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Reviews for Kore wa daisuki wo benkyoushimasu, ne?

By : SayuriNakamura

From ANON - kougalover123 on October 19, 2005
another great chapter please update again soon
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From ANON - Kage Otome on October 19, 2005
*Grins*I'm so glad that you updated, I can't wait to find out what happened to Kagome. Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Sel aka: SilkenOrgasm on September 28, 2005
O_O omg...inuyasha, what the hell are you thinking?

Wow, what a turn of events since my last review...I so can't wait for more, this keeps getting more interesting by the min.

Sel~
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From ANON - S on September 26, 2005
Too bad aff.net's review system doesn't support the use of Japanese characters. Here's a (blunt but not meant to insult) recap then:

Story title is still makes no grammatical sense.
Second chapter title is still grammatically incorrect. (I did read your Author's Note in chapter 9.)
Characters (and everyday people), do not all use "hai" to indicate agreement always. There are other ways as well used by the IY cast.
Kagome is not the type to add "desu yo" to the end of her sentences. That would not fit w/in her personality and characterization.

Take what you will from this as I'd like to respond to your chapter 9 comment to me.
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From ANON - S on September 26, 2005
Please understand that I have nothing against inserting untranslatable (or just difficult to translate) Japanese words or phrases into an English-based fanfic written for a series of Japanese origin. Examples in the IY world would include: Youkai, Saimyosho, their given names, etc.

It is your choice to insert mundane Japanese words in your fic, but please make sure that it is the correct usage and grammar. Otherwise, it can come off as inane and awkward for those who understand Japanese and are trying to go through your story. For instance, the story title is still incorrect (it makes no sense in Japanese). Also,�u� �Ȃ��͎��̗F�B�ł��H�vis the correct title for your second chapter instead of what it currently is. As for using �u�͂��v all the time, that wouldn�ft necessarily be the case since some characters (depending upon the situation), uses �u� � �v�A�u��v, �u��ˁv�A�u��ł��ˁv�Aetc. When I was speaking about �gWatashi wa yowaii jyanai desu yo!�h isn�ft Kagome�fs speech pattern, please understand that Kagome is not the type to add on �gdesu yo�h to the end of her sentences. In fact, if you understand this declaration to be spoken either privately (she�fs alone), or in front of Inuyasha (very common occurance), she�fll say it as �gWatashi wa yowaii jyanai!�h or �gWatashi wa yowaii jyanain desu!�h. The �gdesu yo�h affects her characterization, and that�fs why I�fm bringing it and the random insertion of Japanese up. Characterizations for the various characters can be affected if the wrong word choice is made, unless you�fre very sure of it.

Therefore my request, as a reader, is that if you are to mix the two languages up, please make sure that the words chosen are used correctly.

You may also choose to view this as a complaint, but I hope that you understand and accept it for what it is, which is constructive criticism.
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 24, 2005
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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From ANON - Kagome on September 23, 2005
I love this story. It has adventure,danger, and romance. I feel as if I was in the story. I can see how Kagome feels. It feels as if I'm in the stoy and I feel the saddness and happiness. It's like if I'm in the story. Write as soon as possible.
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 23, 2005
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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From ANON - Kage Otome on September 23, 2005
Inuyasha you stupid dolt! I love it! Good job! Can't wait for another update!
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From ryukotsusei on September 23, 2005
Ahhhhh evil evil cliffy!! But I like it a lot. I have a feeling that no matter what Inuyasha and Naraku have planned their schemes wont last for very long. Good chapter, update soon please.
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From ANON - Kamui on September 20, 2005
This story is very well written. I just have a hard time wanting to read through everything, since half the time Kagome is crying. I sometimes find myself just skipping paragraphs, because she cries in every chapter. But over-all, the story is quite captivating and thorough.
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From ANON - Shadowlof on September 18, 2005
Oh for Fucks sake please update this is like the perfect story A four way with Sesshomaru/Kagome/Kurama/Hiei it dosen't get in better!!!
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 18, 2005
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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From ANON - Kagome on September 18, 2005
I really like your story.I hope you can update as soon as you can.
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From ryukotsusei on September 17, 2005
Poor Kag's I can't imagine how this betrayel will hurt her when they find him again. good chapter, please update soon.
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