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Reviews for Run

By : Aleke
  • From ANON - Vanessa on July 07, 2005
    No Problem. I see talent in you. Great lemons I must say *blush*. Keep writing. Great Job.
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on July 07, 2005
    No Problem. I see talent in you. Great lemons I must say *blush*. Keep writing. Great Job.
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  • From ANON - Ren on July 07, 2005
    Te ehee hee, and yes the update was soon enough for me, I was so EXCITED!!! I kept checking for updates for this story, te hee hee, I was wondering when Sesshoumaru will make a move on Rin...Tee hee hee, great chapter though. I really enjoyed it, lol, Sesshoumaru really did embarrass that stupid beauty, Kimiko. Geez it's women like her that makes me fume, because of women like her, men in my school berate for what I am and represents, saying you can't do it because YOU'RE A GIRL!?! A FIRL!?!?! Oh MY GOD was I angry!!! Grrr them, I hope their wife will beat them into a pulp for taht when I tell them, if I ever see tham again....tee hee hee, other than that, great update, and if you may, please, please, onegai, make the chapters a bit longer....thanks a lot besides taht though....tee hee hee, I'm so happy!!! YOU UPDATED!!! Wai wai, *jumps aroudn the room laughing and gigling like an idiot* matta ne, until the next update...rootin gor you!!!
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  • From ANON - Vanessa on July 06, 2005
    Nice Chapter. Hope you update fast.
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  • From ANON - Luna on July 06, 2005
    i love it, sesshomaru hates her ^^
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on July 06, 2005
    You have a real good start, I really like your plot. But, add space lines between your paragraphs and indivdual dialogues. It will be easier to read that way. And little more with description...yeah we all know how Sesshomaru and Rin usually acts, but maybe their different in your story...bring their characters out more..definitely Sesshomaru new mate.... I need to know more about her. (PLEASE DO NOT TAKE MY SUGGESTIONS AS A FLAME....I DID NOT MEAN IT TO BE THAT WAY!!!) I really like your story and I would love to read more of it. So, keep it coming....

    PS
    I usually love reading stories with long chapters, but if you feel that you can only pump out short chapters for right now...that okay...remember no one is pressuring you to do more than you're comfortable with......so until next time....keep on writing.
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  • From ANON - Ren on July 06, 2005
    I...think the story was...interesting...and hope you update soon.
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