins* Cant wait to see what'll happen between Naraku and Sesshoumaru! Great work, and update soon^^
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  • From ANON - RedShadows on July 01, 2005
    Good story! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2005
    Wow. I'm not really a Sesshy/Inu fan but that fic was really good. I luv the Kagome bashing. I hope u keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - aray on June 29, 2005
    great
    how about kagome gets killed ang inu gets pregnant
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  • From ANON - bob on June 29, 2005
    I don't remeber ever reading a stroy where kagome was sexually abused...interesting i like it it almost gives you a reason to like her in this story....keyword almost but i luv this story please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on June 29, 2005
    Wow. Half the reason I was tempted to read this story was that disclaimer. I started reading and ended up reading straight through everything you have up. It's amazingly well written, and I must say...I love the Kagome bashing. No one likes the girl and I like how you give her her just desserts.

    Keep up the excellent work!

    **Zeph**
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  • From ANON - liana on June 29, 2005
    Curiosity got the better of me. Can't help it. I like to read.

    Quick question before I say anything else . . . did you happen to mean epitomize when you wrote eptiomize in Chapter One? I ask because I know I get pissed when I read over my work at a later time and no one's even pointed out my spelling errors or missing words.

    Okay, now that I've asked that . . . some critical yet little stuff then thoughts. That's just how I review.

    Um . . . Sango's tirade seems a little short . . . good . . . but short. -shrugs-

    Anyway . . . you used a word conjunction in place of a possessive . . . from chapter 2: It served it's purpose . . . it's should be its . . .

    Chapter 3 you misspelled poison and mewled (mewled looks like a funky version of jeweled), forgot the apostrophe in won't in one sentence . . . umm . . . let's see . . . you have human's loyalty for humans' loyalty . . . unless you mean one person in particular? The way I'm reading it, it sounds like he's testing both Sango and Kaede. Patient is misspelled . . .

    Your author's notes in Chapter Four are not at the top of the page but after about the second or third paragraph . . . quite a bit of an interruption in the story itself.

    And I'm not going to go over spelling mistakes anymore . . . I'm finding them . . . but they're not . . . numerous. Just a few things here and there, something you can find reading over.

    And I have a question, just out of curiosity . . . I know in the anime (which is how I follow Inuyasha) that Inuyasha does not have the poison claws (I buy the DVDs when I have the money and watch the show on Adult Swim -- I never watch eps online) . . . is that something that Sesshomaru teaches Inuyasha in your fic or is it something he inherently knows?

    Story's interesting . . . might want to have something in your A/N's or summary about the story being AU . . . before someone starts screaming about how certain things didn't happen in the anime . . . as some people are anal about things like that. Saves on headaches. Anyhoo . . . story is interesting. Very interesting.
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  • From ANON - ~Fluffy~ on June 28, 2005
    If you could please stop reposting what is already in the other chapters that would be great. You have great ideas just take your time writing out the chapter and you;l do fine. ^_^
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