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Reviews for The Arrangement

By : BeautifulSilentDeath
  • From ANON - Love on December 26, 2005
    Bravo!!!!! Finaly the truth has come out, and we all learn the moral of the day. Well somehow I get the feeling Mr. Rodgers would not approve. This chapter was great!!! It was apsolutly perfect how Kagome came to find out. If only I could wake up to the sight of Inuyasha in just his boxers. Um yea, oh please more, more. Thank You for this great story and after it ends I will enjoy watching your other story develop as this one has. Peace
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  • From ANON - Rinseternalsoul on December 26, 2005
    The cat (or should I say 'dog'?) is out of the bag!!! Oh poor Sesshomaru! He should have told her when he had the chance. Poor Kagome! She must feel so embarrassed and horrible! I feel so bad for her (well, not that bad. She did get to play with a very very hot man). This chapter was such a build up for heartbreak! I can only wait impatiently for the next chapter. *Sigh* How ever will Sesshomaru convince her of his love? An erection isn't love! Or is it? Hmm...

    As for my early encouragement... I only spoke the truth. I spotted talent and recognized your potential. You have a great hentai mind. You deserve all the praise that you get. You work hard, go to school and take care of a family, all the while slinging out highly arousing chapters of delicious smut. That isn't something that just any woman can do! I'm proud of you!

    Rinseternalsoul
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2005
    gREAT NOW UPDATE DAMN IT TO HELL.
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  • From ANON - kogagirl05 on December 26, 2005
    OUCH!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I WANNA SEE WHAT SESSHOUMARU IS GOING TO DO NOW THAT KAGOME KNOWS WHO HE REALLY IS!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - lost child on December 26, 2005
    That was better than I ever thought it would be. They way they found out, geez I felt like I was going to cry that was done so well. Now...I just hope they get back together and all will be well. *gives two thumbs up* beautiful
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  • From SorceressFujin on December 26, 2005
    OO! THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER YET!!! Well, not for my favorites of the really kinky ones, but storyline wise, the best! MORE MORE MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - Michelle and Victoria on December 26, 2005
    WE BOTH LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THANK U VERY MUCH!!!!

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  • From ANON - kitkat on December 26, 2005
    OMG!! dats a big bomb... wow.. i'm shocked.. its a good chapter tho but still lots of things happened
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  • From ANON - TheSoulmater on December 25, 2005
    OMG! Poor sesshy! I loved the way in which she found out! It's just like soo sod's law, totally loved it! And nooooooooooooooo not the end! Me love this fic, but I am truly glad that you will start up in under deep again, I love that fic too!

    Holly

    XXX
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  • From ANON - ali69_foo on December 25, 2005
    omg...omg.....i cry .... poor kagome and sesshomaru.... i hope that everything is solved Y____Y

    i hope it updates soon, please

    thnx n_____n

    ja ne!!
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  • From ANON - Reiko Kashino on December 25, 2005
    Oh no! Poor Sesshomaru! I feel so sorry for him! But what was he expecting? For her to except the fact that he had been hiding from her for all this time with open arms. I think that you played out this scene very well...I just hope it all works out in the end. You're doing a great job. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Crimson Velvet on December 25, 2005
    OMG! Kagome kicked some ass! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - SilentDeath on December 24, 2005
    Hiro

    I really dont take insults badly. It takes a lot to really piss me off. If you left a review, I will honestly read it for what it is. Most authors do take offense to such, but I just try and read it and see from your point of veiw. I am a very brash person. I say what is on my mind. All I can say is...dont hate me for it. Most of the time, people find themselves not taking me so seriously. That is a good thing, if I was taken as such, I wouldnt have any friends. I find people value me for being honest and direct. There is never a reason to say you are sorry or explain yourself if you say what you have to say in a mature manner. You did. I did write it that way, because I put her in my shoes.

    Some have said they could never see the characters like this. In canon, no. I love AUs for that. I can keep them in somewhat charater and still have them OCC. Sesshoumaru isnt a demon. He is human. Kagome is much older and pisses and shits like the rest of us. She is also in a line of work where you have to bite or get bitten. That alone makes someone much different than what they were originaly made for. I, myself, am far from pooing any gold. I would like to make a magic laxative to do such. I also think if I did make such, I would be a very wealthy woman. I would be taking this pill everyday and over eating out the ass. LOL

    So, never feel like you have to fear writing something. If that were the case, I wouldnt be writing this story. Nor would I have started In Under Deep. I do ask reviewers to leave reviews. They do mean much to me. I like to hear if you like it or dont. Just dont be childish and write something stupid. I have no paitence for such. I am almost 28, have two kids, go to college, and work full time. I have no time for childish shit. Just be adults like you should be.

    Hell, my beta for In Under Deep knows how to trash me in a very mature way. LOL Hurts my pride like hell too. I am still writing, just try to get better. One day, I, Silent Death, will make her really happy. I am just hard headed like that. So, thank you for the great review! Keep them going. I will try and get a new chapter out next week.

    Thanks to all of you out there!

    Silent Death
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 24, 2005
    Ooh, cliffy! I can't wait to see if (how) Kagome reconsiders. . . keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Hiro on December 24, 2005
    In relation to the story:
    Damn, that was harsh. But, he deserved it... so be it!

    My thoughts:
    MY PERSONAL OPINION I DONT WANT TO START A REVIEW CONFLICT SO BACK OFF! (im sorry but some people find themselves insulted by other peoples opinions when they leave reviews so this was my warning) Men only understand strength and take compasion as weakness.

    To the author:
    Keep it up you did an exellent job and I hope to read another chapter soon.
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