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Reviews for Head Trauma

By : sweetsatincocoa
  • From ANON - sum 1 alive on June 28, 2005
    Thanks for updating this fast. I wonder what happened to Kagome. O well, update soon.
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  • From ANON - sum 1 alive on June 28, 2005
    hahahahaha, this is so funny, cocoa. First of all you had to rewrite your story, and second, you get all these crazy reviews concerning nothing of the story. But if you really want people to read it (and like it), you better start writing fast because no one is going to want to read chapters over and over again even if it is a little different. Update, fast, no FASTER. ANd may i suggest you don't take the crazy comment of *peoples* that personally.
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  • From ANON - C4PyroGirl on June 28, 2005
    Very nice, love the way you redid it, it adds a lot more to the story. Hope you continue soon. ^^v
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  • From ANON - bob on June 28, 2005
    hmmmmm...it's a little different than before but just as good if not better, continue please!
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  • From ANON - _miyakari on June 28, 2005
    I agree with the above reviewer.

    Now Kagome seems to have a little reasoning behind her madness. Makes me want to find out what the hell her father did.

    Also the snippets into her life before going to Feudal Japan add an extra level of depth to both her and the story. I can't wait to see the rest....noe can't wait. You're a damn good author....don't forget it.

    *sits and waits* Kisses.
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  • From ANON - ravenshadow on June 28, 2005
    Although I rarely write fanfiction I enjoy reading it a great deal. I enjoyed what you had given us the first time. It had a good plot; however the last two updates seemed to go in an entirely different direction from the start. This flows smoothly and the more detailed discriptions do create a darker imagry than the original. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2005
    hmm.keep on going

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  • From ANON - KLeigh on June 27, 2005
    You know, I am glad that you have continued this fic. Though I am a Kagome fan, I love seeing her as the badgirl as well. I think that you have done a good job with writing this fic, and am thrilled that you are going to continue. I can't wait to see what you have planned for her at the end. I really don't think she looks good with IY anyways, so him being with Sess is a bonus in my book. Please keep the chapters coming, and I will be reading.
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